Shakhi OS ||Between the Pages|| - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_2010

Oh I loved it!

I wish we get something like this on the screen😳

And the feeling is mutual on the other side! I'm getting addicted to this show

Hainaa ...I am too hoping between all the drama and everything we get some subtle scenes !

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Singhshrutiiii

The quote in the end omggggggg

Beautiful ❤️

You liked it ?! I kinda framed the whole thing on those two lines I had in my mind 😆

Glad you enjoyed ❤️

Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Weird I didn't come across this beforehand

I like how you've managed to imply the subtle nuances of liking Anokhi has for Shaurya. For example getting lost thinking about him was adorable yet meaningful. Shaurya on the other hand is aware but well.. He's he, the fastidious one 😆

If possible, would like to read shots where they have a liking but tries hard to hide their feelings. You'll nail that kinda themed stories 👍🏼

Great job with this..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Hainaa ...I am too hoping between all the drama and everything we get some subtle scenes !

Touch wood.

I just thank God everyday that this show has more scenes of the lead pair than the other show I used to watch😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a beautiful story.

I loved it. And it's great that you ended it with a song.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautifully written ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very prettily written 👌 I loved the subtlety with which you wrote this scene, the thehrav was beautiful. Could totally imagine this playing onscreen Beautiful work ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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“Try looking between the pages sir, you might find something beyond the lines”


I loved this line! And of course the entire OS I think you had the essence of their characters it was easy to imagine something like this happening in the show!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: FortunaMajor

“Try looking between the pages sir, you might find something beyond the lines”


I loved this line! And of course the entire OS I think you had the essence of their characters it was easy to imagine something like this happening in the show!

As I said I am obsessed 🤗🤣


Also Thank you love❤️ (your name pls ? )

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Very prettily written 👌 I loved the subtlety with which you wrote this scene, the thehrav was beautiful. Could totally imagine this playing onscreen Beautiful work ❤️

Thank you Pratiksha. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.❤️

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