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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone, here are a few poems from me ; they are in blank verse so no rhyming words!:
1st one:
The Free Lives
As amber descends
remniscence flits by
of the days of yore
the thoughts, the scenes
encased in the vial of dreams

The dreams aglow
iridiscent, naive.
We move and forget.
We wait for reason,
mindless still.

Unknowing lover, what war
you rage on this soul of mine,
Victory to you, I hope
so it will be mine

We move and forget;
to remember at sombre amber dusk...
2nd one:
Witherings...
To bring melancholy
and ecstacy and fuse
To kindle the fire of hate
To embrace fragile hope
Takes strength of extraordinary measures


To love and live alike
To fade and still be mighty
Withering with the dusk
We walk solemnly
Frozen at the core
Not a match to pray for.


The light is all power
Glorious and elusive
Like a super seductress
Leads us to our doom.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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excellent job👏
they are beautiful, i especially like the first one.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very descriptive poems! 👏Thanks for sharing such lovely poems with us.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you soooo much guys!
i have never shown anyone else my poems before = D!
i have a few more if you guys would like to see 'em!

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