Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: -ladyninja-

welcome sweets😳 yeah i watch vamp diaries😳

Which season are you watching...mai to heretics , witches aur vamps ke beech ulajh kar reh gayi😆

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Annei123
Amazing OS !!!!
You r amazing writer 😛
Plzzz keep writing more ... 😃

Thank you so much Annei...I am glad that you have liked the update...keep reading.

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

hey Riya
very emotional update
really can Visualize everything😊
I agree with Paro

the last few words"ALWAYS" wow i got reminded of bella and edward from twilight where they say in the last part "forever"😭😭 so you are an Edward Bella fan👏👏.
Mee too i am a big fan of Edward and Bella😃
Paro thanks for taking their name

i should really get back to write my ff and update it
i am so lazy

once again its a fabulous update Riya🤗

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

You make me cry riya...
😭
Their sweet little talks..
Lakshman looking at her sleeping wife..
That scene where he picks her up.
About removing payal and her reply..
Then his tears...
His wait to see her face ...
He thought never leaving her after vanvaas..
The forever line awesome...
Everything is amazing riya...
Superb job dear...
Love it... 👏

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Priya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Riyaaa...can I hug you?😳

The last one is the best of the lot...it's so p.e.r.f.e.c.t ⭐️

You know I have read it around at least 4 times by now...the first time breathlessly...then savouring every word...

The passion...the kiss...😳 ...you are such a lifesaver for a Laxmila deprived soul..😳😆

The romance and the poignant ending...how seamlessly you managed merge the two...👏

You are super talented ⭐️...seriously consider publishing girl.

May this Laxmila craze get stronger 😉😆 ...we sure will get more awesome stuff😳

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Agaim i m speechless...

U r amazing writer..

In staeting u have beautifully expressed their love but at end u have expressed his pain..and that wqs the part i like the most...

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VYGA

@VYGA89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Beautiful, Awesome , Wonderful.
Each and every part is brilliant..
Loved it..
I love lakshmila and Waiting to read more Lakshmila from you.

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Riya, riya, riya u nailed it 👏..

Day by day m being die hard fan of u. U turned it in a dream sequence, which brought tears in my eyes. U r a fabulous writer, I will always be waiting for ur book to be published..

Romance queen riya, kudos to you

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mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

One more prompt came in my mind 😆.

Write something abt after exile period. How he waited to meet her bt couldn't as he ws bsy in coronation of ram, how he just wanted to leave all the ritual, how did they met finally in chamber, their sweet talks, lil bit urmi's pain.

Plz plz plz,

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra
One more prompt came in my mind 😆.
Write something abt after exile period. How he waited to meet her bt couldn't as he ws bsy in coronation of ram, how he just wanted to leave all the ritual, how did they met finally in chamber, their sweet talks, lil bit urmi's pain.

Plz plz plz,

Noted...Swati...a lot of people are asking me to write about the post exile period...so will definitely try to write this prompt.