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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: soul76

Love the concept and the fact that an animal is involved. Poor leopard. So Soumya's dreams are shattered now huh! Did the leopard maul her pretty face and leave her scarred for life. Looks like it. Harman has a fiance, please not Surbhi. Is he crying for Soumya or because he doesn't love his fiance. Lovely update do continue soon.

Thank you so much. Its a big compliment esp when it comes from you. Thanks a lot. I will try my best to make this better. And suggestions are defo welcome

@bold all I can tell you that its not surbhi😆 There is going to be big revelation. Something that will change HaYa life completely😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

Thank you so much. Its a big compliment esp when it comes from you. Thanks a lot. I will try my best to make this better. And suggestions are defo welcome

@bold all I can tell you that its not surbhi😆 There is going to be big revelation. Something that will change HaYa life completely😊


Cool I like intrigue 😊 Surbhi hoti to main katti ho jaati tumsey. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul76


Cool I like intrigue 😊 Surbhi hoti to main katti ho jaati tumsey. 😆

😆😆 Don't worry I wont let that happen
Thank you once again
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24


Nice update Sara and a bit sad also for the last part 😭😭😭


So Ritik will throw Saumya infront of that leopard and her face will be scarred ... Poor her 😭 I was waiting that somehow Harman will come to rescue her but then I guess that this is what the story is all about as a mirror ...


Precap is something which I know is partially true 😆😆 Harman is just acting to be happy but is not happy and he misses Saumya or maybe a second angle which you have planned can be that , HaYa are together and he is happy but Harman's parents must not be happy to see a scarred girl and they are sad so even Harman is sad 😆😆 But I'll go with the 1st one of harman and saumya not being together ...


The update was good with HaYa's dance and Harman's words that Sumya is not the beautiful girl .. Hope to see a FAST update ASAP


P.S. - You dint replied to my previous comment on 1st chapter 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze



Nice update Sara and a bit sad also for the last part 😭😭😭


So Ritik will throw Saumya infront of that leopard and her face will be scarred ... Poor her 😭 I was waiting that somehow Harman will come to rescue her but then I guess that this is what the story is all about as a mirror ...


Precap is something which I know is partially true 😆😆 Harman is just acting to be happy but is not happy and he misses Saumya or maybe a second angle which you have planned can be that , HaYa are together and he is happy but Harman's parents must not be happy to see a scarred girl and they are sad so even Harman is sad 😆😆 But I'll go with the 1st one of harman and saumya not being together ...


The update was good with HaYa's dance and Harman's words that Sumya is not the beautiful girl .. Hope to see a FAST update ASAP


P.S. - You dint replied to my previous comment on 1st chapter 😆


I am so sorry for not replying Ishu😆 you know I am lazy but I love you. I should update this FF before you wake up tom 😆 if I don't you can scold me

Coming to your comment, yes this story is focused on that. I want to make it as realistic as possible. Through this chapter, my aim was to show how there are such guys who do these kind of things and its pathetic. They don't realize that their actions can ruin someone life so badly.

In my FF at least, both HaYa characters will develop and emerge to be stronger. I plan to make their love story unique yet realistic.

@bold Harman is a very happy go lucky guy. There is a lot more to his character and his character is multilayered. Thats all I can say for now.

Thank you so much for liking this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

I am so sorry for not replying Ishu😆 you know I am lazy but I love you. I should update this FF before you wake up tom 😆 if I don't you can scold me LOL ... No , I won't scold you bcz I love you na 😳😳 Its OK I understand that feeling of being lazy is great 😆😆


Coming to your comment, yes this story is focused on that. I want to make it as realistic as possible. Through this chapter, my aim was to show how there are such guys who do these kind of things and its pathetic. They don't realize that their actions can ruin someone life so badly.


In my FF at least, both HaYa characters will develop and emerge to be stronger. I plan to make their love story unique yet realistic. Yes , I would be happy to see both HaYa as a realistic character and a strong character in their own terms 😳😳

@bold Harman is a very happy go lucky guy. There is a lot more to his character and his character is multilayered. Thats all I can say for now.

Thank you so much for liking this.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3
It has been five years. Everything has changed. Harman is a famous painter. He lives with his family and he is engage with a girl name Ayesha. Harman is in a very happy place because he has everything he needs.

Harman is sitting with his mom, dad, Ayesha, and his best friend Sanghrav

Mom: Time has passed quickly. Its been two years since you both are engaged. I am so happy to see you both together

Ayesha: Yes mom it took me three years to convince Harman

Harman looks at Ayesha very graciously. For Harman, Ayesha was a person who respects he respected a lot. However, there was something that was strange. Things weren't what they appeared like

Harman's mom and dad leaves the breakfast table to discuss something important about wedding.

Mom: I received the wedding planner call Rajeev

Dad: Ohh yes I completely forgot. We had to pay her the advance money. Lets go I need to talk to you about the arrangements

Rajeev and Swarna (Harman mom and dad) leaves.

Harman: By the way, whats the plan! I seriously want to dance on london thumda on my wedding. It will suit us a lot na.

Ayesha: Shut up Harman

Sanghrav: Harman even now you're cracking jokes. The wedding is near.

Ayesha: Why don't you tell them my truth? Whatever, we are doing is for a reason!

Harman: Ayesha, I know what we are doing is for a reason. I completely understand but I don't want to destroy my family's happiness. They are integral part of my life and I cannot afford to lose them.

Ayesha: But we are deceiving them!

Harman: Aashuu re People say that if you lie for a good reason then that is not a lie.

Sanghrav: Ayesha is right!

Ayesha leaves from there.

Sanghrav: Harman what you are doing is not right.

Harman holds Sanghrav hand tightly and says..

Harman: I don't know if I am right or wrong. I don't know if I am deceiving my family or not. I don't even know what future holds. All I know is I want to be happy and want everyone around me to be happy. I am not a philosopher and I don't get the concept of truth and lies. All I know is what I am doing is right for me and my love ones.

Sanghrav: But Harman...

Harman: No buts and end. (Pause for 5 seconds). Sanghrav you have been my best friend since I was 6. Remember how we use bunk from school to eat ice-cream. How we use to pretend to be sick to not go to school.

Sanghrav: Ha I remember everything. Those sweet old days. Everything was perfect.

Harman: But you always use to complain even during that time😆

Harman smiles

Sanghrav: Arrey yaar we were kids at that time

Harman: I know re we were kids. But you're acting like we are 80 year old oldies😆 Even today, you're complaining only. Let it be and leave everything to the faith. Enjoy in the moment dear.

Sanghrav pats on Harman's back

Sanghrav: You will never change😆

Harman: I know that

Sanghrav: BTW there is a college reunion.

Harman: College reunion? OMG WHEN?

Sanghrav: I think in a month or so. I am not sure

Harman: I am totally going.

Sanghrav: But you remember that girl? Umm what was her name? The one who use to show off her beauty

Harman: Soumya

Sanghrav: You remember her name!

Harman: You forgot, I was her big fan

Sanghrav: I thought you wouldn't remember her esp now since so much has happened

Harman: Soumya can never go away from my life. I don't know but I feel that there is a connection between us. That connection is very deep.

Sanghrav: Don't tell me you're in love with her.

Harman surprisingly looks at Sanghrav

Harman: You're crazy or what? You're behaving like those old aunties who think that a boy and girl can only be lovers. There can be a relationship between a guy and girl except that!

Sanghrav: You were bowed by her beauty though.

Harman: Wrong not her beauty. Actually it was never her beauty. Rather, her eyes which use to sparkle every time I looked at her. Her voice use to sound like a beautiful magical tune that one can never get bored with. She was beautiful from inside, from her heart, and from her soul.

Sanghrav: Ooohhh

Harman: Why are we talking about her though?

Sanghrav: You are😆

Harman: Ohh dude Ayesha will kill me if she hears me talking about some other girl.

Sanghrav: You're impossible😆

Harman receives a call from his co worker who told him that there is a exhibition being held in Delhi. Harman has to leave tom

Sanghrav: Whose call was it?

Harman: There is an exhibition being held in Delhi. I have to leave tom

Sanghrav: I think the reunion is also being held there.

Harman: The stay is for a month.

Sanghrav: Thats perfect. I will join you for the reunion.

Harman: Great bro lets go. Help me with packing.

Harman and Sanghrav go to Harman's room

Harman: 30 shirts, 25 pants, 10 suits, 4 tootpaste, perfumes, hair gels and a huge list. Dude, sometimes I feel you're my wife!

Sanghrav: Hell naaa Never

Harman: Bu you always behave like one re. That reminds me of a song...

Sanghrav: No I am going to hit you with that pillow. Don't sing you cannot sing don't torture me

Harman: Kuch Kuch hota hai kyun karun haaayyeee kuch kuch hota hai!

Sanghrav: Urgh your voice anyway I kept everything in your bag.

Harman: Okay great!

Sanghrav: What great? Don't have all the fun without me

Harman: LOL Sure😆

They both laugh.

Precap: Harman finally reaches Delhi.

Harman: This is a place of love and so many profound memories that are unforgettable.

Harman hears a scream. Harman looks back. All the crowd gathered and were hitting someone who was screaming for help. Harman runs toward the crowd to save that person.

Who is that person? How will Harman save her?


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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
it's super 😳

Sara, you're clever.

I like, this calculation Harman clothing 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Estadra

it's super 😳

Sara, you're clever.

I like, this calculation Harman clothing 😆

Thank you Esu
glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg saraa
awsome beautiful update
loving this FF to the core
completely different soumya nd iam liking it
aww our harman is a nice guy
oh i missed second part just now read 2nd nd 3rd parts loved it
looks like its soumya who need help in precap scared
Edited by ushasri - 8 years ago

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