HaYa OS-'I'll Love you FOREVER'--Chap 3 Updtd on PG-7

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anitarani

@anitarani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Wow...truly...this is like reading a novel...lovely...

please do continue ...cant wait to see where

the hero has whisked off his ladylove...😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Superb update Divs 👏👏👏

This chapter was good in many terms .. Firstly the way Harman talks with Preeto was awesome .. He knows his mother so well that he can gauge her every move without her notice .. Preeto should now understand this fact that her evil tricks on Saumya or her honey dripping words wont work on Harman and neither he will give in so easily on Preeto's sweet behaviour 😆😆😆

Secondly I loved that here how Saumya is for once trying to keep Harman happy inspite of knowing what Preeto wants .. That scene where Saumya doesn't wanna spoil Harman's mood and wears his gifted saree was very nice .. Wish in show also she was shown like this 🤔🤔

Thirdly , I loved that POV of Saumya of what she felt on the 2nd marriage topic .. We hardly get Saumya's POV in the show and this was much needed to let us know that what actually Saumya feels and honestly I wanted this same reaction from Saumya that she only wants Harman to be his and not to share him with anyone 😳😳😳

I am just liking this Surbhi here who just wants her sis's happiness .. Can I just hug Surbhi for coming up with an awesome idea for HaYa 😆😆😆 And I just loved how Harman w/o wasting a nano-second just did everything so fast and even took his Gulabo with him within a second .. This has been probably the fastest trip for a couple 🤣🤣 I hope there stay is very long to their destination 😆😆

And lastly . Preeto's expression were just priceless when she came to know that his handsome cum rebellious son took his wife with him w/o letting even the air to know about it 🤣🤣 Wish , something like this happens in the show and I would love to see Preeto and the whole clown clans expression 😈😈😈

I would agree with Hanie here when she said that - "let preeto and her plans go hireway.nobody can come btween Haya." 😆😆😆 I want this to happen

The episode was superb and totally evil 😆😆 Good job Divs 👏👏

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Silpa

@Silpa20

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Very nice update.good that Harman has taken soumya away for sometime and soumya is not saying no to Harman.waiting for next chapter.thanks for pm.

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goolab

@goolab

Elite

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Was very beautiful love it wait for more keep going

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sparklingeyes

@sparklingeyes

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

I love it totally... Just the way we expected things to go in the show

Wished surbhi did the same.. Then I m sure Harman would have made saumya realize her worth n that she can be happy n with him too

I cannot wait for the next update.. Love u divs for giving us this

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ushasri
wow very interesting
nice to see harman soumya closeness
want harman to fail preeto plans
waiting for next update haya intimate moments☺️

Preeto's plain will fail. Just wait n watch.

Thanks for the comment Ushasri. Enjoy reading. The next has loads of Harman Soumya. I hope you'll love it. 😉

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RIMO9013

@RIMO9013

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Hi divs sorry am late in rply u know from the very beginning I feel like cherishing a picture while reading ur writings
Am really really got mesmerised the way u woven the story it's just wow I love the way harman protected his gulabo each time and am verymuch looking forward for HaYa intimate moment