ANURAJ FF-bas teraa sath ho...chahe jo baat ho.. (updated chp 5A pg22) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
wow superb dear 👏
rajat 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: R95510

hi iqrak, super chapter 2. i liked rajat entry scene. i think they should show all the girls after rajju in ss too . atleast let us see anu mata in jealous mode in ss. poor rajju iqrak , you did not even feed him pani poori. i am waiting for your anuraj story

thanks i am glad u liked it next chp coming soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Divya--

wow superb dear 👏

rajat 😳

thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: poorva22

hey saibaan pls kisi cheez k liye sorry mat bolo ur update was awesome padhke mazaa gaya😃

ITTI SI HASEE ITTI SI KHUSHI ITTASA TUKDA CHAAND KA... i loved the way u showed the sisterly bonding👏, iss maamle mein the cvs need to learn very much

RAJAT NE MAARI ENTRIYAAN, MERE DIL MEIN BAJI GHANTIYAAN....- haaye woh photo dekhke actually mein mujhe kuch kuch hone lagaa😳 aur rajat ki deewaniyaan toh sirf lajpatnagar mein nahi poori duniya mein hai😉, haaye hero ko pani poori pasand hai lekin bichara phass gaya saari ladkiyaan peeche pad gayi but his entry showed that such a gentleman he is😳, so rajat ka characterization bohot acchhaa hai👍🏼

i say keep up the good work, eagarly waiting for the next update, now i wanna know k jab anu meets rajat tob hota kya hai??? 😉- will it be a formal meeting and greeting or a casual one, haste haste milenge ya ladte ladte, eager to know how ur anuraj turns out to be😃

again thank u for such a lovely update😃🤗

awww after reading ur comment i am on the 9th cloud thank u so much yaar it realy means a lot to me ur comment had realy encorages me very much love u poorva thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

CHAPTER 3

Rajat reach home

Rajat - mom , dad , neil dekho kon aaya h

Minty - are beta tu aa gaya they both hug each other

Sareen - are mera fauji , jis kaam se gaya tha vo pura hua

Rajat - ha dad sab kuch ache se ho gaya

Minty - are baad me puch lena beta tub eth me tere liye kuch bana ke lati hu...

Rajat - mom abhi nahi mujhe kuch kaam se bhaar jana h

Minty - abhi to aya h baad me chae jana beta

Rajat - mom urgent kaam h

Minty - theek h lakin jaldi ana

Rajat - theek h meri pyari mom

Rajat goes to his room

At shastris house

Anu - jaldi chalo anamika , market jaa rahe h shaadi me nahi kitna taiyar hogi

Anamika - aa rahe h ek min

They both went to the market

Anu - chalo ab tailor ke yaha chalet h

Anamika - tum sabhji leke jaogi tailor ke idhar ,ek kaam karo tum ghar jao, hum jake tailor ko kapde deke ate h theek

Anu - acha theekh jaldi aana aur sambhal ke jao

Anamika - hum tumhe 3 saal ke bache dekh rahe h kya jo sambhal ke jana

Anu - acha theek h baba sorry ab jao ..

Anu reach the gate of sareen house

Anu ke side se ek bike jati h and galti se anu pe kichad uchhal jata h

Anu - ahhh ye kya ... excuse me oo hero ruko tumne hamare kapde ka kya haal kiya dekhke nahi chala sakte the kya , andhe ho kya , samajh me nahi ata delhi me kese kese log rahete h 😡

its none other than our hero RAJAT SAREEN

Rajat apni bike se utarta h


and anu ke paas sunglasses utarta hue ata h


Anu - hamare samajh me nahi aa raha sara kapdha kharab kar diye ...😡

Rajat comes and put his fingers on anus lips

Rajat - shhh ...kitna chila kyu rahi ho , me behera nahi hu ,aur galti se ho gaya iska issue mat banao

Anu - behare to nahi lakin adhe jarur ho , sorry bolne ki bajhe hame bol rahe ho ki hum issue bana rahe h , hume sorry bolo nahi to hum...😡

Rajat nahi to kya ... Sorry bolne se tumhara kapda saaf ho jaega

Anu - nahi to hum ...

Anu apna hath rajat ke uniform me pochti h

Rajat - ah what is this??? khush ho gai mera kapda kharab karke

Anu - sorry bol diye hote to hum asa nahi karte

Rajat - are meri maa (joining his hand) sorry ab jau ki chaar pach aur sorry bolu

Anu - its ok ab aap ja sakte h ...

Rajat pov - kese kese log se mera pala padh raha h ajj pehele to vo girls ab ye

As rajat turns to go inside

Anu -excuse me

Rajat turns behind - ab kya ek sorry me khush nahi hui kya aur sorry bolu

Anu - nahi vo hum ... Vo hum aap ko sorry bolna chah rahe h apki uniform humne gandi kardi na isliye

Rajat - its ok...

As rajat turns

Anu - excuse me ...

Rajat again turns behind - ab kya hua ab to mene tumhari sorry bhi accept kar li, ab kya jaan logi

Anu -ye lijiye jab app hum app ko chila rahe the to ye app ka purse gir gaya tha

Rajat - oh , sorry mujhe laga ki...

Anu - its ok sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi

As anu turns to go inside

Rajat - excuse me

Anu - ha ...

Rajat -thank a lot

Anu - thanks kiske liye tumhara uniform ganda kiya isliye . do fir aur kar dete h ganda

Rajat - hahah nahi purse lotane ke liye

They both give sweet smile to each other

As rajat turns to go inside

Anu - are ab ap hamara naam minty aunty ko kyu bolne jaa rahi ho ab to sab kuch sortout ho gaya

Rajat - asi halat me to office ja nahi sakta to change karne jaa raha

Anu - lakin miny aunty ke ghar ...

Rajat - are mera ghar h me minty aunty ka beta hu ... tum minty aunty ko kese janti tumhe kabhi ghar pe aae nahi dekha

Anu -acha ap minty aunty ke bete h (joins her hand ) hum anushka shastri aap ke upar rahene aae h hum kal hi Kanpur se idhar shift hue h

Rajat - oh ,Namaste anushka me rajat sareen , yaar hum donoto padosi nikle , tum dad ke frnd ki beti ho na dad ne bataya tha

Anu - ha hum ...

Dev - are anu tum yaha khadi ho jaldi upper chalo hams eek galti ho gai

When she sees anu shocked

Dev (shocked)- ye Bandar jesa apna haal kyu banai ho

Anu - chup raho

Rajat - Bandar haha good ha 😆

Dev - ye kon h , tum hame mana karti hokisi stranger se baat mat kara karo aur khudhi kisi se baat karna shuru kr deti ho

Anu - ye vo minty aunty ke bade bete h rajat

Dev - oh hi hum deviyani shastri apke upar wale ghar me rahene aae h

Rajat - pata h ... Nice to meet u dev

Dev - hume bhi aap se milkar acha laga ... Sorry hum aap se baad me milte h, anu jaldi chalo bawaali aagi to hume maar degi

Anu - ha chal rahe h Namaste rajat

Rajat- Namaste

Dev - Namaste baa me bolna abhi jaldi chalo ,bye rajat baad me milte h

Rajat - bye see u later

They both go to their house

Minty - rajat ye kya haal banaya h apna (shocked)tu to ...

Rajat - are mom kuch nahi galti se ho gaya ... Me change karke ata hu

As rajat go inside neil comes

Neil - mom bhai ke sath bhot bura hua h anu ne bhai ko bhot sunaya aur unpe kicard bhi dala and bhai ko bhot bura bhala bhi kaha

Minty - kya in beheno ki itni himmat pehele tujhe data khilane ki koshish ki ab rajat ko ... inko to me abhi jake batati hu

Neil (pov)- ab to ye behene gai kaam se mom inhe chodegi nahi ab maza aaega vo dono behen apne aap ko kya samajhti h ab me inhe itna pareshan karuga ki dono mujhe se mafi mangne ke liye majbur ho jae

I HOPE TUMLOG KO YE CHP PASAND AAEGA , FINGER CROSSED 😳

Edited by iqrak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
wow lovely lovely lovely enjoy reading it i want to read again n again anuraj convo to superb 👏 boht maza aya cant wait for next chp
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Enjoyed it thoroughly. Good start of rajat and Anu's
story.lovely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i simply loved saari sister's ka characterization- anamika is bold, anu is innocent and dev is bindass, like the way they should be👍🏼

SILSILA YE SORRY KA AAKHIR KHATAM HO HI GAYA...- lekin sorry se bachhe toh namastey mein jaake atke😆


ACCHHAJI HUM CHALTE HAI...- lekin jo tera ghar wahi mera ghar😉
yaar it was too good, first meeting mein kya nok jhok thi anuraj ki padhke by god mazaa aa gaya main toh coninuously hass rahi thhi😆

and rajat in uniform is too hot too handle meri toh heartbeat ruk gayi and uske goggles kasam se saibaan maar hi daalaa but the hero is such a gentleman😳

and neil ka kuch nahi ho sakta woh mamma's boy tha, hai aur hamesha rahega🤢

keep up the good work and m eagerly waiting for the next update ab mujhe jannaa hai aakhir what is minty going to do?? and according to ur story uske liye dev aur anamika hi kaafi hai😉😆
love u saibaan❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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iqru baby!!!!! loved every bit of the chapter 😳 it was amazing aur anuraj ke first meeting was amazing😃 the whole convo was bang on!!!!😉 aur rajat ke pics ne toh mujhe maar hi dal diya yaar😳 always love the way u show the sis bond! mujhe anu anamika and dev theeno bahut pasand hai!!! ab i wanna c dev ne kya gadbad ki aur minty aunty aake kya sunane waali hai😛
neil ko koi badal nahi sakta😕
on the whole lovely update iqruuu🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg awesome awesome chapter too good loved it from the start till the end awww so cute anuraj...lovely the pics made me remember those so lovely scenes...and the way both anuraj handeled the situation on their first meet was too good...keep it up nice one dear...

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