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Posted: 9 years ago
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Os: Ek Duvidha



Mere jeeven mein kitne badlaav aarahe hai...kaise dhal paungi main Ayodhya ki mitti mein, kya main raajparivaar v Ayodhya vaasiyon ke hriday mein sthaan bana paungi?"

Lost in thoughts...she was walking aimlessly in the pushp vatika...that glowed a perfect silver in the moonlight. ...


What she didn't see was Ram approaching and the two crashed into each other...
Ram held her by her shoulders to prevent her from falling...

R: Sita?


Ram whispered seeing her in tears...

S: ahhh!
He saw her clutch her ankle tight...his inner self told him that his Sita was not so weak that she would cry on a petty injury...surely there was something more...


R: ( worried) ek shan rukiye...
With that he gently scooped her up in his strong arms and he was walking towards the thrones arranged for the royal family as Janak's family usually spent their mornings here...


Sita was too shocked to speak...
Ram gently lowered her on one of the thrones...he then kneeled down in front of her and took her hands in his...


Sita was trying to control herself but her tears just wouldn't stop...

But her chain of thoughts broke as she saw to her horror that her swollen ankle was now resting in his thigh and he was busy caressing it with his soft fingers to soothe it...


S: ( shocked) Dashrath nandan...aap ye...
She would soon be his wife and it was her duty to touch his feet and her he is doing it...

R: kya hua Sita?
Ram asked still busy caressing it...


S: ye..yeh...u..u...uchit nahi...

She said quickly withdrawing her leg...


R: aap kahe toh kuch patra mangvalu?

S: ji..patra kyu?


R: nahi...aap apne netro se jo jal varsha kar rahi hai...use hum patro mein ekatrit kar Mithila vaasiyon ko de sakte hai...


She gave out a soft giggle and smiled seeing his efgort to cheer her up...he smiled. ...


R: ab bataiyye ki aisi kya paristhithi hogayi ki aap apne in amulya ashruo ko isprakar baha rahi hai?

S: j..ji..vo...ma,pitaji,chote pitaji,choti ma aur apni behno se door jaane ke vishay mein vichar kar...bas...
She trailed off...

R: maine sadaiv streeyon ko atyant sehsheel v shaktishaali maana hai...pehle apne pita ke ghar mein ek beti v behen ki bhoomika nibhaati hai tatpashchaat vivah uparant apne sasuraal mein ek kulvadhu,patni, v ma ki bhoomika nibhaati hai...

Gurukul mein apni mata ke bina rehna mere liye atyant kathin tha...parantu aap toh keval meri patni banne hetu sadaiv ke liye ek naye ghar mein basne ja rahi hai...


S: vivah...ek kanya ke jeevan mein atyant mahatvapoorn hota hai...uska sansaar badal jaata hai...main kabhi ma se ya apbe parivaar se door nahi hui...sadaiv unke netro ke samaksh hi rahi...parantu ab...unke bina...pitaji ke bina..ek alag duniya mein mujhe apna sthaan banana hai...
Dashrarh nandann...yeh vo parivaar hai jisne mujhe...apnaya...aapka hamare vivaah ke poorv ek satya jaanna aavashyak hai..vo yeh ki ki mujhe... jo pitaji ko kheto mein hal chalaate waqt bhoomi se prapt hui thi...uss putri ko unhone sadaiv apni sagi putri Urmila se bhi adhik prem kiya hai...mujhe toh iska aabhas kuch fino poorv hi hua...


Ram was touched to hear the story...

S: aapse ek prashn karne ki anumati hai?


R: avashya Sita..aapko iskaran meri anumati ki avashyakta nahi. ...


S: ab jab aap jaan hi chuke hai main ek raajkumari nahi..bhoomija hoon arthaat devi bhoomi ki putri...parantu aap toh Ayodhya jaise samridh pradesh ke bhaavi raja hai...kya ab bhi aap mujhse vivah karenge?
She asked sadly...

R: Sita...raajkumari keval raaja ki putri hone ke karan hiek raajkumari nahi kehlaati...ek sachchi raajkumari vahi hai jiske hriday mein apni praja ke liye prem v karuna ho

...use unke vishay me vichaar karna chahiye...aur aap yeh sab karti hai Sita...aur aap kon hai isse hamare vivaah par koi prabhav nahi padega...maine aapko aapke vichaar v vyaktitv ke aadhar par pasand kiya tha...na ki iss karan...

Sita made a sad baby face and looked damn adorable...
S: aap krodhit hai?


Ram smiled at her cuteness and shook his head before cupping her face gently. ...


L: u..bh..bhaiyya...bhaabhi shyama kijiye..main...kuch samay pashchaat aajaunga...

Lakshman said embarrassingly seeing them like this with Ram's hand on Sita's cheek...supossing he just interrupted their romance. ...that too maybe a ...😳...a kiss!šŸ˜†


S: arrey devar ji ru...
But before he had already ran half way as if they were going to eat him up...



The two of them looked at each other confusedly and then burst out laughing. ...



The End



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb part
loved it
loved the convo between SiyaRam
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sita's dilemma n Ram assuring her!
Beautifully written!
Hehehe Laxman always interrupt them šŸ˜†
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
wonderful os šŸ‘
a bit naughty side of Ram... i am loving it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow this was beautiful...a pure covo btw siyaram...last part of lakshman was hilarious...loved it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab
Plz pm me next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one.
The last part was so funny. Lol.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb post as always .
You have got magic inyour writings .
Keep them coming .

This lakshman I tell you , šŸ˜† he is one poor innocent soul on this earth.
Lol , I wonder how is he gonna handle the smart Urmila...

Love,
Sruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww that was an luvly OS ... luved it 😳



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Posted: 9 years ago
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WHAT IS THE FULL FORM OF OS

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