Bird Set Free - Chapter 1 Pg 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update

Loved how you depicted Mauli's pain😭

Originally posted by: aroha17

Amazing. But very sad for Mauli. Hopefully this phase ends soon and she gets the happiness which she deserves. Update soon.

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Hey there!

This is a beautiful story. My heart breaks for Mauli and no matter what happens, it's sad but true, that a part of her will always remain broken. The current phase is gruesome for her and the pain she's going through is unimaginable.

I almost despise Kunal. Probably his feelings for Nandini are genuine and he's being truthful toward Mauli, too; but what he did is an unforgivable sin.

And Nandini. Is she a negative character in your story, or she's just being selfish which? Either way, she makes me sick. Waacckk!

Originally posted by: Cinnamonn

Anahi 😃

Originally posted by: prettywomaniya

hiii again 😆😊

i am so stupid i resed it for tracking and see lost it again..

today it came on my top posts so got an opportunity to read it..

its fabulous aria...😊

i am glad u made nandini a selfish woman..

kunal is so kunal..

and mauli dida radhika bond is really something to look forward to..

ahhh!! mauli is heartbroken.. dont know how she is going to see him daily..

pls update soon. this time i am not gonna miss this.

Originally posted by: Cinnamonn

Hiii 😛 Thank you for your lovely words😳 Yes, I want to show how she slowly evolves and get out of that Phase and finally move on. What Kunal did is horrendous and it really does break a person.

Nandini in this story is selfish, she's not negative. She sees and gets the love and doesn't want to let it go.

Originally posted by: Metamorphosis

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you post it soon.

Yes, I'm Elvish. ;) It was my another account, so.