Lakshman AT #7 - The Fierce Prince of Ayodhya - Page 93

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi girls started a FF on Karan and Yukthi
Please do read and give me feed back.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..sahana..


Yes i feel connected with them too. And every time i read something about them my hurt goes all weak. I have a very soft corner for them.


Exactly , Urmila and Lakshman hav always been my fav ever since I read Hindi non-detailed in ma 6th grade . It was Ramayan . And frankly , With yrs my Love grew more . And its in its peak after joining this AT and started watching Yukti n Karan enacting lakshmila

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

hi girls started a FF on Karan and Yukthi

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I am running ! ...ThnkU so much for making it so fast Jaya 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

hi girls started a FF on Karan and Yukthi

Please do read and give me feed back.
thank you all



Will definitely give it a read...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok ladies time for my bed time. .. goodnight. 😊
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Originally posted by: ..sahana..

Ok ladies time for my bed time. .. goodnight. 😊


Gud nyt Sahana 😳
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Hey shivam just read you update of the four..
It's superb..love it..
Totally enjoying...
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Gud nyt ...Only for Sahana !

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You are a brilliant writer and I love your Hindi Shivam .

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Book : Game of life - The shattered dreams

Scene : Lakshman gets News of Rama's Exile


No sooner than Rama stepped out of the threshold of Keikeyi's room, He saw a fireball making its way to burn everyone and everything on its path. Fists clenched, teeth gritting and eyes flashing intense hate, Lakshmana was pacing furiously neither able to enter the room because of respect toward the king, nor able to resist entering to express solidarity with his beloved and wronged brother. Understanding Lakshmana's predicament, Rama chose not to speak to him at all and just walked past him. Lakshmana felt as if a cool ocean had swept past him. When a burning log of wood falls into the cool ocean, it is swept away by the ocean currents without causing any harm. Soon realizing that Rama was no longer around, Lakshmana rushed toward Him with the umbrella and whisk.

There was no smiling Sita and Lakshmana beside him. Lakshmana was in fact behind Him and definitely not smiling. Rama had not dared to see his face, but knew exactly what the expression would be. Not wanting to allow Lakshmana to react, He had not spoken to him since walking out of Keikeyi's palace.

"Did the king personally tell You to leave Ayodhya and go to the forest?" asked Kaushalya, well aware of the answer. "No," said Rama, realizing the direction this discussion was headed. "If the king did not tell You directly, how is it the king's instruction?" Kaushalya wanted to know. "I am not following any instruction; I am just doing My duty. To rescue a person from drowning,
one does not wait for instructions; one's just helps." Rama's reply silenced Kaushalya. Though these words silenced Kaushalya, these fell like heavy bricks into Lakshmana's shallow cup of tolerance, forcing angry words to spill out of his thus-far silent mouth. Kaushalya's tears merely added fuel to a raging fire. Lakshmana breathed fire and spewed: "How can a king surrender his mind to a vile woman? The command of an unsteady king whose sense of judgment is governed by lust for a beautiful woman should not be followed. Trust cannot be placed on innocent children and incapacitated oldies. The king has become senile. Finding fault in Rama is like trying to find a bitter neem twig on a sweet mango tree. Even Rama's enemies cannot find a fault in him. In 25 years, I have not heard a single person even indirectly speak ill of Rama. That being the situation, what treason or act of immorality did Rama commit to be evicted from the kingdom this way? Today, at the gates of Ayodhya will stand the mighty Lakshmana. Let me see who dares send Rama away from His rights. History has seen that injustice is never dealt appropriately through mere politeness.

Rama, your politeness will not work here. Let me use my strength to fight this injustice." Realizing that His brother's overprotectiveness had resulted in disrespect for his father and mother, Rama clarified His stance. He said: "My mind cannot deviate from the path of dharma or righteousness just like the honey bee cannot be deviated from its path to nectar. Lakshmana, you claim to be strong, but let Me tell you, I am not strong enough to go against the wishes of My father. For a son, going against his father does not depict strength but weakness of character. The highest dharma or duty of a son is to obediently follow his father's orders.

He continued to counsel Lakshmana, "My dear brother, don't you realize that Our father needs Us now more than any other time in the past? Instead of increasing his burden, We should plan to release him from the miserable state he is in. I cannot even imagine acting in a way that would be disagreeable to My father or mother. Our behavior should not add to the anxiety of our already anxious parents. Birds are born totally dependent on their parents, but once they develop wings, they should relieve them of the burden of their maintenance by taking care of themselves. Are we worse than birds that we cannot relieve our parents' burden? Right now Our father's anxiety is that I may not obey his words. And mother Keikeyi's anxiety is how soon I will leave so that she can focus on Bharata's coronation. The expected action from you as an obedient son is to immediately get tree barks for Me to wear and once I am gone you should focus on Bharat's coronation and use all those things that you accumulated for My coronation."

Still seeing lack of conviction and pain in Lakshmana's eyes, Rama took the philosophical approach. "My angry brother! Don't you see the hands of destiny working out a divine plan? If not, how can one explain the fact that Keikeyi who loved Me more than she did Bharata till the day before, change so drastically? When something is beyond Our reasoning, it is called divine ordinance or destiny. The kingdom that has been offered to me by destiny has been reclaimed by it, why should I argue against it? The king has never committed a mistake thus far nor has he committed one now, it is my destiny that has spoken through him."

"Sometimes the most meticulous of plans fail miserably, and at other times, things work out perfectly even though completely unplanned. How do We explain such occurrences unless destiny is at play? One must learn to develop a deeper philosophical outlook to events that happen in life keeping personal agendas aside and allowing divine will to prevail unobstructed. This is the only way to change Our sorrows into joys."

Lakshmana shrugged off Rama's hands and walked away from Him, seething. "To hell with destiny! I knew that You would sermonize this as the hand of fate. But not fighting fate is the philosophy of the weak. The mighty create their own destinies and carve their own futures. My arrows are not just ornaments to decorate my shoulders, they can sting my enemies to death." "Just stand by my side Rama, and I will take care of everything with these mighty arms. Let us act before everyone in Ayodhya becomes aware of Keikeyi's evil strategy. Even if it means making Ayodhya desolate, I will place you on the throne. If Bharata comes my way, he will learn a cruel lesson in warfare. Instigated by the witch, if Our father becomes a hurdle on my path, I will imprison him and if necessary kill him. Hear O world, for the sake of serving Rama, Lakshmana is willing to enter the fire smilingly."



Edited by shivam030291 - 9 years ago

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