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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Mana,

This one is straight from the heart..and it touches the heart when we read it for sure.. u know the distance makes the heart feel more love and know the worht much more right..my sis is away and can feel her emotions so much.. as if she wants to hug her with her words she cant physcially... still u can feel it..i could feel those motions here in ur poem...dear.. well written.. glad u made us share this and read this piece .. lovely dear..tc

Bhoomi

Hi bhoomi !!!

Thank you so much dear...

YOUR appreciation means a lot to me, coz your that someone whose poem's I adore 😊

And I am glad that you felt the emotions.

You are right, distance makes the heart feel more love, and I think your Sis can understand , what I was feeling then much better 😛

Actually, I write poem verrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy rarely, and when finally one popped out, there was no chance I wouldnt have shared it with you.😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mayadika11
awesoooooooome...
lovely...
beautiful........
thanx for the pm........

Thanks Preeti 😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
👏👏⭐️....VERY B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.........

SIMPLY MARVELOUS

Thanks Lipi 😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Mana
This poem is just so beautiful..

its the first time I cried after coming to US😭😭

Its one year since I got married n I miss my mom everyday..But after reading this poem I had tears in my eyes ...😭😭

Mom i really miss u..

Hi di 😊

Thanks for liking the poem...

well...I was to say sorry for making you cry....But then your tears are not of grief, those borne out of your love for your mom...😊

And do i need to say, that though you are in US far away from your mom, your mom is always there with you, coz a mother's heart is like EAGLE....Though the Eagle is flying high up in the sky, its whole concern is for his kids lying in the nest....😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

SUPERB....BEAUTIFUL....one that touches the heart

Thanks Nisha 😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: guglu088
Wow mana...Beautiful...

You have described it so very well...it was heart touching...

Love
Guglu

Thanks Debs... 😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was really sweet
HAPPY MOTHERS DAY TO YOU ALL

thanks prerna 😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

just one word to say...BEAUTIFUL... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

pata hai tujhe MAA yeh word hi baht mayne rakhti hai...aur tere is poem se maine aaj mom ko baht miss kiya...voh do din k liye out of station hain...😭

mujhe pata hai tha ki tu achhe stories likhti hai...aaj tere aur ek hunar ka bhi pata chal gaya...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

hiiii mana
poem was superbbbbbbb
mindblowinggggggg
lovelyyyyyyyyyy
toooooo goooooood
fantabuloussssss
rockingggggggggggg
really touching
wishing for u dear that u meet ur mother very soon

love
deepa

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

hey what a beautiful poem, really nice :)

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