*Lakshman Character/Actor AT #12*/ DT Nt pg 125/ 139 - Page 36

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_16

For those of you are interested, here's a snippet of what to expect in tonight's update.


<font color="#3300cc" size="4">Apology</font>
<font color="#ff3399" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">She
wasn't as tall as her cousins Mandvi or Shrutakirti. Urmila had round features
with big doe like eyes. Her eyes were mirror to her heart. And it was only
Lakshman who knew each and every expression that reflected in those impressive
eyes by heart till now. This room itself held so many memories for them. This
is where she waited for him during their wedding night, this is the room where
have made love for umpteenth time...it has witnessed Urmila in all her
moments, sometimes playful , other times lovely, seductive, naughty,
intelligent, child-like even vexed and annoyed. However, what it has never
witnessed was a cold,broken and impassive Urmila. Well as they say, there's a
first for everything sighed Lakshman. He
was about to take a step toward his wife but suddenly stopped in his stride
when he heard her speaking to him facing away, not bothering to turn around in
a rather aloof voice, "You should be with Jijashree and not here, just as I
should be with my Sita didi."</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">At
least she's speaking...thought an impassioned Lakshman... it could have been
worse with her shutting him out altogether! So he retaliated in the same way, "Then
what are you doing here?" Lakshman asked offhandedly. Yes, he wanted her to
speak, to talk to him...quarrel with him but what he wasn't prepared with was
her nonchalance and her reply to his snarky question was kind of a forceful
whiplash. "She doesn't need me anymore. She wants to be alone. It's really
funny if you think about it, that no one has ever needed me per se, neither my
parents, nor my siblings not even my husband!"</font>
<font color="#ff3399" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">


</font>
<font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#cc0066">hope u all will like the update... a big thanks to Tha..without her cooperation this wouldn't have been possible. The update will posted around midnight.</font>
<font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#cc0066">

</font>
<font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#cc0066">love</font>
<font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#cc0066">Riya</font>



Riya it's beautiful and emotional..
The line no one has ever needed me per se, neither my
parents, nor my siblings not even my husband! So emotional.. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shivam the length of your update man it's very long...kitne dino me in likha air mujhe pta nhi hai kitne din lagegein padhne mein...
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Posted: 9 years ago
But Ranju,do read his update,its awesome!
Rii its so good!I want it by midnight,i'll wait.



Btw,aaj humne Sage Valmiki naamak ek animated film dekhii!!
🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Shivam the length of your update man it's very long...kitne dino me in likha air mujhe pta nhi hai kitne din lagegein padhne mein...


Yeh Valmiki ka style hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_16

For those of you are interested, here's a snippet of what to expect in tonight's update.


Apology
She wasn't as tall as her cousins Mandvi or Shrutakirti. Urmila had round features with big doe like eyes. Her eyes were mirror to her heart. And it was only Lakshman who knew each and every expression that reflected in those impressive eyes by heart till now. This room itself held so many memories for them. This is where she waited for him during their wedding night, this is the room where have made love for umpteenth time...it has witnessed Urmila in all her moments, sometimes playful , other times lovely, seductive, naughty, intelligent, child-like even vexed and annoyed. However, what it has never witnessed was a cold,broken and impassive Urmila. Well as they say, there's a first for everything sighed Lakshman. He was about to take a step toward his wife but suddenly stopped in his stride when he heard her speaking to him facing away, not bothering to turn around in a rather aloof voice, "You should be with Jijashree and not here, just as I should be with my Sita didi."

At least she's speaking...thought an impassioned Lakshman... it could have been worse with her shutting him out altogether! So he retaliated in the same way, "Then what are you doing here?" Lakshman asked offhandedly. Yes, he wanted her to speak, to talk to him...quarrel with him but what he wasn't prepared with was her nonchalance and her reply to his snarky question was kind of a forceful whiplash. "She doesn't need me anymore. She wants to be alone. It's really funny if you think about it, that no one has ever needed me per se, neither my parents, nor my siblings not even my husband!"



hope u all will like the update... a big thanks to Tha..without her cooperation this wouldn't have been possible. The update will posted around midnight.


love
Riya




Is this an excerpt out of Sita's Sister?? I can almost see a play by play from there!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys I am planning a modern day LakshMila SS.Its a romantic thriller loosely based on The Count Of Monte Cristo.Is anyone interested??😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Meself




Is this an excerpt out of Sita's Sister?? I can almost see a play by play from there!


Hahaha...I don't know what to say, since you have always hated Kavita Kane's work.😆 . So I don't even know if it's a criticism or a complement.
Well no it's my work entirely.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Astoria

Guys I am planning a modern day LakshMila SS.Its a romantic thriller loosely based on The Count Of Monte Cristo.Is anyone interested??😃

wow...of course
Hum pratiksha karenge swami.😆
Edited by Riya_16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Note: Whatever work I have uploaded till date, good or bad, they have been my brainchildren. Not a single word or scene has been taken from anywhere else.
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Posted: 9 years ago
The update for tonight is more of an episode tag where Lakshman tries to apologize for pushing her away.

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