HaYa OS-'I'll Love you FOREVER'--Chap 3 Updtd on PG-7 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

Omg!!

It's like a bliss to read this update.. I so wish to see this relationship of haya

It would be so more pure n unique

Plz do continue... Love ur writing

thanks sweetie. I am overwhelmed you like it this much. I'll try to keep the story of HaYa as per your wishes! 😳

Originally posted by: zubeada

amazing update..

waiting for next chap ..

😊 thanks Zubeada. I'll update soon.

Originally posted by: goolab

Wow other is beautiful wait for more

thank you Dear. I expect you to enjoy the upcoming chapters.😳

Originally posted by: haasya

wow such a beautiful story .it was so sweet n beautiful love the way u described their bonding .eagerly waiting for next part

Thank you Dearie. ❤️

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Nice part..
Surbhi ka kya plan hai ??
Waiting for next part..

thank you Dear. You will know her plan in the next chapter which is coming soon.😉

Originally posted by: Dhritismita20

Just read the 2nd chapter.very nice I felt like watching it on tv.waiting for next chapter.

awww...Thank you Dearie. ❤️ I am soo glad! Keep reading.😃

This is really nice!! I loved it!
Preeto ki halat tight after seeing Harman with the sex hair and messed clothes xD xD I am loving it!!
Update soon :)

Originally posted by: Supervampire

Amazing update

love trio in the story

Harman wants to close with his gulaboo nd love her

soumya wants his husband nd don't want to share him with anyone

surabhi made a plan for Haya nd save her di's love nd life

thanx for pm

thanks sweetie.

Originally posted by: Pani.Puri

OMG ... Divs you write like a professional writer and the way everything was told in the story could be imagined so well . While reading you could draw those visuals in mind about everyon'e emotions , POV , scenes and that is so good in your story bcz these scenes are so nice that I actually want to visualise it and while visualising the only thing that came to my mind was - if this way they had shown in the show ofcourse barring those sweet sensous scenes then the show would have done wonders ... Everything in this story is perfect and I'm liking every character here .. Harman always wants to be with his Gulabo and loves her and that was visible in his every move while he was spending those sweet time with Saumya and the way he asked her permision if he can proceed further ... I liked Saumya here bcz she dint spoil the romantic mood and dint talk about Preeto's BS and even she for once became selfish and wanted to enjoy the company of her husband for the whole night , and this selfishness I liked the most in Saumya ... Surbhi is truly a good sis here that she understood that something is going wrong somewhere and she needs to stop it .. I hope she will stay this sweet till end bcz she is looking good this way only .. The first scene was just mindblowing , fantabolous , superb ... Their bond is truly magical and pure . The love they have for each other is something that will give you a new definiton and goals on the word "love" ... Why Divs why ??? Why this kolaveri Di ?? Preeto ne galat time pe akar hadh kar di ... Her penetrating and scrutinising gaze made Harmu to feel embarass about his appearence and that was cute and funny ... The chapter was so romantic , full of indepth emotions and feelings . I really loved reading this chapter . It was too good . Keep it up ...

Originally posted by: Sagigirl

Love it..just found this.ur amazing writers.keep it up. Thank you sweetie.😳

I can feel the emotion so beautiful.i love how u portray soumya here.Even harman and surbhi.i love thge sister bond.

I really dont wnt it got ruined but well.here u wont do that.

We cant get it in actual show but we can imagine it with ur story.

I even imagine vd and rubi on it when reading urs.😳😉

How i wish this is happen in the serial also.

How beautiful vivina ar if we get this scene on tv.😳

Why dont they hired u as a writers.love it.

Waiting for the next chapters😊

awww... Thank you dear. I am grateful for your praise. ❤️ don't worry this will be nothing like the show. Survi is a loving n doting sister here. She won't come in her di's way.