Ishq hai vo ehsaas..:.. A lakshmila Story cmpltd on pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
fantastic Zubi dear😃
loved reading it😳
do come up with another soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
amazing update! do write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
superb...lakshmila😉...and atlast our siyaram were too naughty😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Aww I just read the full story and it was cuteness and adoration at its peak.
Do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome Zuby ! Beautifully written ...
Want more of it ...Atleast let us knw what happens whnRam and Sita leave them behind all alone in the room 😳 ...Write more of it dear ...Love reading it !

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
aww man this superb...😳
sira rocked n lakshmila shocked at their state./...😆😆😉
laksh making her wear the payal...😳😳😳
gr8 one...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

hello peeps though i have finished the story day before yesterday

but i got some more ideas ... 😳😆 my gutter mind

please bear with me again and this is surely be the last part

annnddd yeah this is speacially for SHRUTI (DILMERESUNTANAHI)

LAST PART


As soon they ram and sita left the room... lakshman cornered urmila againhe moved back as he came closer towards her blocking her way

To rajkumari kaisi lagi aapko bhaiya bhabhi ki ye yojana "he said making her blush"

U- Aapne bataya nahi hume ke aapko ajkal nidra nahi aa rahi hai" she asked awkwardly looking at him out of the corner of her eyes

L-Achha... hume ye apekshit nahi thha aapse he said giving her a fake anger expression

U-Humne kya kiya

L-ab jo nidra na aane ka kaaran swayam ho use swateh hi na gyat ho,,, ye to galat hai na

he placed his palms on both sides of her, empowering her , locking her in between wall and his own body. His stares began to get stronger, the bubbles had started to start up in the pit of their stomach... the closeness was driving lakshman to no heed. , making her shudder and at that moment she felt what was happening, lowering her eyes and she mentally hit her head to lose herself in his magnificent eyes.

lakshman closed his eyes too to hold up his desire, parting himself from her ... he made space, and turned his back at her, moving a hand over his hair, he calmed his inner soul. On the other hand, she bit her lips and calm herself and tried her best not to blush.

When suddenly she heard her mother's voice right in her ears calling for her.

She started to walk to doors, when he shook his head and get hold of her hand again

U- kya kar rahe hain aap ma aa rahi hain

L- achha ye teekhi mirchi bhaybheet bhi hoti hain

U- hume jaane dijiye agar ma ne hume aise dekh liya to kya sochengi

L- yahi ke unki chhoti beti unke hath se nikal gayi hai

She was trying hard to get rid of his hold but he was adamant to not release her hand so easily lakshman half carried her to the door when he heard the sound of footsteps coming towards them

Urmila stood frozen infront of her mother, trying to get rid of her wrist which is held by his strong hand

U- ma ... kya hua

Su- urmila mai kab se tumhein khoj rahi thhi ,,, tum yahan akeli kya kar rahi ho, chalo sita k liye aabhushano ka chayan karna hai


While sunaina was talking to her urmila looked at lakshman behind the door with helpless expressions pleading him to release her hand and he was having a hard time holding his laughter at her cute expressions


U- haan... ma aap chaliye mai abhi aati hu

Su- theek hai jaldi aana


As soon sunaina left the room urmila released her hand with a jerk and ran away saying


Utpati kahin ke'


Urmila ran away giggling at him


Lakshman was amazed at her teasing word he leaned against the wall


as with each step she took his breath away...


finally the enddd😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awww Zuby thanks a ton for this part 🤗
It is too good ...fallen in love with it all over again.☺️
Pls dont end ...COntinue it ...
You can start a new series starting from their marriage 😳
Pls do that dear ...

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
hey zuby it was so damn gud man!!!!!!!😳😳😳
kiddu update
haye lakshman n urmi...☺️☺️
pls pls continue yaar...don't end it pls...😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Amazing update !!!!
Loved LakshMila 😳
Plzzz do it end it ... Do write more 😛

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