Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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-ladyninja-

@-ladyninja-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Ri🤗
for more than 3/4ths of the update i was just smiling like a maniac reading every sentence and words of ur story..seriously i know i sound weird na😆
firstly they both kissed each other*faints*😳
and he carrying her up*blushes*😳
but after that this started----->😭😭
it was just a dream?!
haaawww so bad
i was waiting for something else😕
that was too emotinal yaar..
but a fabulous update😎
girl see i know how much it would take to write a story n post it by typing which is a laborious task..but thanks for updating soon😳
and see if u res my comment thats it..better post a reply to me😆😆😉😉

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Wonderful Post dear

The last Paragraph when Ram calls out lakshman and he realises that its been 13 yrs since separation , that actually made me cry.

Great work dear , keep it up

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Oh my god... You actually brought years to my eyes by the end of this os.
It was extremely beautiful that you left me speechless and I didn't knew what to comment.
I thought this was a romantic os on lakshmila but it turned out to be so emotional as well.
All I can say is thank you for this wonderful piece and you just keep on raising your standards and my expectations.

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Riiiyaa it was worth my wait The first scene itself,both of them in their bed,Lakshman's thoughts,how he adores her and then he wakes up her,they both go for a horse ride(uss time ki long drive),the sweet and simple kiss!!!☺️

Everything was phenomenol!👏

Idk whom i love more,the innocent Mila,the witty one,the passionate one or the strong one...!!??🤗

You're my favourite writer in fictions!!

Saprem,

Mili

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Riya My darling ...Hugs* 🤗
As soon as I saw your update , I brought my laptop and managed to sit in some quite corner of the house so that no one catches me blushing 😉
I cant tell you , How happy I am reading this . This is what exactly I wanted , I know how much it takes , you gotto imagine , think , understand their emotions , Become one of them , then write dialogues and then put it here . 👏 Bravo girl ! This is more beautiful than what I imagined .😳

How happy they were , I was having a pleasant feeling in my heart reading every sentence , a relief kind of thing . How lakshman explains the changes that took place in the 1 month post their marriage , His LOVE for his wife . He talks about their silly fights bt concludes that it was making up for those fights that made their relation more beautiful . They were leaving a blessed life.
Uff Mila being a seductive wife ☺️😆 (Hides my face) I loved it how he tries to be a gentleman even after 200% efforts of Mila to distract him . Thorough gentle man he is 😳 , such beautiful scenes you wrote . And that dialogue "Mila! I wanted to share my past with you since agreed to share your present and future with me...tell me did I do anything wrong?"👏 Totally loved it . What an excellent writer you are Riya . BOW DOWN ! 👍🏼
I loved Mila's one aswell
But all she ever wanted was to be with him. How natural , any newly married wife would wish this . Mila wanted only this inspite being a princess she was never ambitious .
And it was all his dream . That pain you described . Can you believe I had tears . I was rubbing my eyes aswell when he was doing it . I am very emotional person , bt I guess those who are emotionally strong we also end up having tears brimming in their eyes after reading your update .
14 years , he was away from his wife , newly married , That too he loved his wife more than anything . What must he have gone through those years . What must Urmila have gone through . OMG ! In Love with your writing Riya , very few ppl have the capability to make their readers go through all the emotions that their characters are going through and undoubtedly you are one of them . I am proud of you Girl❤️

Keep writing and keep us falling in Love with your writing and Lakshmila 😉

Love,
Sruthi

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Riya_16
A BIG shout out to Sru and Ranju for suggesting this prompt.
You GIRLS rock🥳😎

Awww ! Thankyou so much for writing it 😳
I guess , No I am sure the only girl deserving all applause here is RIYA 👏
Ri ROCKS ! ...😎👍🏼

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emina

@emina

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Riya I don't know what to say. don't know from where to begin. you are a brilliant writer. Extremely gifted👏. I have enjoyed every single line of all your updates. eagerly waiting for more.

In future do consider writing a book coz I know you can do it. Plus you already have readers here😊

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Wow :)

Awesome OS :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Riya, this is just out of the world. You've done a fantastic job with depicting the love and passion that LakshMila represent. And you're cameo of Ram was amazing too. The fact that he finally realised Lakshman's troubles, and his guilt at not knowing it. I loved it :) Do keep updating :)

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-ladyninja-

@-ladyninja-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Riya_16

Updated.😃
Thank you so much for liking the update and commenting Paro...😳

I know you all are busy and it takes a lot of effort to do comment. Thank you once again.

Dekho kitna colourful reply diya maine😆

welcome sweets😳 yeah i watch vamp diaries😳