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Hai. This an ff on their married life in Ayodhya. It continues from the dil ka raastha. Ff.

After the Pratham rasoi ritual, Sita and her sisters retired to their rooms.
After a while all the sisters came to Sita chamber.
U: didi. Hum Sab ko Mann nahi lag Raha hai bhaite bhaite. Hum kahi Vihar karte hai chaliye .
S: nahi Urmila. Hum bina anumati liye kahi nahi ja sakte hai. Yaha kuch pratha honge. Hume un ko Manama chahiye.
M: didi. Hum bas kuch samay ke liye jakar aayenge.
Sk:ha didi. Chaliyena. Mujhe bhi Poorna mehal dekhana hai.
S: theek hai. Paranthu hum pehle. Anumati Lethe hai mataon se.
They all went to Kausalya chambers where they found Sumitra also.
They greeted the queens.
K: tum Sab yaha?kuch chahiye?
S: mata. Hum aap se anumati lene aaye. Aap aagna diya to hum mehal dekhana chahte hai.
K: avasya putri. Anumati ki Kya avaskta hai. Ab ye tum Sabh ka bhi ghar hai.
S: ji DHANYAVAAD.
All the four walked through the large rooms and grand corridors. After some time they reached the Royal gardens.
Sk: didi. Mai atyant thak Gaye Kuch samay vishram karte hai.
It is evening time. And they all sat in the royal garden admiring its grandeur..
M: kitna bada hai na yeh pusph vatika. ,!
U: ha didi aur kitna prakar ke Phool hai ,yaha!
S: bahut sundar hai.
Sk: didi. Aap me kuch dhvani suna?
U: ha is Disha me.
M: koi talvaar se ladh rahe hai.
U: hum bhi chalkar dekhtehai.
S: nahi. Kadachit Hume anumati nahi hai.
M: didi aapko gyath nahi abhi mata ne Kya kaha?
U: yeh ab humara bhi ghar hai. Hume koi Anumati nahi avasyak hai.
Sk: chaliye. Didi.

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Originally posted by: Bdaygirl


Hai. This an ff on their married life in Ayodhya. It continues from the dil ka raastha. Ff.

After the Pratham rasoi ritual, Sita and her sisters retired to their rooms.
After a while all the sisters came to Sita chamber.
U: didi. Hum Sab ko Mann nahi lag Raha hai bhaite bhaite. Hum kahi Vihar karte hai chaliye


Hi !!!!
Plzzz continue 😃
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Part 2.
Sita along with her sisters followed the sound and reached a open ground where many soldiers are positioned in order for their practice.
Sk: kitna Vishaal sena hai?
M: hu ati Mithila me itna Sean nahi hai!
U: ha didi. Kahi hum bhool se yudh bhoomi me to nahi aagayana?
"Nahi". Said a voice. And they all turned to see Lakshman with a sword in his hand.
S:devarji skhma kijiye. Hum ko yaha nahi aana chahiye! Hum prasthan karte hai.
L: nahi bhabhi. Aayiye Aap sab bhi
They all followed Lakshman in to a stadium wher ram and his brothers are practising with soldiers. .
R: Sita aap yaha. .?
S: skhama kijiye. Hume Bina animati Nagi Amana chahiye.
B: bhabhi. Aap ko animations ki koi avasyakta nahi hai.
R: ji. Hum her din yaha abhyaas karte hai. .
Sh: aap Sab virajiye aur dehkiye.
L: ha bhabhi. Virajiye.

Sita along with her sisters sat to watch their practice .
Ram and Bharat are fighting with some soldiers.
U: Jijasri kitna acha yudh karta hai na?
M: ve tho Sab se bada Yodha hai! Is Karan ve Tadaka ka Vadh kiya hai.
Sk: hum Neto Aaj tak sunahai unko veerta ke bare mai. Aaj to dekh bhi liya.
S: yudh tho Kaikeyi Nandan bhi acha karte hai! Dekho.
L: ji bhabhi. Bharat bhaiyya bhi bahut bada yodha hai.
U: ji aap abhayas nahi karte ?
L: kyu. Aap karenge mera sath dwandh!šŸ˜‰
U: ji Hume koi dilchaspi nahi aap ko Harane mai?
L: hum tho pehle hi haargaye aap se!
She blushed looking at him.
Sh: Pranam bhabhi.
S: pranam.
Sh: aap Sab ko yaha dekhkar hum atyant prasann hai. (Looking at his smiling wife)
M: chote Sumitra Nandan, aap ke hatho me tho rakht behraha hai!
Sk: Kya. Kya hua aap ko. . (Asked with concern)
Sh: kuch nahi. Bas chota sa ghav hai.
L: hum to yoddha hai. Ghav to humane sahas ka nishan hai. Chinta na Kare.
Sh: ji ye sadharan ghav hai . Chinta na kijiye ( assuring his wife)
Ram and Bharat started duel with sword.
L: dekhiye bhabhi ram avem Bharat bhaiyya dwandh kar rahe hai.
They are fighting vigorously for a long time.
U : ye dona lab se lady rahe hai . Paranthu koi parinaam nahi aaya ki Kaun vijay Huey?
M: kadachit dono haarna nahi chahte hai.
S: nahi dono jeetna nahi chahte ek doosre se.
Ram saw Sita and stopped and so Bharat.
R:aap kab aaye?hume gyath nahi hua?
S: hum to aapko dwndh dekh rahe hai.
B: Pranam bhabhi.
S: Kaikeyi Nandan aap ache yudh karlete hai !
U: aap dono me Karun vijay Huey?
L: koi nahi.
Sh: Bharat bhaiyya ram bhaiyya ko jeetna nahi chahte hai. . Avem ram bhaiyya Bharat bhaiyya ko harana nahi chahte. I ka dwand to chalta hi Raheja binakoi parinaam.
R: mere thino bhaiye Sab shrest yodha hai.
S: Satya kaha aap ne Raghu Nandan.

R: Sita.,
S: ji kahiye.
R: vivaah ke paschath nayi varvadhu ko surya Dev ki darshan karna hai. Hum Sab ko Jana hai. Hum kal prathahkaal prasthan Karan hai. Marg lambha hai. Van se Jana hai.
S: ji avasya

Aap sab aaj Vishram Kijiye .

Sita left with her sisters. They all slept that night peacefully hoping a safe and memorable journey the next day.
To be contd...
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Its awesome ... 😊 plz continue soon
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Pls pls update soon dear and ur work is awesome i really want them to go to do some darshan in show also šŸ‘ 😳
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Loved it.
Do continue plz😊
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PART 3
After taking blessings from their parents ,Atal the four new couples left for surya mandir along with a thousand soldiers.
Sita and Urmila sat in one palanquin while mandavi and shruthkirti in another. All the princes mounted on their horses sorrunding the two palanquins for safety while the soldiers marched ahead and behind.
After a half day journey, they halted for awhile for rest.
The maids started cooking food for the princes.
U: didi. Aur kitna samay hai mandir pahuncne me. Mai thank gayi bhaite bhaite.
S: Mujhe bhi gyath nahi paranthu lambi yatra hai avem itne sare sainik bhi hai.dheere Jana hoga. Sab ko visharam bhi chahiye na. Deeraj rakho Urmila.
U: paranthu didi. Itna sena ki Kya avsyktha hai?charo Rajkumar Haina hum are sath!
L: ji hai. Kadachit pita ji ka aagaya hai.
R:Ye van hai. Is Karan atyant savadhan rehna hai.
U: Jijasri aur kitna samay lagega mandir Jane me?
R:ji ek din lagega. Sandhya samay hum Sab ko vishram karke suryoday ke baad yatra karenge.
After having food the journey started again and by evening reached Sarayu.
They all got of their palanquins.
Hum rathri yahi vyatit karenge aur suryoday ke paschath chalenge.
Temporary tents are laid for the prince and princesses.
After food they all retired to their respective rooms.
S: ye van kitna sundar hai. Iccha hai yahi raho sadiv.
U:aap van me kyu rahe get didi. Aap Ayodhya ki hone wali maharani hai ! Aap tho Mehal me rahenge Jijasri ke sath.
Sita remembered the fortune teller saying about her vanvas after marriage. Bhavishy me Kya hoga Hume Pata nahi hai Urmila. Said Sita. Then
Mandavi and Sk entered their tent.
S:ab tak soye nahi?
M: nahi didi. Aap se bath Karne ka avsar hi mila subhah se. Is liye aap ke pas aayi.
Sk: didi. Is van me bhi soneki mrigh honge?
S: avasya honge.
M: hum bhi jakar dekhte hai na didi.
U:kyu rakshasi. Gyath nahi Mithila me Kya hua tha. Tum ko Sita didi be bachaya.
M: ha ha. Gyath hai.
S: hum bina anumati nahi jasakte hai. Kadachit rathri bhi hogaye.
Ram along with his brothers came to them.
R: aap sab vishram kijiye. Hum prathahkaal prasthan karenge.
S: ji. Aap bhi vishram kijiye.
R: ji mai bias sainiko ko dekhkar aata hoon.
As ram left Urmila asked Bharat
U: aap Sab pehle aaye the yaha?
B: ji. Hum aaye the yaha darshan ke liye.
M: ye Kaun sa nadi hai?
B: ji Sarayu hai.
S: hum ne bhi suna saruyu ke bare me Aaj darshan bhi karliya.
Sk: ji yaha koi nahi reh ta hai?
Sh: ji ye van hai keval vantage prani rehte hai yaha avem kuch rakshas bhi hai. 😃
U: humare sath pehle se hi ek rakshasi hai. Anya ka Hume avasyakta nahi!."...šŸ˜‰
B: ji. Kya kaha. Rakshasi? Aur yaha?
U: ha chote Jijasri. Aap ki samne hi hai!
M: Urmila. Tum punah Hume rakshasi kaha. Hum. To tum ko chodenge nahi .
Urmila ran to Sita and stood behind her.
S: Lado math tum dono.
B:( amused). Kya aap apni behen ko rakshasi bhulate hai. .
U: haan ye sadiv hum se jagadte rahti hai bachpan se. Aap sat ark rahiye is se. ,
M: didi dekhiye ye Kya Bol rahi hai.?😭s
S: mandavi ve parihas karta hi hai. Tum udaas math ho.
Sk: ji Kya yaha bhi sone ka Mrigh hota hai?
Sh: Kya sone ka mrigh?
M: ha ha Mithila me hum Sab deka!
B:paranthu hum ne kabhi suna nahi aisle mrigh ke bare mai?
S: ji sone ka mrigh hota hai. Hum ne dekha ek baar van me.
Ram and Lakshman entered in the tent.
R: aap soya nahi aab tak?
S: ji hum devarji se vaarthalap kar rahe the. Aap visraam kijiye. Hum bhi so jaye hai.
The princes greeted their wives and went to their tents.
In morning all the princes went for suryanamaskar while Sita got ready and went to her sisters.
S: tum Sab tayaar Ho?
U: ji didi. Hum tayaar hai.
S: Dashrath Kumar aate hi honge.
Sk: didi hum van me jakar mrigh ko dekh te hai.
U: ha didi. Ayodhya me bhi sone mrigh hotehai na
M: hum rajkumarian ko bhi dikha te hai?
S: nahi. Kadachit nahi. Ye van hai. Kahi tarah ki apay hote hai. Hum kahi nahi jaa rahe hai. ,
U:paranthu didi...
S: Urmila ye mera adesh hai. Hum kuch samay baad mandir ke liye prasthan karte hai.bas.
All the four couples left for mandir. After darshan they started their journey again.
After halfday journey they reached Sarayu and halted there for rest.
R: aab hum yaha vishram karke kal prathahkaal Ayodhya ke liye prasthan karte hai.

After seeing all the arangements ram went to his tent. He found Sita sitting near Sarayu immersed in deep thoughts.
R: Sita. Aap yaha.?
S: ji Dashrath Nandan mai bas is vishal nadi ko dekh rahi hoon. Atyant sundar hai.
R: aap kuch udaas lag rahi hai Sita. Kya hua?
S: ji bas mitila avem pitaji ki yaad aayi.
R: unko bhi aap Sab ki yaad aati honge?
S: ha. Kadachit aap yaha?
R: ji aap ko yaha dekhkar aaya tha. Yaha akele Rachna surakshit nahi hai.
S: aap hai na mere sath. Mujhe koi bhay nahi. She said looking at him.
R: smiling. Kadachit ye van hai. Rathri bhi. Chaliye.
S: Kya yaha bhi sone ka mrigh hote hai?
R: ji. Gyath nahi. Mai ne kabhi nahi dekha.
S: Mithila me hai. Mai har roj unko dekna jata tha.
R: aap ko ve Mrigh pasand hai.
S: ha atyant.
R: to jab sone ko mrigh dikhega mai avasya aap ke paas lekar aaunga.
S: satya.
R: Han Satya. Ye vachan hai ram ka.
They all retired to their tents for sleeping.
To be contd ...

Edited by Bdaygirl - 9 years ago

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