Shakhi OS ||Between the Pages|| - Page 4

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Amazing 👏❤️

Shukriya ❤️

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Weird I didn't come across this beforehand

I like how you've managed to imply the subtle nuances of liking Anokhi has for Shaurya. For example getting lost thinking about him was adorable yet meaningful. Shaurya on the other hand is aware but well.. He's he, the fastidious one 😆

If possible, would like to read shots where they have a liking but tries hard to hide their feelings. You'll nail that kinda themed stories 👍🏼

Great job with this..

Weird I didnt reply to this before .

Anyways, so thank you. 🤗I am glad you liked it. Even I want to write but now I am apparently spending all my time thinking about the episodes and them. 😆

At the same time, I am seriously lacking on plots.

But I will consider what you said. Will definitely pen doem if something good crosses my mind.

Originally posted by: RaarA

Such a beautiful story.

I loved it. And it's great that you ended it with a song.

Thanks and I just love their song. It's just so pretty. ❤️

Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx

Beautifully written ❤️

Thank you❤️

You have created a beautiful ambience in this story❤️

solitude, rain & them alone in his cabin

Their interactions were so smooth n natural

Loved it ❤️

Just realized I haven't come across a lot of OS/FFs in SAAKK forum. This one was so real. Something that could be made into a scene in the show although I would love if Shaurya calls Anokhi as Anokhi. Drop the Ms. Bhalla man!

Wow, this was amazing and wonderfully written👏👏

Could imagine this playing out with the actors

I had a lump in my throat at the end... poor Anokhi😭

I hope you write more on them

Take care💞

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

You have created a beautiful ambience in this story❤️

solitude, rain & them alone in his cabin

Their interactions were so smooth n natural

Loved it ❤️

Bro you read this too ?!

Thank you 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: AnokhiKaShaurya

Just realized I haven't come across a lot of OS/FFs in SAAKK forum. This one was so real. Something that could be made into a scene in the show although I would love if Shaurya calls Anokhi as Anokhi. Drop the Ms. Bhalla man!

Lol, now he has dropped a lot more than just Ms Bhalla ! Dude sat on the dustbin ..like what do you need more ?!😆

Ps- Thank you🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Wow, this was amazing and wonderfully written👏👏

Could imagine this playing out with the actors

I had a lump in my throat at the end... poor Anokhi😭

I hope you write more on them

Take care💞

Thank you 🤗

I am glad you enjoyed ❤️