*Friends Forever* PART 2 pg#8 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
I liked character sketch because of no negativity but AnuRaj r cousins is a very much different and new thing for me...may be till today didn't watch any show which has this concept ..but looking forward for the FF...I wanna give a try to this for my AnuRaj..
And plz continue soon ..waiting for the update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Guyss don't be confused just enjoy it😊
Your all confusion will be cleared through my updates😊
and yeah I'm bored with the same rona dhona let's have thing new I hope you all will like it
I knw lead being cousins is new concept in my story bt agr mae wohi normal wohi story likhti tou kuch new kese hota aur parhne mae b kch different nhi milta na that's y i thought this concept😊

I'm hoping that you all will like it😳

if you still have any confusion do just let me know I will try to clear them😊

and yeah i'm posting part 1 but if I won't get enough response I won't continue I hope u can understand us(writer's)

& If u want fast updates then I'm ready but it all depends on response😊

hahah bht zyda bl dya na now I should write part 1😛


PART 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
A short description for u all :

Narayan Shastri and Sareen shastri are brothers.
Anushka mother died when she was 10.
Minty and sareen treat her like thr daughter.




Edited by koolgurl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hi Hameeda...you are cliff-hanging us for too long now...please update soon...⭐️ Lol...I'm ordering you..when myself I take so long to update next chapter of my FF "It's all about love"...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Waiting ..plz update soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Yaar wen will u update part 1 eagerly waiting!!!
Edited by shrividhya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
oops sorry guys for late update...

Part 1




A new bright day...


''Rajat rajat rajat where the hell r u???'' Anu shouted.

''what happened anu?'' Said minty
''Aunty whr is rajat we are getting late for class. Wait wait is he awake???'' anu asked surprisingly
''You know him how he is.. go n make him awake.'' Said minty

Rajat!!!😡 anu went in his room

''Now u r gone rajat my boy.'' said minty while smiling

Anu pour the bucket of water on rajat


''Ahhh who is this? What happened? Bahar kahn se agae mere room mae???'' Said rajat
''Idiot, wake up bahar nhi ae hai, its me anu. Why r u not awake till yet??? Have you seen time??? Mene tmhein 2 hrs pehle uthaya tha tm phr sogae???'' Said anu angrily


''Ohh han sorry bt abhi tou bht tym hai sirf 5 mins soney do bht acha khuwab dekh rha tha yr..." after saying it rajat slept again.

''oye it's already 8:30, you have only five mins or else i'll alone for uni'' said anu

''arey yr 5 mins bht kaam hain wait na kese akele auto mae tm jaoge" rajat said.
''oh bhool hai tmhare me tmhare car lekr jaounge auto mae aoga tm!'' said anu

''What????? this is cheating yr ok wait I'm coming in 2 mins plz mjhe chor kr mt jana." said rajat

anushka was waiting in rajat car...

rajat came out mom woh tofan kahn hai?
''she is out, waiting for u...'' said minty
oh ok bye
minty: arey kch khaa tou le rajat...
rajat: abhi nhi maa warna woh tofan mjhe chor kr chali jaege

he ran outside at the same time anu starts driving rajat ran behind the car

rajat: anu stop yr
anu: u r late
rajat: arey yr sirf 1 min hi tou late huwa hn plz iss br maaf krdo
anu: no, see you in uni ⭐️ while saying this she left from there with a smile😆


after 20 mins rajat reached uni

neel: arey bhai kahan reh gaya tha
rajat: jb tere sath hoga na torture tb pochounga
neel: hain? huwa kya bhae bta tou?
rajat told him everything

neel was laughing 😆😆😆

rajat: hass le beta tera b waqt aega...

just then anu n devyani came

anu: tou maza aya???

neel anu and devyani were laughing alot

rajat: bs ab dair nhi horhi anu cls ka lye???😕

anu: han han chalo cls ka lye

rajat starts walking while anu devyani and neel were behind him and were continuously talking in slow volume

rajat: tm teenoun nhi bacho ge mjhse

just then they entered in class and started doing thr work when suddenly class teacher came

sir: students aj ek new admission apki class mae arahi hain please take good care of her

everyone: sure sir

END

sorry for the mistakes wrote it in damn hurry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by amfi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Finally you updated Hameeda.
But it is very short.

I was happy reading it , wanted to read more.

I hope you update the next chapter soon.

A part from complaining. I enjoyed reading the first chapter..good start. Anu is like a toofan. But I don't think Rajat will be left far behind. I am sure he is going to give her sleepless nights.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Very nice update hameeda!!! Loved rajat and Anu convo!!!

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