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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2: A New Friend
A boy stepped in between the crowd and tapped the shoulder of the boy who was joking on them. 'Move,' he ordered. 'Who are you ordering? Look at them, joint people, as if someone glued them together,' he laughed. 'Viraaj never ever lets people bully each other, move away,' he said with attitude to the laughing boy and he went. 'Hi, I am Viraaj Singh,' he introduced himself to them. They too introduced themselves to him and forwarded their hands in front of him. He shook both the hands together and they smiled at each other.


They went to the class together. 'At least your mood is fine now, I can't see you crying,' Sonia said looking at her left side at Soumya. 'Neither can I,' she replied and wiped her tears and they smiled at each other. Later that day, when they returned home and went in their room and had freshened up, Manindar came to their room with something hidden behind him. 'My child, I have something for you,' he said with a smile on his face. He asked them to forward their hands. They both did so and he kept a musical toy in Sonia's hand.

She looked at the toy and then at him. 'Thank you papa,' she said smilingly. 'And for me?', asked Soumya with a frown on her face. He looked down at first and then at her. He caressed her cheek. 'This is for you both, I know she will share it with you,' he said and smiled at her for the first time in his whole life. Although it was a fake smile, it pleased her. He went from there and Sonia turned on the music and kept it between them. 'Soumya, papa said right, we can share everything we have, what's the difference? When you and I share same looks and clothes, then why not toys?', Sonia said trying to make her happy.

'But Sonia, why doesn't he loves me?', she asked. 'No, he loves us equally else he would've asked me not to share it with you,' Sonia replied and held her face turning her face towards herself. 'Why do you get sad in small matters? Smile else,' she said and her other hand went towards her stomach but she didn't saw it. 'Else what?', she asked and without warning, Sonia's hand went closer to her stomach and started tickling her.

She jumped with a sudden roar of laughter and pushed her hands. 'No more please no more, leave me, hahaha, stop,' she said panting heavily. Nimmi entered there and smiled at them. 'Sonia, leave her, and Soumya don't get sad, I will bring toys for you both,' she said and they hugged her. Later at night, Soumya and Sonia had slept, Nimmi was packing their school bags and just then Manindar entered in their room. 'Why are you doing all this? Sending Soumya to school and upbringing her like a normal child won't change the truth, she is..,' he was interrupted by her.

'She's my daughter no matter what and you can't change this, she's your daughter too. You might've seen many dreams of separating her from Sonia and sending her away from me, but you should stop this daydreaming and come to real world, she will be with me forever and even if I die, Sonia will take care of her, you'll see,' she replied. 'One day Soumya will say to you that why you kept her alive even after so much distance between you and papa and when Sonia gets to know the truth, she will say that why you didn't let papa separate us at birth,' he said.


'Sonia will be very intelligent till then and she will fight for her, she will say to you that why you didn't gave her love,' she replied. 'No, Sonia will not fight for her, she will live her life, and Soumya will go where she has to go one day and you know what I mean, I will separate them,' he replied. 'Why you give her pain? She's your daughter too, she has seen pain from her childhood, please stop all this, I can't tolerate it so she's a child.'

'One day when Sonia will marry and everyone will ask why Soumya didn't marry then you will know,' he said and went. Tears rolled down her cheeks. 'I know God will do something for my Somu, He can't be so cruel, if no one then He will take care of my Somu,' she sobbed. 'Maa why are you crying?', Soumya woke up and asked. 'Nothing, you sleep,' she said wiping her tears. 'Maa, are you angry on me as I asked for toy from papa?', she asked. 'No, you are my fairy, how can I be angry on you, sleep,' she replied.

She slept. Nimmi too slept tying her hand with Soumya's hand. Next day, in morning, after the sisters went to school, Nimmi was sewing clothes for them. She sew many of them and kept it in their cupboard locking it. As she turned to go, she froze on her place. Manindar stood behind her. 'Lunch will be ready in fifteen minutes, I will bring it to you,' she said. 'You know me very well, I didn't came to ask for food, I came to say that don't do so much hardworking in sewing these clothes, what's the use?', he said.

'Soumya asked for something from you the first time else she gets happy in little things, you should understand this, you are a father that's why you don't know what is a mother's heart, if you were, you would've understood or should I say you wouldn't have had understood then also because you don't have brain, your skull is empty and there's nothing besides worms and hatred in it, if I could, I could've bought you a brand new brain,' she said and that was enough to boil his blood. He stormed off from the room.

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brand new brain...hahahahahahahahaha...

Nice update..

Thanx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a new guy.viraj.nice choice of actor.manindar giving toy only to Sonia.sad.but good that he told soumya that its for both as Sonia will share it with her.Sonia consoling soumya was lovely. nimmi is so nice.loved her last dialogues to manindar
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Thanks for pm and nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow nice updates loved both parts thank you for pm.
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nice update
waiting for next ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
Amazing update dear
Well written
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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good start..
congrats on your new story..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chp#3: Failure






Manindar stormed out of the room and went out of the house. He went to the hospital towards the reception. 'Where's Dr. Manisha's cabin?', he asked. 'Straight then right, but what's your name?', asked the receptionist. 'What has my name to do with her?', he asked. 'You can't meet her like this, you need an appointment, I will write an appointment for you that will be after a month,' she replied. His eyes widened. 'Next month? And you're saying as if it is tomorrow,' he said creasing his eyebrows. 'Sorry but you can't meet her without an appointment,' she said.

A lady doctor was walking past him, he saw her. 'Dr. Manisha,' he called. 'Yes?', she replied. 'I want tomorrow's appointment, actually you did delivery of my conjoined twin kids, so I think you can separate them?', he said. 'I am not free tomorrow, come day after tomorrow, but you need to sign some papers,' she said and he signed some papers but somewhere, Nimmi's signs were needed. He took the papers with him and went home. He his the papers seeing Nimmi and went to his room. He shut the door and took some papers out on which there was Nimmi's sign.

He smirked and practiced the sign multiple times and he signed the papers. 'Now no one can stop me from separating Sonia from Soumya,' he grinned sadistically. He opened the door and went outside and collided with Nimmi and the papers fell. 'Watch where you go,' he said angrily and left. She looked on doubtfully. She followed him by cab but missed him. She asked the driver to change the route and she stopped him outside Soumya and Sonia's school. She stepped down and after taking them with her, she sat in cab and went back to her house.

As they reached, they stepped out of the cab and paid the driver. She went inside with them to their room. 'I made many new clothes for you, you both tell which one you'll like,' she said. She showed them all the clothes and they chose one of them and she made them wear it.



Manindar watched them. 'You sit here, I will bring food for you,' she said and Manindar went from there before she saw him. He saw her going to kitchen and went to the twins' room. 'Won't you say hello to papa?', he said.



'Hello papa,' they said together and he smiled at them. 'I will take you out and buy ice cream for you both, I know you both love it and so you won't say no to papa, right?', he said keeping his one hand on Sonia's chin and one on Soumya's chin. They looked at each other and smiled and got down the bed. He took them with him. Nimmi came to their room and saw that they weren't there. She called them and got tensed. She checked every room but they weren't there. 'My kids, did he took them?'

She recalled seeing those papers falling from his hands. 'Did he took appointment from doctor to separate my kids? Oh no,' she said worriedly and ran out of the room. 'What happened Nimmo, why are you running?', said a woman worriedly stopping her. 'Soumya and Sonia aren't there in their room, he must've taken them, he will... no no, I will need to go Maa,' she said and ran out of the house. She looked here and there searching them by her eyes and saw them near an ice cream stall eating ice cream with Manindar. She sighed in relief and ran towards them.

People passed from front of her and she saw that they weren't there anymore. She ran towards the stall. 'That man and twin kids, did you saw them? Where did they go?', she asked. 'That direction,' he said pointing to the right and she ran from there thanking him and saw Manindar hiring a cab and about to sit in it. She ran as fast as her legs could carry her and reached near the cab and stopped him from closing the door. He pushed her away and closed the door. She asked the driver to wait and she sat inside from the opposite door.

'Take a u-turn,' she said and saw that her kids were unconscious. 'What did you do to them?', she asked holding his collars and slapped him tightly. He jerked away her hand. 'Stop it, its all because of you that my child faces troubles in school,' he accused her. 'Did Sonia say that she has problem with living like this? No right? Why are you risking their lives? This operation can even kill them,' she said. 'If Soumya dies, it will be a good news,' he said. 'You should be ashamed to give punishment to a girl of something which isn't her fault,' she said.

The cab driver stopped the car outside their house and she took the kids on her shoulder and walked inside towards their room and tried to wake them by splashing water on their face. 'Maa,' they said as they woke up and she hugged them. 'Are you alright?', she asked. 'Yes but how did we come here? We were with papa, was it all a dream that papa first time made me eat ice cream and took us out?', Soumya asked and Nimmi broke the hug and nodded in negative.

'That was truth, I told you that he loves you,' she said and smiled at them finding it hard to cry in front of them. 'Maa, will he love me like this always?', Soumya asked and a lone tear escaped Nimmi's eye. 'Yes, I will never let it get away from you,' she promised and kissed their foreheads and made them eat. Manindar looked on from outside the room. 'Again these false hopes,' he said irritatingly and stormed off to his room. She made them do homework and gave them a book for drawing and went outside.
Dhoop ho chhaon ho
Main tere saath hoon
Mere dil ki har dua hai tere liye
Rabb diyaan naimataan sab hai tere liye
Is jahan ki har khushi ho tere liye
Mammta meri saath tere ban k rahegi
Shakti shakti shakti shakti


She stopped outside Manindar's room. 'The plan was going so smooth, I made them unconscious and was taking them hospital to separate them but that Nimmi came, she's a resistance in my life,' he said to his mom. 'I want divorce,' Nimmi said standing at the entrance. She walked inside and stood in front of him. 'I won't be a resistance anymore because neither of my kids will stay with you, Sonia will also go with me,' she said. 'Where will you go?', he asked raising his eyebrows. 'Anywhere but not here, the world is very big,' she replied.

'If you had to go, you would've gone when they were born,' he taunted her. 'I didn't go because no matter how much distant we're, our children isn't responsible for that, they needed your love and still they need it, please don't play with Soumya's emotions, Sonia is also like her, both are equal,' she said. 'Sonia isn't like Soumya, please stop comparing them, conjoined bodies doesn't means conjoined character,' he replied. 'Then if you want Soumya to go away, then Sonia will also go,' she said. 'I will separate them,' he said. Nimmi called them and they came with their arm around each other.

'Somu, Sonu, papa wants to ask something from you both, don't decide in hurry,' she said. 'Papa wants to separate you both, I mean your bodies,' he said. They looked at each other and then at Nimmi. 'No, we won't ever separate,' Sonia said. 'Listen to me, your mother wants to go away from here with Soumya, she will have her and I also need someone with me as my life is incomplete, I want you Sonia, won't you listen to your papa?', he said emotionally blackmailing her. 'Sorry papa, I won't,' she replied and moved back as he cupped her cheek.

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh maninder tried to conduct the operation without informing nimmi.dress scene and the edit were cute. nimmi finding out maninder's plan and running after them to stop it was emotional. finally she stopped it.it's cruel from a father to think that soumya can die.nimmi should leave him.loved nimmi telling the truth to the kids and Sonia saying no to maninder

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