destined to be together chapter 22 updated pg 30

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Dear anuraj fans i present to you an anuraj ff hope you enjoy it and please give your feedback

So the character sketch of my ff is as follows-

The shastri's-

Shastriiji- 53 year old- a doting father who is both mother and father to his daughters

Alka shastri-24 year old- a shy, simple and sensitive person, an obedient daughter and a strong support system for her sisters

Anushka shastri-21 year old- a person never to be messed up with, who cannot stand anything wrong going on around her and for whom family is her priority.

Devyani shastri-20 year old- a pampered young girl who is bold and thinks herself to be the most beautiful, she thinks that every other guy on this earth can fall for her beauty, a typical bollywood fan

Peeya shastri- 16 year old- youngest of sisters, a typical bookwarm and is always the jagga jasoos when the shastri sisters are upto some investigations

The sareen's

Sareen- a loving hubby, a cool dad who is the main centre of attraction in sareen house

Minty sareen- 48 year old- a typical loud Punjabi woman who holds her head very high and is pampered and so tolerated by her family, a possessive mom

Rajat sareen-25 year old- an air force officer who is the most eligible bachelor in town for now, girls can commit crimes for one glance of his

Neil sareen-21 year old- a young ambitious boy who loves music and is pampered by his mom

So these are my main characters other characters will unveil as the story goes on

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Ch 1- woh pehli baar jab hum mile

Squadron leader rajat sareen is recently posted in delhi and is very happy that he will live with his family now. He is also assigned the duty of an NCC instructor in st. Xaviers college

SCENE- ST XAVIERS COLLEGE, DELHI

Rajat has just started the training session with his newly arrived cadets, he speaks about the forces, the discipline and... suddenly a girl arrives from nowhere pulls one of rajat's cadet out and slaps him making his face soar red

RAJAT- what the hell is going on here?

ANUSHKA- you really seem to talk high standards about discipline but first of all teach your cadets how to behave with girls in a decent manner.

RAJAT- what are you saying girl, please explain

ANUSHKA- I don't need to explain anything to you, now m gonna drag this shameless creep to the principal's office

NITIN (THE GUY)- ohh please anushka shastri don't you know who i m

ANUSHKA- he shankarji, all my dear friends this fellow has forgotten who he is so please help him regain his memory.(everybody starts laughing)

RAJAT- this is my class not a circus to joke around.

ANUSHKA- with the kind of students you have, it seriously looks like a big joke

RAJAT- will you...

At that time devyani arrives with a group of girls and they forcefully drag nitin to the principal's office

RAJAT- (feeling disgusted) students we have had enough for today, class dismissed.

He gets a call from the headquaters, he attends it and then goes to the principal's office to see what actually is going on, he sees the principal leaving and there are just two girls standing near his office and talking. He goes closer...

PREETI(ANU'S CLASSMATE)- anu thank you so much for helping me just because of you that nitin is rusticated from the college. I know i should be ashamed of how i bullied you when you came to the college but today you shastri sisters were the only one to come to help me.

ANUSHKA- oh preeti i forgive you for whatsoever has happened, but now you need to stay strong against that moron nitin

PREETI- yeah he had made my life a living hell

Rajat hears this and goes to talk to them

RAJAT- please ladies let me know what all is going on?

PREETI- sir, that nitin was following me, eve teasing me and he even got my phone no.

RAJAT- OOOK but dear if anything happens, or he is trying to call you again you are free to approach me.

PREETI- thank you so much sir (she leaves)

Rajat understands why was anu behaving in such a manner, he thinks of it and smiles he turns to go and anu stops him

ANUSHKA- sir i m really sorry for whatever happened in your training session

RAJAT- what you did was completely right you don't need to be sorry for anything

ANUSHKA- m sorry for the way i talked to you, even if i was agitated with what nitin did, i should not have talked to you like that but you know what i was so pissed off on him what does he think that if he is a minister's son he can conquer the world or what(her tone growing louder)

RAJAT- relax anushka i m srsly ok with it.

Anushka turns to leave

RAJAT- can i drop you some where

ANUSHKA- no sir thank you very much i will manage

RAJAT- (puts his hand forward)- by the way m squadron leader rajat sareen

ANUSHKA-(looks at the watch)-(in a hurry) i m TY student anushka shastri, sorry but m getting late. Namastey!

Brings his hands together and does a namastey with amazement

Anushka leaves

RAJAT- smart girl indeed

Rajat smiles and leaves

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please friends let me know your feedback
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please friends let me know your feedback[/QUOTE Loved it...great beginning...👍🏼 Me too I have started writing my first ever FF on Anuraj "It's all about love" did you read it...😉 I will update chapter 3 (first part) by Saturday...⭐️
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Originally posted by: Waida1234

thank you so much waida and yeah i really loved your ff- its all about love and m eagerly waiting for saturday to come😃 i will update my FF 2morrow and hey thanks a lot

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Originally posted by: poorva22

Sincerely hope that other members will join us in writing either os/ss or ff on Anuraj and Devil...will wait for your update..😉

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Great start Poorva.
i5is a beautiful FF.

I am waiting for next update.
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Good one poorva looking forward for ur ff also!!!!!!!!😃
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thank you very much everybody for appreciating my debut FF
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Ch 2- teri galiyan

Rajat is packing his bags in the delhi air force base to go home. He is very much excited as he will surprise his parents on their wedding anniversary

Scene: sareen house

Sareen- oyye minty darling, today m more than happy that my best friend has finally come to stay with us

Minty- and he has brought his four daughters as extra baggage to do siyaapa on my head

Sareen- pls don't speak like this. They are our daughters also na

Minty- oooh sareensaab, i just have two sons, my betu rajat and shona neil.

Neil- just chill mom dad is just helping his friend, you know a friend in need is a friend indeed

Minty- sareensaab you can remember your best friend but you always forget your wife.

Sareen- soniyo, relax kar i remember today is our wedding anniversary( he makes her wear a necklace)

Minty- thank you sareen saab

Neil- how romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Devyani, alka and piya come and wish them

(minty goes to the kitchen)

Sareen- devyani beta, where is anu?

Devyani- uncleji she has gone to the bookstore

Sareen- ok, beta there is puja in the house in the evening so pls come and help your aunty

Alka- ok uncleji

Then the doorbell rings, neil goes to open the door and surprise, surprise its his brother rajat, neil is about to call everybody but rajat signs him to keep quite and then as he enters the house his father sees him but neil and rajat both sign him to keep quite as he wants to surprise his mom seeing sareen giving signs devyani turns and shouts in full volume

Devyani- ohhh my goddd, rajat sareen(as she is so excited seeing him)

Minty comes in and sees rajat and she is more than happy. They both hug each other, greet each other and then sareen introduces him to shastri sisters. He greets alka, piya introducing himself and finally devyani

Rajat- so you know me right

Devyani- who does'nt know you, you are a star sensation of our college

Rajat- you don't need to be modest dear.

Devyani- dear( she starts dreaming that she and rajat are dancing on the song tum hi ho)

Rajat- you look pretty in pink

Devyani (blushing)- you are also looking verrryyy handsome

Minty(giving her a look)- devyani had enough compliments for today

Alka looking embarrassed, all sisters leave

2 hours later...

Rajat is in the market adjoining his house and he sees anushka walking with an elderly person who is blessing her for she helped him cross the road, he smiles seeing her and as he moves towards her she is asking an autowala some address

Rajat- did you lose your way

Anushka- sir, you here, yeah can you tell me where kunj vihar is

Rajat- ohh, you wanna go there, its just the backside, come with me i live there

Anushka- just a second(she goes to the autowala) if next time you told any address in such a manner then i will make sure that you remember the address of the police station.

Rajat is amazed with anushka's bold way to answer. Anu and rajat leave

Rajat- soo you are a person with whom one should never mess up with

Anushka- i take it as a compliment but yeah if somebody has done something wrong then never ever

Rajat- so you new in delhi,

Anushka- yes, its just been two days and today i lost my way from the circle ahead

Rajat- oh the society begins from here only

Anushka- thank you sir, i will go on my own coz now i need to go to the vegetable market, she leaves and rajat follows her. She goes to a vegetable vendor and starts bargaining.

Anu- what is this bhaiyya this cabbage is not even fresh and you charge rs. 40 per kilo

Vendor- ohh madam buy it if you want otherwise leave

Anushka- ohh bhhaiyya, first learn the way to talk and then sell these stale vegetables

She goes to another vendor, rajat still following her. She buys a bag full of vegetables from there.

Vendor- madam, you need to pay rs. 340.

Anu- what 340, she says give me exact prices (the vendor does that so and she blows up on him), bhaiyya why did you lie for rs.30 with me(and she gives him a good lecture then)

Vendor- ok sorry madam(looking towards rajat) bhaisaab pls take bhabhiji away from here(rajat standing behind anu, listening to this both are shocked)

Anu- what bhabhiji, listen just keep your mouthshut and mind your own business if you wanna save it

Rajat- (embarrassed) pls anu lets go

They both leave.

Rajat- anu why did you blow up on that vendor for just rs. 30

Anu- he lied to me and abhove all its someone's hard earned money

Rajat- impressive

Anu stops

Rajat(surprised)- you live here

Anu- yeah

Rajat- dear this is my house

Anu- so you are sareen uncle's son

Rajat- yeah

Anu- i came to live here as pg

Rajat- so you are shastri uncle's daughter

Both start smiling

rajat- so officially, hi miss anushka shastri, i m squadron leader rajat sareen and your to be neighbour

anushka amazed to see how flattering rajat can be

minty comes there and sees both of them together(he matarani, peyy gya siyaapaa) and she asks anu for the vegetables she had asked to bring. Anu gives her the money back and he remembers the way she tolked to the vendor and he starts smiling

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