Sad shayari Part 1 Closed - Page 5

Originally posted by: KYPH-AK

Jab bhi tujhse milne ki tadbeer nazar aayi,
mujhe apne pairo me padi zanjeer nazar aayi,

teri yaad me nikal pade mere aansoo,
aur har aansoo me teri tasveer nazar aayi.

thanks saz for liking our poetry.. itz really nice to see someone appreciating our work coz this forum has alwayz been very unactive and there's just few of us like KYPH-AK and me who are trying to make it a bit alive.. so thanks alot for liking what we share.. 😊

Originally posted by: Chotii

Although I've been a member of IF for quite a long time now, its really sad and annoying that I never discovered this forum earlier.. I LOVE to read shayari altho I'm not much of a poet myslef lol.. If I had known there was this section on IF i wouldnt go searchin on the net for shayari..

all I wanna say is that guys, ur poetry is beautiful 😊

I wanna read all the lovely work everyone has done and I've just happened to start off with this post and I must say, I am so impressed and so in awe of the lovely sharayi u guys have produced in this one post alone..

I havent really managed to read all the poems here, but I just reallly felt the need to comment on the ones I've read on the first page, and can I just say,

KYPH-AK - plz publish an actual collection - I'd buy it! 😳 😆

MEHFIL SAJI THI, JAM KA THA DAUR
JAAM KYA THA YE KISNE KIYA THA GAUR
JAM MEIN LAHU THA MERE ARMANO KA
AUR SAB KEH RAHE THE EK AUR !! EK AUR!!
- isse par kar i was like.. waah! waah! 😆

Unki yaad dil se bhulai nahi jati,
Yeh dil ki dolat roz lutai nahi jati,
Kis muh se kahte ho ki unhe hum bhul jaye?
Yeh pyaar ki duniya hai,
Roz basai nahi jati.

- this is my fav so far.. 😳 😊

and urooj92 -

Nakaam si koshish kiya karte hain,
Hum hain ki unse pyar kiya karte hain,
Khuda ne takdir me ek tuta tara nahi likha,
Aur hum hain ki chaand ki aarzu kiya karte hain..

love, this one x 😊

Thanx for all the wonderful work guys, I'm officially going to become a solid member of this forum =)

Keep up the awesome creativity!

Luv,

Saz

xxx

first of all welcome to the forum🤗
Thank u soooo much for appreciating our work. and yea as urooj has already said we don't write poetry its from different webs. the one i post its in my shayari collection so i share it with u guys beacuse u guys also like poetry 😃

Ek ajnabi se mujhe itna pyaar kyon hai,
Inkar karne par chahat ka ikraar kyon hai,
Use pana nahi meri taqdeer mein shayad,
Phir har mod pe usi ka intezaar kyon hai.!

Mohabbat yahan bikti hai ishq nilam hota hai
bharose ka katal yahan khule aam hota hai
jamane se thokar mili to chale hum maikhane mein
Aur wahi jamana humein sharabi ka naam saare aam deta hai

Mohabbat mein laakhon zakham khaye humne,
afsos unhe hum par aitbar nahi,
mat pucho kya gujarti hai dil par,
jab vo kehte hai hame tumse pyar nahi..😭

KYPH-AK

man i must say dis..... ur poetry collection is just mind blowing man..
like seriuosly... day r simply soo touchy....

i just love all of dem...

awsome yaar!!! =)