Just friends ? Or more than that .....(AnuRaj and DevIl ff ) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

nice teaser waiting eagerly for ur ff plzz update soon
all the best 👍🏼

thank u dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note on the story
Though I kept the characters of Shastri sisters , the story line of this ff does not match with the show . Some characters will be changed and some may not be in the ff . I will introduce new characters and new changes such as it is Devyani Iyer and Anushka Iyer not Shastri and Rajat and Neil are Singh .
Hope the changes are accepted and keep reading the ff and giving back your valuable opinion. U can kill me and hit me with tomatoes if u want and can criticise me also . It is all welcomed .

Thanks ,
The author
~Sam
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Episode one
"What ? Kya tum mujhe blame kar rahe ho ? " asked Devyani in an angry voice hitting her bestie Neil with a file .

"Aur nahi toh Kya hamesha se tum hi ho mere saree break up k wajah ! Iss baar bhi tumhare vajese break up hua hai ! "Blamed Neil as he tried to save himself from the attacks of Devyani.

"Ah ha ! Ha ! Tum apni girlfriend nahi samal sakte aur dosh mujhe paar huh! Nan u verukkiren ! ( I hate u ) "replied Devyani now hitting Neil hard on his back with her hands.

"What stop giving me scolding in your language ! If u have guts then tell everything in Hindi get it ! Tum darti ho ki agar kuch kaho gi toh main tumhe kuch karunga issi liye toh chup chup k roti ho ! "Neil said in a mocking tone which was enough for Devyani to blast off.
"God what did I say ? Nuclear boom ko blast kardiya! ,"thought Neil as he waited for the deadly attack of Devyani which he knew would break him into pieces .

"Kya ? Main darti hu ? Main ? Devyani Iyer kissi darti nahi hai ! Yeh toh tu hai jo bachpan se ek ladki ki maar khata hai woh bhi meri maar ! aur keh te ho ki meh daar pog ! U Muttal (idiot ) " said Devyani as she chased Neil around the canteen and followed him running to the library .

"God why are they fighting ? "Asked a boy to another surprised at this behaviour of Devyani and Neil .

" U r new here but this is Nothing new here, daily one ! Neil and Devyani can not live without fighting with each other or should I say they can not live without each other ! "

...

"No no no please ! No no do not take that ! Please "a girl shouted as she struggled with a boy to get a book .

"No no Rajat please give it back to me "begged Anushka aka Anu as she chased Rajat around her room .

"Kyu Anu hamse kya chupa rahi ho ? Come on ab bata hi doo na ! "Said Rajat in a teasing as he continued to run around Anu 's room with her diary .

"Anu ki diary ! Mera dost ! "Rajat read out loud from the first page of the diary .

"No please Rajat , chod doo usse , please mujhe woh wapas de doo na "Anu begged again but Rajat was not in the mood to listen . He kept on running and ran down the stairs jumping half the part and Anu followed him .

Rajat again turned to next page and said ,

"Wow Anu ! This is your pic when u were small ! I totally had forgotten how u were in your childhood . Thanks to your dairy it refreshed my memory of the child Anu who would run here and there wearing those tiny anklets and would irritate everyone ! "
Picture of Anu in the diary 😳

"No Rajat I din irritate people like u did , now please give me back my diary please. "Requested Anu again as she followed him out of her house to the backyard .

"Enru ennitam kotukka ! (Give me that ! )" shouted Anu now disappointed enough but Rajat did not response instead he was busy turning the pages and smiling as he read them .

Anu was angry and embarrassed enough to snatch the diary from Rajat 's hand and was about to scold him when Minty came and stared at them especially at Anu . Anu felt awkward and greeting Minty went from them hitting slowly and silently Rajat with her diary. Rajat in reply pulled her towards him and whispered in her ears as Minty was now not looking at them but buying some vegetables ,
"I will give u the real reply to this in the terrace at night ! "

"I m not coming "Anu replied freeing herself form his grip and winking at him .

"U will surely come ! "Said Rajat to himself.

...

"What were u doing with that Madrasan again ? "Asked Minty in an angry and disappointed voice as Rajat entered the house after sometime .

"Tamilian ! Mom" Rajat replied , "and why do u get angry every time I meet Anu ? "

"Because I hate her and her sister . It would have been better if they had never entered our life ! "Replied Minty chopping the vegetables with all her force as if she was trying to take out all her anger in the veggies .

"Why do u hate them so much mom ? U know she is my friend ! "Said Rajat with a tinge of anger in his voice.

"Friends! Good now u also say that and give your life for her ! "

"Mom , can u stop it ? "Asked Rajat in an annoyed voice as he had it too much .

"Why should I ? Because of that friend of yours my Meera is not with me today !"

"Mom why do blame Anu for all that happened ? It is past forget it all" Rajat said trying hard not remember the past and bring it alive again .

"Yes yes ! It is not her fault and let's forget it right ! U can forget it Rajat but not me . Tumhe Kya lagta hai ki time k sath sab kuch badal jayega huh ? Kuch nahi badla hai ! Kal bhi Anu hi uss hasse k liye jimedar thi aur aja bhi hai mere liye . Ab chahe tum jo socho Rajat ! " minty said with some tears in her eyes .

Rajat knew that it was no use arguing with minty so he just walked away from there .

"Today I m wrong for u Rajat lekin ek din tumhe bhi pata chalega ki kyon sahi aur kyon galat ! "

Spoiler : AnuRaj in the terrace , and Neil asking for forgiveness to Devyani .

---TBC---
Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinion . I m not a South Indian so maybe the spelling of the words that I kept be wrong I just wrote it with the help of my bhabi . If anything wrong u can hit me or kill me . I hope I could satisfy u all and I kept half of the update in Hindi without translation , hope everyone here understands the language if not do tell me I will keep the translation in the next part .

Love
~Sam
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
a really good chapter sam, i really liked it now eagerly waiting for the next one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Texie!!!! The update was very nice!!! It was a very nice starts with so much of hidden story in it! the Meera part!!!😃 And ya even im a South Indian!! And Tamilian and u mentioned some things wrong in tamil!!! I think u added some other language to it!!!!😆 Anyways that doesn't matter till v hav the translation!!!!😉 Hope u update the next parts asap!!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i wanna know what happened in the past...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow the teaser was so good😃then how must be the part 1😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sam 😡

😭 very bad yaaar...you dint pm me for this??!

i too love ss and devil and anuraj
why you dint?? 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hi Sam.
I enjoyed reading the first chapter.

I like Deveel's fights. Also AnuRaj's friendship is such a delightful one.

Plz update soon.

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