Ishq hai vo ehsaas..:.. A lakshmila Story cmpltd on pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆...Dream sequence.
Bt vry well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Very Romantic note. But bt It was just her dream😆 Nice twist !
Update soon !

Love,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
god this was superb yaar...👏👏👏
dream urmi...😉😉
haan we can't get these scenes in show though but gr8 attempt...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb👏...such a beautiful sequence😉...was a dream😆 not fair yaar...don't be unfair with our lakshmila😉...continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your story is SUPER AWESOME...👏
Plzzz continue soon...😃
And if possible PM me ur nxt updates...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was Damn romantic but last line huh dream..
But enjoy dream sequence..
Lovely update dear..
Love it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its not fair ...dream sequence... Hayee...write more dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's amazing :)
I love the way you have described both Lakshman and Urmila's feelings. Do update soon :)
Edited by TwinMadness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 4

urmilaaa
she woke up horified looking at her sisters besides her
U- aap log,,, mai yahan kaise aa gayi
M- tumhara sapno ka rajkumar tumhe ashva pe baitha kar yahan chhodekar gaya hai
U- kyaaa... (shocked)


looking at her horrified state mandavi and shrutkirti burst out laughing...
but sita smilied as she knew that her sister must be dreaming about her prince charming


M- kya kya,,, tumhe ho kya gaya hai, ye konsa samay hai sone ka chalo uthho kitni saari vyavasthha karni hai hume didi ke vivaah k liye

U- pata nahi kab aankh lag gayi smaran hi nahi raha (she said nervously)

M- didi dekh rahi hain aap,,, vivaah aapka ho raha hai or sudh budh urmila kho baithi hai,,, kahin ye dahsrath nandan ke anuj ke karan to nahi ho raha na

U- kya,,,, ( she said in a shocking tone) aisa kuchh nahi hai rakshasi..

mandavi runs behind urmila,,,they were running behind each other, teasing and laughing when sunaina informed them that dashrath has arrived in mithila and soon coming to the palace,,, so she instructed all the three sisters to get sita ready.

There lakshman was lost in his thoughts,,, mujhe unhe ye deke aana hi hoga...kisine ise mere pas dekh liya to tarah tarah ki baatein hongi rajkumari ke bare me...He hurriedly left for the palace

In palace They all gets sita ready when mandavi noticed urmila's feets.

M- tumhari dusri payal kahan hai urmila, vo to tumhein bahot priye thhi na

U- initially she was shocked as she thought it was a dream, but one of her anklet is actually missing a flush crept up her face

Sita consoles urmila saying perhaps it would have fallen in the room when they were running behind each other" tum udas kyu ho rahi ho, yahin kahin gir gayi hogi chalo sab milke dhoodte hain" she said placing her hands on her cheecks with love

U- Nahi didi aap rehne dijiye aapke vastra kharab ho jaenge kuchh hi kshano me jija shree aate honge mai dhoond lungi ...

Urmila was searching for her anklet in the corridor when The sound of footsteps running down the hall drew her attention she flung herself backward as she saw a silhouette of a man... she thought it as the same devil,,,, as first her anklet went missing as she saw in the dream and now this silhouette

She gets afraid as she saw it walking in the same direction

Rakshas

Sita didi... bachao rakshas (she shouted with all her powers)

when she felt a strong hand covering her mouth and another hand grabbed her waist and pulled her

Her eyes sticked to the man's face as he pulled her behind the door

Hey shiv ji punh...punh kyun mai hi kyun... ek mai hoon jo har pal inke bare me sochti rehti hoon,,, or ek ye hain jo bar bar pata nahi kyun mere samane aa jate hain

Kyu kr rahe hain aap mere saath aisa (she said rolling her eyes upwards)

Mai aapko rakshas dikhata hoon, itni zor se chillane vali thhi aap, kisine sun liya hota or mujhe dekh liya hota to, kya sochte vo sab mere bbare me, mai to yahan apki payal lautane aaya thha par aapne to mujhe rakshas ghoshit kar diya, ab kuchh bolti q nahi hain aap

She was struggling to free herself from his strong arms so that she can speak and clear the misunderstandings but he was continuously speaking in his rigid tone, without looking at her state...

L- ab kuchh boliye bhi

She widened her eyes and looked down on his hand which is covering her mouth lakshman finally understood her signal and removed his hand from her mouth,,, he was still holding his waist so passionately that with every passing minute she was drowning in his deep brown eyes... lakshman gets embarrassed at their state, they both stilled staring at each other they were gazing deep into each other's eyes urmila broke their trance

U- maine aaj ek svapn dekha thha jisme ek rakshas thha, to mujhe laga vo sachem yahan aa gaya

L- to aapki mithila me din me dekhe hue sapne sach hote hain...

U- aisa nahi hai,humne job hi apne sapne me dekha vo sab ho raha thha isliye hume laga ke vo rakshas bhi

L- achha... aur kya kya dekha aapne aisa jo sab sach ho gaya

U- meri payal ka khona, mandvi didi ka mujhe chhedna, rakshas ka aana or fir aap...

L- mai... mai kya,,,, aapke svapn mein mai bhi thha kya (he asked rasing his brow)

U- Aap...aap yahan kya kar rahe hain

L- mai ye dene aaya thha... he was continuously gazing at her while he showed her the piece of jewellery

U- yeh aapke pas ...

she extended her hand but he pulls the anklet away...

L- rajkumari ise paon mein pehente hain... apna paon aage kijiye...(he smirked)

Laksh kneel down to make her wear the anklet her face turned red

She was lost in her thoughts ...that his close proximity had the usual effect of quickening her pulse... why, why, why her heart beat faster and faster whenever he is around... she clutched her fist tightly

He got up to face her...

Ati sunder... (he said gazing hard at her)

U- ji (her eyes widened)

L- aapki payal (he said lifting a corner of his mouth)

Urmila smiled as she knew exactly what he was talking about

Sita and ram were walking down the corridors when they saw them lost in each other

Ram looked at sita and they smiled looking at their respective sibling

R- to ye aavashyak karya thha tumhe...,,,

Urmila and lakshman get shocked to see sita and ram standing infront of them with a naughty smile

U- vo... pranaam jijaji,,, mai meri payal kho gayi thhi to mai use dhoondne aayi thhi didi(she exclaimed)

R- achha to vo tumhari payal thhi,,, jisne poori raat mere anuj ko sone nahi diya (he said teasing urmila more)

Urmila was embarrassed like hell,,, she squeezed her eyes so tightly

L- bhaiya ye kya keh rahe hain aap ...bhabhi mai to bas ye soch raha thha k jiski bhi ye payal hogi vo kitni pareshan hogi na ise apne pas nahi pakar ...(he said facing sita)

S- lakshman bhaiya aap bevajh hi spashtikaran de rahe hain, hum kahan aapse kuchh puchh rahe hain...

R - satya kaha sita,,, lagta hai ab urmila ko tumhare saath aayodhya le jane ki yojana banani hi padegi

They giggled and walked out of the room leaving them behind ...


TBC 😳

Edited by zubi_23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice...bt payal laxman k pass kaise aayi, if it ws dream.
I think I should read prev chap. Again

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