Love In the Distance...

Thought about a time in my life when i wanted to tell someone but couldn't out of fear of losing them...Well here is what i wrote (another poem inspired me to write this). Dont worry i dont feel this way still, but I am sure we all have at one point, always waiting for that 1...😳

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

I want to say I love you and hug you tight,

But I know it wouldn't make things right,

I want to tell you, but am in fear,

Its you I hold, so close my dear,

My heart grows fonder,

As you wander,

For this painful endeavor,

I will love you forever,

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

- Love in the Distance (Arun)

any1 like it?

if u do i will dance!


if not, well cant really say anything...

it's realllyy niceeee👏
n gud to knw u wrote it yourself!!😊
is it ur 1st own poem??

Originally posted by: IMAN

it's realllyy niceeee👏
n gud to knw u wrote it yourself!!😊
is it ur 1st own poem??

thx! its like my 2nd or 3rd...

My first one was about my car....

i dunt belive i itz writen by u by the way tum poet kab se ban gaye beautiful

Originally posted by: *Simran*

i dunt belive i itz writen by u by the way tum poet kab se ban gaye beautiful

lol i agree with you simiii...When i wrote it, i said, "Yeh maine lihka?"..

i couldnt believe it, but i had some random words to use..and i finally made it...

Poet nahi hu, lekin dil se bol raha hu...😊


thanks..😊

Originally posted by: AsliiGuy

Thought about a time in my life when i wanted to tell someone but couldn't out of fear of losing them...Well here is what i wrote (another poem inspired me to write this). Dont worry i dont feel this way still, but I am sure we all have at one point, always waiting for that 1...😳

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

I want to say I love you and hug you tight,

But I know it wouldn't make things right,

I want to tell you, but am in fear,

Its you I hold, so close my dear,

My heart grows fonder,

As you wander,

For this painful endeavor,

I will love you forever,

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

- Love in the Distance (Arun)

i think itz reallie nice...it wud haf been much more beautiful if u expressed it to the person u were referring to....

Thanks every1! apprecaite the warm comments...

❤️

Originally posted by: AsliiGuy

Thought about a time in my life when i wanted to tell someone but couldn't out of fear of losing them...Well here is what i wrote (another poem inspired me to write this). Dont worry i dont feel this way still, but I am sure we all have at one point, always waiting for that 1...😳

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

I want to say I love you and hug you tight,

But I know it wouldn't make things right,

I want to tell you, but am in fear,

Its you I hold, so close my dear,

My heart grows fonder,

As you wander,

For this painful endeavor,

I will love you forever,

I talk to you but you don't know it,

I walk past you but don't show it,

- Love in the Distance (Arun)