Mishaan SS.YOU COMPLETE ME( last ,part, page-9 udated 18/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Happy that veer apologized to mishit n admitted that he shudve reacted better.good that veer himself broke up with mishti politely.but shocking too.why did he break up with her?poor mishti was willing to do anything 4 veer.but still I guess veer wasn't able to digest the angry side of mishti,so he broke up with her.ruhaan wants to console mishti,but being a pg he isn't able to do that.but plz ruhaan..go to her.console her.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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OMG it is so sad, poor Mishti I feel so bad for her.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part- 2
Its been a week since mishti saw her relationship break. She was behind the closed door with her mumma and popsie. Everyone was worried but they knew that she wanted to be left alone. Pari had gone to pune for a business deal and she took Ansh with her as she can feel that deep down ansh blamed himself for all that has happened.

Radhika was just tried of waiting . She lost all her patience and now wanted to see her Mishti
Knock knock!
Radhika: ( broken voice) Mishti mish. Mishti baacha darwaza khol na meri jaan, daadi ko aur tang mat kar mis( she starts crying)
Suddenly she felt hand on her shoulder, turns around
Ruhaan hugged Radhika
Ruhaan: sssh dadi, agar aap ase weak ho jaogay tu mishti aur hurt hogi
Radhika: Mera dil bahut gabhra raha hai, jo sab ki maa aur baap hai aaj use uske popsie ki zarrorat hai, sirf mera Ishaan tha jo mishti k andar ka toofan samaj sakta sa use sambhal sakta tha
Ruhaan: dadi, jo ladki apna sab kuch bulha kar aap sab ko sambhal sakti hai, trust me vo is me se winner bankar nikla gi
As soon as he completed his sentence, a lone tear escaped Ruhaan' eyes
Ruhaan's monologue
Plz mishti mujhse ladhna hai ladho, mujhe daantna hai daanto, mujhe blame karna hai karo, magar plz asa chup chap akele kamre mein mat raho, kassh mein bata pao ki mujhe kitni takleef ho rahi hai
Kaash tum mujhe khud ko sambhalne ka haq dedo, plz mishti mein tumhe asa bikhra nai dekh sakta
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Inside room
Mishti was crying inconsolably looking at her mum and popsie' photo
Her head was resting on bed rest and rest of the body lying on floor lifess due to exhaustion of crying and starvation
Suddenly she heard a voice which was enough to give her peace

Popsie! Popsie!
She gathered herself, opened the door and crossed the hallway and followed the voice
When she entered the room, following voice was enough to shock her
She saw big white screen with vedio of little mishti, with her mumma and popsie
Vedio flashback
Little mishti was sitting on her popSie ' s lap and crying hugging her popsie
Mishti: Popsie i swear meine jaanke nai kiya, galti se ho gaya, mein buri nai hoon na
Ishaan: meri princess bilkul buri nai hai , meri princess ka dil bahut bada hai aur saaf bhi
( touching mishti' s nose)
Haa kabhi kabhi rarely iske naak par itna zyaada gussa aa jaat hai ki vo good hota hua bhi galti kar deti hai
Magar you know princess , popsie knows ki jab unki princess kisi ko hurt karti hain na tu use kahi zyaada khud hurt hoti hai

Mauli: ( in jealous tone) Sari galti na meri hai khabardaar mauli popsie ki princess ko kuch bola tu earthquake aa jayega
Ishaan and mishti chukled as they used to enjoy jealous mauli
Afterall ishaan always choose his princess . Deep inside mauli also felt happy seeing this father- daughter bonding
Ishaan and mishti knew how to manaofy mauli
Ishaan kissed mauli' s one cheek and mishti other

Present day
Soon the screen turned black
Mishti looked to and fro as she wanted to see her popsie once again
Suddenly next vedio played

Vedio flashback 2
Mishti: ( crying) Popsie, it hurts, it hurts jab sab question karte hai ki mishti ki family dysfunctional hai
Ki mishti k popsie step father hai
I dont care popsie i just need you .
Ishaan: Princess, sometimes no one will understand you , sometimes everyone will try to hurt you but i know ki meri princess kabhi bhi weong choose nai karegi aur logo ki baaton ko kabhi serious nai le gi. Princess hamesha right to support kargi. Your popsie is, was and will always be proud of you.
Present
Mishti touched Ishaan's photo on the screen and she saw a shadow approaching her overlapping Ishaan
She turned towards the Person
Ruhaan sat down beside mishti
There was a silence for 15 minutes

Mishti:i disappointed them, i disappointed my popsie. I cant face them. Popsie ne apni commitment kabhi nai todhi, i failed him
Mein apni commitment, apna relation nai nibha pai

Ruhaan:.Mishti, you didnt disappoint them before but yes now you are disappointing them . Tumhe asa khud ko blame karte dekhkar vo bahut hurt huya hoga
Mishti tumhare popsie nai commitment nai pyaar nibhaya hai
Commitment pyaar nai hota but yes agar pyaar k saath commitment ho tu vo aur beautiful ho jata hai . Agar tumhari mom Popsie k saath commit nai karti tu bhi tumhare popsie ka pyaar kabhi nai badalta
Tu phir tum asa kyu soch rahi ho .
You know agar tumhare popsie kab hurt hota agar unki princess ik commitment ki vajah se khud ko kho deti
Tumhare popsie ne tumhari mom ko unke fears se liberate kiya
Tum khud se pucho kya veer k saath tum kabhi liberate hui agar nai to it isnt worth your tears
Tumhari mom jaisi thi, tumhari popsie ko vaise hi pasand thi
. Before Ruhaan could complete his sentence, Mishti buried herself under his chest and cried , it was as if a big heavy burden was lifted off her shoulders
Ruhaan was taken aback but he hugged her back and carsed her hair bcz a friendly and warm hug was what she needed at the moment
Finally mishti has given him haq even if as as a friend
Ruhaan looked at Ishaan and it was like assuring him and now his princess is not alone and Ruhaan will always be there for mishti like Ishaan used to be

That day for the first times sinces Ishaan's death,mishti felt so much peace and she slept unknowingly in Ruhaan' s arm

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Guys this is the next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Cindrella-Sha

Amazing start.

Pls continue soon 😊

Thank you😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sreevijayan

Beautiful start dear...loved it soo much... Pls continue sooon..


Thank you glad you liked it😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Happy that veer apologized to mishit n admitted that he shudve reacted better.good that veer himself broke up with mishti politely.but shocking too.why did he break up with her?poor mishti was willing to do anything 4 veer.but still I guess veer wasn't able to digest the angry side of mishti,so he broke up with her.ruhaan wants to console mishti,but being a pg he isn't able to do that.but plz ruhaan..go to her.console her.

Thank you hope you like next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: rbb1

OMG it is so sad, poor Mishti I feel so bad for her.

Thank you hope you enjoy next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Part 2 was so beautiful..
Even I had imagined it for mishaan..😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Another great update, it was good how Ruhaan used her dad's videos to get her to talk. I can't wait to watch their relationship change to love now. Please post the next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ProudAhamian

Part 2 was so beautiful..

Even I had imagined it for mishaan..😳

it was really good

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