Ruins of Pride (TS) Part 3 updated on page 4 - Page 3

Fantastic 👏

I love this Astha

She is back to take her revenge

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

This was a really good read 😃 I liked the proper justification you've given for Aastha losing hope over getting the custody of Shaurya. At least here its valid & she has struggled a lot, going through hardships. The vile Sabherwals & their tactics were disgusting. Devi has anyway manipulated Shaurya since the beginning to hate Aastha in the show as well & the way in which he was said to have behaved was so saddening (at school)

Do write more... 😊

Thanks for the lovely reply. I am glad you are enjoying it. In the show we have not yet got a proper reason about why she left Shaurya behind. Sometimes she blames Devi for snatching him, and sometimes she becomes self righteous and says I left you behind for your family and Shaan. I mean woman..stick to one reason!

Originally posted by: rumi_dee

Beautifully written! This makes so much sense as Aastha’s backstory. So Heart wrenching and sad! I’d love to see this as is in the show! ❤️❤️

Thank you so much. I sincerely hope that they provide some good flashbacks to show what all Aastha went through in that house and after leaving that house so that the viewers can sympathize with her character. She has been shown to be a fighter and leaving Shaurya without even trying doesn't go well with her character.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

It was so difficult to read. Damn those sabarwals, each and everyone of them deserve to rot in hell and fried in hot oil🤢 devi and tej I hope they both go insane. They need to know how does it feel like to lose husband and kid.

Also where was shaan in all these issues?

Yes, Devi and Tej need to pay for destroying three lives.

@bold: I really don't know. Perhaps he was lying in one corner of the house in an alcoholic stupor, blissfully unaware of everything happening around him. Iska character aaj tak samajh me nahi aaya. The only explanation for his behaviour can be persistent depression which completely incapacitate him.

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

😭 Astha and her suffering... This was soo much to imagine... Her longing to just be with her son to see him, hear him... Her efforts and desperate state of doing everything to get her son back

Saberwals in show as well as your story should rot in hell!

I really sympathize with Aastha and tried to visualize what all she must have gone through because she is not one to give up so easily. I have heard of in-laws who appear to be perfectly well behaved respectable people but treat their bahus like shit and make their life hell. So despite everyone saying Aastha was responsible for abandoning her son, the truth could be much more complex than that.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Man she should get her revenge

I never understood why Shaan did not walk away to her with shaurya since he still loved her

Yes, she should get her revenge.

Even I don't understand why Shaan could not walk out then and how he suddenly got so much courage after 25 years to go and secretly meet her. Why couldn't he do the same all this while and take Shaurya to meet her?

Originally posted by: Idiotboxer

Yes, Devi and Tej need to pay for destroying three lives.

@bold: I really don't know. Perhaps he was lying in one corner of the house in an alcoholic stupor, blissfully unaware of everything happening around him. Iska character aaj tak samajh me nahi aaya. The only explanation for his behaviour can be persistent depression which completely incapacitate him.

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Beautiful written. Adtha had gothroygh do much hope theyget punishment for there sin

Thanks. I am glad you liked it. Even if they get punishment, Shaurya will suffer because he worships them.

Originally posted by: GHKPM

That was so believable...frankly something like this surely happened in d series too ... more in line with Aashta's character... the powerful Sabherwals misusing their strength against a powerless mother & child...i can feel Aashta's helplessness & her majboori ki decision to save her sanity & her child's peace of mind or so she tries to convince herself...so sad... waiting impatiently to see how you proceed😊💖

Thanks for loving it and commenting. It really means a lot. Hopefully they show something like this to help us understand her character better. She had to stay away from him for her own sanity and save Shaurya from turmoil. She was afraid to approach him all these years because she thought he would not understand her situation and seeing her would only give him more pain. She had to toughen herself for her family and in the midst 25 years went by.

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic 👏

I love this Astha

She is back to take her revenge

Thank you. Yes she is back for revenge. Hope you will like the next part as well.