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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: **Rekha**

thank u soo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 4 translating in english
the ff was jut awersomeeeee :))
i mean no word to express my feelingggg
u r so fasttttt ❤️
update when u time plzzzz
can't wait 4 next scene

thnks ,i will update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow........ Its such a cute and romantic Fantic......
And i really like their nick name SRAYAM........
Its their first fanfic and its awesome..........
Great fanfic yaar........ I love all the part........ Want to read it again and again......... Wonderful work.........
Continue the other update soon............
-Soni
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
hi soni,lots of thnks 4 ur kind appreciation , will present u the next part soon
Edited by niksidfan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
part 4
swayam and sraddha came to know from her parents about the meeting of pratima and sraddha's amma baoji
babuji:(seeing sraddha back to them)sraddha abhi pratima ji yaha se gayi,humse mulakat huyi,lekin tumne itni der kyon laga diya?(sraddha,its only a few seconds when pratima ji left we met her but why r u so late?)
sraddha:(showing swayam) yeh swayam hain,pratima ji ki devar (he is swayam,brother in law of pratima didi)
swayam introduce himself with a cute smile and also touched their legs 4 bleessings
sraddha felt more attracted towards him
sraddha: amma babuji hum kuchch din inke ghar rahenge(amma babuji ,we r going to stay in their house 4 some days)
amma:lekin beta bura mat manna,hum waha kaise.......(but son dont mind how can we....... (stay there) )
sraddha:amma, aap fikr mat kijiye .mujhe naukri bhi mil gayi hain inke waha,kucchi der main hum doosre ghar bhi dhoond lenge(amma u need not care about that,i have got a job in his office and we will soon find a new house)
swayam:(thinking) main tumhe jaane doonga ,tab na(i will never let u go)
all seems happy
everyone went to the sarkar mansion
now they given th special guest house which is attached with their inner mansion
after keeping their luggage ,sraddha went inside to meet her pratima didi
as she was running the sweet sound of her 'churis' and payel was heard by swayam.he was changing in his room after coming back.suddenly he realized he should stop sraddha meeting his bhabhi since she knows what they want .
swayam went outside to stop her without realizing that he forgot to wear his shirt on the sando
he caught sraddha by her hand and brought her to his room
sraddha is initially shocked and then feeling little awkward seeing swayam in this position
swayam:sraddha ,mujhe tumse kuchch baat karna tha(sraddha ,i have something to tell u)
sraddha:(feelig little shy and looking down) woh,pehle tum....(at first you........(put on ur shirt) )
swayam:kya?(what) then realising he quickly put on his shirt (thinking) (mujhe aise dekhkar bohat sharm aa rahi hain,kuch din baad to mujhe aisse hi dekhna hoga tumhe aur sirf tumhehi(u r feeling shy seeing me like like but after some days u always have to see me like this(smiles)
swayam:sraddha ,kyon na tum aaj se hi office chalo?(sraddha ,why not u come to office from 2day only?)
sraddha:(smiling) thik hain sir(ok sir)
swayam:bhool se bhi mujhe sir mat bulana (smiles cutely) (dont call me sir by mistake also)
sraddha:ok,lekin pehle didi se to mil loo(but let me meet didi first)
swayam :uski time nahi hain sraddha,baad main mil lena(there is no time 4 that sradha,u can meet her afterwards) (thinking) (sorry sraddha,par main nahi chahata ki tum bhabhi se milne ke baad mujhse door ho jao((sorry sraddha ,but i dont want u to loose after meeting my bhabhi)
swayam was starting the car when she came back taking blessings from her parents ,in her white suit in which she looking like an angel.sha changed her monotonous hairstyle and divided the hair sideways
she stood near the car
swayam seeing sraddha came out
swayam:r u(ready) ......(keeps looking at her awestruck by her beauty)
swayam:sraddha,aaj tum bohat khubsoorat aur sexy i mean hot lag rahi ho (sraddha today u r looking very beautiful and sexy ,i mean hot)
sraddha blushes
they both sat on the car
precap: more sweet swayam moments and a twist in both of them's life
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG I JUT LUV DA SCENE WEN HE IZ SHIRTLESS❤️😆👏TOO GUD MAN
I WISH THAT HAPPEN IN DA SHOW
THE FF IS AWERSOME AS USUALL
PUT MORE ROMANTIC SCENE OF SHR=SWA AHAHHA LOVE IT
CONTIUE ASAP PLZ
LOVE IT MANNN
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
thnks 4 always suggesting my write up and leave a valuable comment⭐️ ⭐️ of urs .
actually this is my 1st ff 😊 😊 and and i need ur imp comments to get ur inspiration to write more😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwee plz do continueee soonn👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thats such a cute and romantic scenes between SraYam.......
Awww......... Imagine Swayam without his shirt...... He must be damn sexy and hot.........
That was really sooo romantic that I was lost in my world with my 😉......
Anyways, i really enjoyed this one....... Thanks.........
Continue soon...... With some more romance of course........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mina H

awwwee plz do continueee soonn👏

i will continue asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
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[QUOTE=-Dreamy_Girl-]Thats such a cute and romantic scenes between SraYam.......
Awww......... Imagine Swayam without his shirt...... He must be damn sexy and hot.........
That was really sooo romantic that I was lost in my world with my 😉......
Anyways, i really enjoyed this one....... Thanks.........
Continue soon...... With some more romance of course........
[/QUOTE] ya actually it would be more nice if we can see it 😉in the serial of coarse,swayam is damn hot ,thanks 4 ur comments and i will continue soon
Edited by niksidfan - 16 years ago

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