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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiii12

This was so so beautiful! I just really could see this happening on-screen and hear Shaurya's tone in my mind while reading the last part.❤❤


Thank you ! I am glad you enjoyed. 💔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am glad❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was beautiful. 👍🏼 Loved the way you portrayed their underlying emotions. ❤️ The pace of the narration was so calm and felt comfortable reading it.

You've got nice hold on ShaKhi. Do write more works on them. Would love to read more like this.


Awww. You are too sweet. ❤️

Mahn I dont know about the hold but surely I am kinda getting obsessed with them. Like they are so subtle !

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika365

This was totally worth the read! I love the title!! Yes it was random but i think thats how I imagine them to be too, once they both develop feelings and before they confess. Its very well written. Please keep writing! ❤️

Haha ! Then we are sailing in the same boat. I too hope they turn something like this when they fall in love. They have this different charm and subtle tuning...that I do want them to be more ....what is the word..erm -underlined , like hidden...introvert sort of... though passionate ofcourse !

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: infinitie

This was such a lovely read ❤️ The whole interaction felt so natural between them, with Anokhi's annoyance and his feigned indifference. I love that in the end, Shaurya still wanted her to stay back. Is that how you treat all your students Shaurya?? Please write more because I love these simple moments they share

Apparently the line of student teacher has been blurred way before. 😆

Btw Thanks ❤️

And I am too wating for the college interactions between them. Like they are so simple, subtle

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This was a masterpiece and definitely so beautiful ❤❤❤

Please do write more❤😋


Dhanyawaad🙈🙈

I might I am obsessed 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sofna

Ohmydz this was soooo Beautiful ❤️Natural.

Do write more.

Thanks ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Apparently their magic ❤️

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Originally posted by: deepshiii

Beautifully written. Loved the way the emotions were explained❤️

Do write more🥰

Thankss❤️

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