Bird Set Free - Chapter 1 Pg 1

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prettywomaniya

@prettywomaniya

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#21

res..

is se pehle yeh fir gayab ho jae, i am bookmarking it for tracking..

will read it soonish.😊

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Beautiful update

Loved how you depicted Mauli's pain😭

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Aroha

@aroha17

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Amazing. But very sad for Mauli. Hopefully this phase ends soon and she gets the happiness which she deserves. Update soon.

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Elvish_Hobbit

@Elvish_Hobbit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Hey there!

This is a beautiful story. My heart breaks for Mauli and no matter what happens, it's sad but true, that a part of her will always remain broken. The current phase is gruesome for her and the pain she's going through is unimaginable.

I almost despise Kunal. Probably his feelings for Nandini are genuine and he's being truthful toward Mauli, too; but what he did is an unforgivable sin.

And Nandini. Is she a negative character in your story, or she's just being selfish which? Either way, she makes me sick. Waacckk!

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sasir
Beautifully written...
So heart wrenching...
Felt for mauli...

Thank you Sasir 😳

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kiransgirl
You are a beautiful, expressive writer cinnamon😊

Thank you Kiransgirl 😳

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Rosal
You described Mauli's pain very well

Thank you Rosal 😳

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sampa79
Beautiful written
Update soon next part

Thank you Payal ❤️ glad to see you here

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
Just came across this story... Wonderfully written...👏The pain of Mauli felt so real... I almost had tears when Mauli reminded Kunal what she actually wanted... Would love to see an independent Mauli... Please continue soon...

Aww Thank you Tiana 😳 I;m glad you enjoyed it...