ANURAJ FF-bas teraa sath ho...chahe jo baat ho.. (updated chp 5A pg22) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 4B

AT 10 pm

SHASTRI HOUSE

Dev -kya hua kyu itna chila rahi ho anamika hum aa hi ra...dev stoped

Anamika was holding a stick in her hand

Anamika - aao hum tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the

Dev- kya hua ...

Anamika - kya hua , hamari perfume thod ke bolti ho kya hua ,tumhari himat kesi hui hamari perfume chuneki

Dev is about to cry

Dev - vo hum ...sorry anamika hame maaf kardo plz

Anamika - iss baar hum tumhe maaf nahi karege , tumne veer ki di hui gift tooddi

Dev looks at anu and give her a sad look

Anu msg veer to call anamika

Anamika - hath dikhao apna ajj to hum tumhe maar ke hi rahege

Dev puts her hand in front anamika

Anu - anamika veer ka call aa raha h tumhe dekho urgent to nahi

Anamika - ajj tum bach gai dev , tumhe hum baad me dekhege

Anamika goes

Dev - thanks anu hame bachane ke liye , hame to laga ajj hame maar pad jaegi

Anu - are thanks kis baat ke liye , tum bhi to hume bacha ti ho anamika se , lakin ab raat me anamika ko mana lena , jada der tak vo hum dono se gussa nahi rahe sakti

They both hug each other

Dev- are anu terrace se sare kapde leke aa jao plz , hum chale jatelakin hum ja rahe h anamika ko manane

Anu - hume bhi thoda kaam h 11.30tak jake le ae ge

Dev pov - ae bhagwan isse rajat iska upar intezaar kar raha h aur ye jaa nahi rahi h

Dev - are minty aunty ne hume kaha tha ki kapde nikal lena 11baje tak , fir jada andhera ho jata h . to andhera hone se pehele leke aa jao , fir hum tum se ek baat kahege

Anu ha pehele batao tumhe kya baat karni h fir hum chale jaege

Dev -a... vo ...ha vo hum abhi nahi bata sakte tum jab kapde leke aaogi tab bataege , abhi tum jao kapde leke aao

Dev pushes anu near the door

Anu - acha baba jaa rahe h

Anus pov - isse kya ho gaya anamika ke jese behave kyu kar rahi h

AT THE TERRACE

Rajat was talking on the phone anu comes , she sees a shadow of a man , and get scared as she cant see anything as it was to dark

Anu in very low voice - kon h , ...kon h waha ...

No one replied

Anu (pov)- kahi chor to nahi ,...got too scared , anamika aur dev ko chila ke bulate h , nahi agar chilaege to chor ke paas knife hua to ..., humhe hi kuch karna padega kya kare daar lag raha h

She sees a stick lying on the floor , she pick the stick and goes near rajat

And start beating , tumhari hemaat kese hui hamare ghar chori karne ani ki ,ajj asa sabak sikhaege ki dubaara chori karna hi bhul jaoge .

Rajat - are tum kon ho mujhe chodo

Anu - are wah !!!!pehele to chori karne ate ho , aur ab hamme chodne ke liye khe rahe ho, hum nahi chodege tumhe , acha sabak shikhaege

Rajat - anu tum , mujhe chodo me rajat , minty aunty ka beta

Anu leaves and shocks to se rajat

anu - aap...

rajat - ha me

Anu - sorry , sorry I am so sorry mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap h mujhe laga ki chor h , sorry

Rajat - its ok ... Chor ko bhi koi itni buri tarha maarta h kya ??

Rajat (pov)- aya tha sorry bolne aur yah mujhe sorry bol rahi h

Anu - jor se lagi kya

Rajat - nahi dhere se lagi, itni jor se marti ho tum , bichara me

Anu - sorry , aap yaha bethiye hum aap ke liye first aid box late h

Rajat - no need me apne room me jake medicine laga luga

Anu - plz , humne aap ko hurt kiya h to hum hi aap ko medicine lagaege plz

Rajat - nahi its ok

Anu -fir hume lagega ki aap ne hume maaf nahi kiya

Rajat think medicine lagate time hi sahi time rahega sorry bolne ka

Rajat - acha theek h

Anu goes and bring the first aid box

Anu - dekhaiye kaha kaha lagi h

Rajat shows his hand and anu puts medicine

Rajat - ahhh...

Anu - darad de raha h (says in crying tone )

Rajat - nahi ,dekh raha tha ki tumhara kya reaction hoga, i am ok

Anu saw blood coming from his head

Anu - aap ko to khoon nikal raha h , aap ko to doctor ke paas leke jana padega , chaliye jaldi doctor ke paas

Rajat start laughing - ANUSHKA SHASTRI thoda sa khoon nikal ne se kuch nahi hota ,isse jada khoon to bache girte h to unhe nikalta h , ye lo (wiped his blood from his head )ab khoon nahi nikal raha h dekho

Anu - ha lakin ...

Rajat put his finger on anus lips

Rajat - mujhe kuch nahi hua , I am ok

Anu start putting medicine and started crying

Rajat - anu tum ro kyu rahi ho , mujhe kuch nahi hua

Anu - vo hum ...sorry

Rajat - are its ok , mujhe bhi tumhe sorry bolna h

Anu - hume sorry kyu ???

Rajat - dev ne bataya mom ne tumhe bura bhala kaha , tumhari galti bhi nahi thi fir bhi , iss liye mom ki taraf se me sorry bol raha hu

Anu - are its ok , minty aunty hamari maa jesi h unka chilana hame buran ahi laga , to sorry mat boliye

Rajat - can I ask u sumthing ???

Anu - ha kyu nahi

Rajat - tum itni strong ho mom ne tumhe asa kya bol diya tumhare past ke bare me ki tum rone lagi

Anu - kuch nahi (was about to cry) hume jana h papa aage hoge

Rajat - its ok nahi batana h to mat batao , lakin jo cheez hurt karti h na unhe apne dil se bhot dur kardo , aur khush raho , tum rote hue achi nahi lagti

Anu -humne hamare past ko bhot dur chod diya h , iske bare me hum baat nahi karna chahate h

Rajat - ok , acha tum kal free ho kya , hum dono coffee pine chalet h

Anu - hum wsi ladki nahi h jesa aap hume samajh rahe h

Rajat - oh hello me bhi wesa ladka nahi hu jesa tum samajh rahi ho , me bhot siddha sadha hu ,mene bus ase hi pucha

Anu - hame pata h lakin hum free nahi h kal sorry

Rajat - plz anu plz ,a cha tum agar kal nahi chali to me samjhuga ki tumne mujhe maaf nahi ki

Anu - acha theek h hum dekhte h kal batate h hum chaege ki nahi

Rajat - ok gud nite bye oh sorry Namaste

Anu gave a cute smile -Namaste

Rajat pov - yaar ye itni achi ladki h , me isse sham ko galat samajh raha tha

Sareen - ae fauji kaha h chal tujhe me shastri ji aur unki betiya se milake lata hu

Rajat - dad mene unki do beti dev aur anu se pehele hi mil liya

Sareen -accha , lakin yedo thodi sidhi h tune abhi teesri wali se nahi mila vo pattaka h, thode din me vo teri maa ko bhi siddha kardegi

Rajat - mom ko siddha kardegi , usme asa kya h jo mom se bhi jada teez h

Sareen - chal milata hu

They both went to shastri ji's house

Sareen - shastri ji Namaste , dekho mene kise laya hu ,mere fauji ko

Rajat - Namaste beta , rajat touches shastri ji's feet

Shastri ji - aao aao Namaste beta , jite raho

Sareen - ghar itna shant h , beti kaha h dekh nahi rahi

Shastri ji - apne room me hogi , anu dev anamika kaha ho dekho kon aya h

Anu and dev comes

Sareen - inhe to tu pehele mil chukka h , fir bhi ye dev aur ye anu

Anu - Namaste

Rajat - Namaste , hi dev

Dev - hi

Sareen - anamika kaha h

Anamika - hum aagae uncle...shocked to see rajat

Anamika - rajat ...tu yaha kese ????

Rajat- anni tu

They both give each othera tight hug , rajat kisses her forehead

Anamika - tu kaha chale gaya tha mene tujhe kitna miss kiya , me terese gussa hu ja


jisne bhi character sketch ache se padha hoga usse pata hoga ki anamika aur rajat ek dusre ko jante h


hope u all like it , fingure cossed

Edited by iqrak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update-brisk and full of happenings👏
Somehow can't help wishing that anu would mistake Minty ( and not Rajat) for a thief -love
the thought - Anu thrashing Minty with a stick and minty screaming , running
around!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow iqru!!! this was an amzing update!!!😃 rajat has bonded well with dev and now anamika also?? i think veer would have introduced anamika to rajat!!!😉 iqru i love the way u show the sisters bond!! its so nice!!! and the terrace scene of anuraj by god!!! it was so super cute!!!😳 even i am curious to know anu's past😛 but i know there is time for that😃 on the whole lovely upddate iqru!!!! love u!!!!!❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LoneSoldier

Nice update-brisk and full of happenings👏

Somehow can't help wishing that anu would mistake Minty ( and not Rajat) for a thief -love
the thought - Anu thrashing Minty with a stick and minty screaming , running
around!😆

oh leela!!!🤣 bwahahaha🤣🤣 i think u have a very strong connection with minty!!!🤣 u never leave a chance to troll her🤣 i loved this one!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update iqra darling 🤗 love terrace scene 😳
Leelalore thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shrividhya

oh leela!!!🤣 bwahahaha🤣🤣 i think u have a very strong connection with minty!!!🤣 u never leave a chance to troll her🤣 i loved this one!!!

Thanks Dear !😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...😊😊
I love it very much..😛😛
But ek confusion hai k rAjat or anamika ek doarey ko kesa jante hain...plz next chapter fast update kar dein...
iqrak thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LoneSoldier

Nice update-brisk and full of happenings👏

Somehow can't help wishing that anu would mistake Minty ( and not Rajat) for a thief -love
the thought - Anu thrashing Minty with a stick and minty screaming , running
around!😆

hahah😆😆pehele yahi socha tha then thought rajat ko hi maar kila dete h , thank u so much for reading 😊
iqrak thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shrividhya

wow iqru!!! this was an amzing update!!!😃 rajat has bonded well with dev and now anamika also?? i think veer would have introduced anamika to rajat!!!😉 iqru i love the way u show the sisters bond!! its so nice!!! and the terrace scene of anuraj by god!!! it was so super cute!!!😳 even i am curious to know anu's past😛 but i know there is time for that😃 on the whole lovely upddate iqru!!!! love u!!!!!❤️🤗

next to next chp me pata chal gaega anu ka past 😉 aww thanks shri ur comment had encourage me 😳thanks for reading love u too 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Iqru meri superstar ⭐️
Loved the update 😃


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