Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Wow :)

Amazing story :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

Update soon :)

PM me :)

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

awesome writing. nice update. loved to the core. good exchange of words.

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Riya

@Riya_16

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: diksha0102
Beautifully written 😊
Waiting for you to continue.

Thank you Diksha...I will hopefully update by tomorrow...do keep reading.😊

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radianteyes.

@radianteyes.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Rita I just read the first part and one thing that comes to my mind is superb
You have a beautiful flow in writing and that keeps the readers gripped .
Will read the 2nd part soon

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Hey Riya

sorry ya i am late i just read now read the update😃

its amazing😃

continue soon😃

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Ohh my Goddd ! This is so sooo Beautiful.
I read Sita's Sister , but still reading this feels like I never knw something like rejection . I felt the pain all over again . I could feel the turmoil of emotions Lakshman was going through.
And OMG , Like really ..Fallen short of words . There can never be anything beautiful than this .
She was hurt , he healed her pain . She promised him , he promises her back . You wrote it so beautifully . I am getting more and more fascinated towards Lakshmila .
And their sweet nothings ❤️ It can only be LakshMila .
I would love to read more . With this I can write it on a piece of stamp pamper that you know magic and using it in your writings . You are Fab Darling 🤗

P.S- So Ranju n Swati were awake till late night to read this . I wonder did they go to sleep after reading sucha Fabulous Post 😉 . I would love to read what all Lakshman dreams about😆

Love,
Sruthi

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alisha

@asmitag

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Kaash tum SKR ki script writer hoti then bahut awesome scenes milte Lakshmila ka this just fab 👍🏼

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hey riya..
Sorry I got to sleep before reading it..
It's amazing awesome superb...
Marvelous work dear...
Lakshman search for her..Lakshman solace..urmilla's angry..Each and every thing is brilliant..
Lakshman calling her Mila and her angry..then his confession... 👏 👏 😳
Their sweet little talks after confession
Love it ..
Beautifully penned..
Waiting for more work..
😃

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

This is so amazing, Riya :) I loved the emotions of Lakshman and Urmila. You have done such a fantastic job with the portrayal. This is what we all wanted in the show as well.

Please do update soon :)