HaYa FF: The Despicable Mirror (CHAP 3, PG 4)

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Prologue


I hate looking at myself on mirror! I just don't understand why I have to always tolerate so much pain. I just cannot live this life anymore. This life is full of agony, torture, torment, defame, and disparage. I wish I can go back to those days says Soumya


Life is so beautiful. This breezy wind and soaking rain brings so much pleasure to life. Everything is mere perfect in my life. I have my family, love of my life, and a fulfilling career says Harman


Harman and Soumya are two individuals who are different as chalk and cheese. The way they love, act and most importantly their approach toward life is different. Harman claims his life is perfect but is his life perfect? Soumya believes that her life is miserable and she wants to die. But is there an underlying hope in her life?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow ots amazzing saraa looking froward to ot
soon update it dear
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Originally posted by: ushasri

wow ots amazzing saraa looking froward to ot
soon update it dear

Yes this concept is really special to me. I always wanted to write a story on that. Intially, I was confused whether to write it on HaYa or my other fav pair but I chose HaYa. I hope I'll be able to do justice to it.

Thank you
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Really like the concept..
Cannot wait to read further
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice and intresting prologue 👏👏👏


So there is something that has happened with Saumya and Harman was either involved or was a spectator to that happening and that is why he feels guilty ..

Was Saumya a victim of rape or molestation or ragging kinda thing ?? Or was she humiliated for something so badly ?? 🤔🤔🤔

Continue soon bcz I am a very impatient girl so I can't hold this mystery for a long time 😆 Good going 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

Really like the concept..

Cannot wait to read further

Thank you
yes this concept is interesting😊
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Originally posted by: RagingBlaze



Nice and intresting prologue 👏👏👏


So there is something that has happened with Saumya and Harman was either involved or was a spectator to that happening and that is why he feels guilty ..

Was Saumya a victim of rape or molestation or ragging kinda thing ?? Or was she humiliated for something so badly ?? 🤔🤔🤔

Continue soon bcz I am a very impatient girl so I can't hold this mystery for a long time 😆 Good going 👍🏼

LOL I am not going to say a word. You wait and watch😆

Mirror has huge significance though.

I will update this tom and that will give you a better idea of the story too
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Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Loved the prologue.

Continue soon.

Thank you
yes Ill update soon
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Chapter 1
I am the most beautiful girl in my college. I have won so many titles, be it Miss India or Miss chandigarah. No one can compete with me when it comes to beauty. I am perfect. My face is what each girl wants to have. My skin is radiant and flawless. I never had a pimple in my face. I am the best. My beauty is my life. I love it...says Soumya while looking at the mirror.

She gets ready to go to her college prom party. She wears red backless dress with a diamond earrings and necklace. She puts her most favorite lipstick on her lips which make her appear more bold and beautiful. Her fav color...Red. She put a thin line of eyeliner in her eyes.

She looks like a fairy.

As she goes downstairs, she sees her mom. Her mom looks at her. This her reaction

Mom: Awww Soumya you look absolutely gorgeous my baby

Soumya; Thank you so much mom. Thanks to you because of your beautiful genes

Mom: Awww baby I am proud of you. You understand the value of beauty just like me. Our face is what defines us and makes our identity.

Soumya: I know mom. My beauty is my life but its not my identity. My identity is shaped by knowledge, education, and my nature

Mom: Soumya Soumya Soumya seems like you got some stupid traits from your dad too.

Soumya dad enters the room

Dad: Hey guys what are you guys talking about?

Soumya: Nothing dad tell me how I look?

Dad: Awww sweetheart you look gorgeous as always

Soumya: Dad thank you so much I love you

Dad: I love you too my dear

Soumya goes and hug her dad tightly

Soumya: Dad I will miss you

Dad: I will miss you too but its just an two hour party

Soumya: Yes Dad it is but I don't know. I feel like crying

Dad: Soumu you know I cannot see tears on your eyes. Just one thing

Soumya: Dad Dad I know. I will drive safely, I will lock the doors of the car. I will not talk to any stranger. Don't worry I got it

Dad: Soumu baby you know na what I say is betterment for you only

Soumya: Yes dad I know and I understand. I know you love me a lot.

Dad: Thank you sweetheart for understanding my point. Some people just never seem to get it.

Mom: Excuse me, do you mean to say that I don't get your point? Well you know what you're right. DUDE I cannot support your old fashion point of you. Would you had same thing if you had a son going to a party.

Dad: why do you over exaggerate everything I say! I didnt mean like that. For me all my kids are equal, be it Soumya, Rahul, Sanya, or Raghav

Mom: Wish that was the case. Ohh well whatever!

Soumya: Dad I don't like how mom talks to you!

Dad: You know na your mom loves you a lot dear.

Soumya: I know dad. Okay dad see you and LOVE YOU

Soumya unlocks her car and sit on her seat

She gets a call from her friend.
She picks up the phone

Soumya: Hi Aloo baby

Alia: Hi Soumya. I am not going to the party

Soumya: Why?

Alia: its not safe. please you should also not go

Soumya: Dude I am not scared of anything or anyone. You should join me too

Alia: Soumya you're not understanding. That area is very unsafe. Please don't go. Instead, come over to my house and we will watch Salman movies, eat pizza, and dance

Soumya: That surely sounds very interesting Aloo. But I cannot miss the prom party. Ohh damn aloo its our PROM PARTY. IT COMES ONCE IN A LIFETIME

Alia: Okay whatever. Go but be safe

Soumya: Okay love you bye

Soumya begins driving the car but she is confuse. Should she go or not go?

Soumya say to herself: I think I should go back.

Soumya: No I shouldnt! I am fine I can do it.

Soumya finally reaches the venue. She gets off her car like a star. All eyes are set on her.
There are few guys waiting outside. They are her classmates...Ritik and Varun

Ritik: DUDE she is so hot man. I feel like...

Varun: I get your feelings. She is splendid

Ritik: I know but today I will fulfill all my wishes

Varun: No you will not do anything like that

Ritik: Why? I cannot control now

Varun: I thought you are my friend and will support me

Ritik: Hawww we can take turns

They both laugh.

Soumya looks at them angrily but goes inside to the party.

Soumya orders a drink for herself. She drinks a cup. She is a party animal. She ordered another glass. She is loving it. Her favorite song is on...Lets do party tonight. She is dancing and enjoying her life to the fullest.

All of a sudden she receives a call. She goes outside to attend it. It is soumya's mother

Soumya: What happen mom... you know I am at party right please don't call me

Her mom screams

Soumya: mom what happen? ARE YOU OKAY? MOM PLEASE SAY SOMETHING

Mom: Soumya where are you. Please come back home as soon as possible says her mom crying

Soumya: Why mom? TELL ME WHAT HAPPEN DAMN IT.

She screams

Mom: Soumya I just turned on tv. they are showing its not safe. There is a threat that there are three clouded leopards who are missing and they are in the area you're in

Soumya: Ohh mom what the hell? I am at a party. There are 100s of people here. Like I see no leopard

Mom: Soumya come back its my order

Soumya gets angry and disconnects the phone.

Soumya goes inside and she is about to slip but a boy in a black shirt catches her.

Soumya: WOW Unbelievably sexy! Whats your name?

Boy: Harman!

Soumya: Sexy as hell

Harman: I know baby! One cannot resist when they see me

Soumya: Totally!

Harman: Are you okay

Soumya: Now I am

Harman: Oh well I heard you're the most beautiful girl in this college

Soumya: Surely I am

Harman: I don't think so

Soumya: Why? what is wrong with me

Harman: Beauty lies in simplicity. It lies in acceptance.

Soumya: What? I don't get it!

Harman: I am not here to explain you. I am here to enjoy

He walks away!

Soumya stood there for a moment. She didnt move. She thought what did he really mean when he said beauty lies in simplicity and acceptance.

Soumya: Am I missing something? What did he mean?

Soumya goes to the dance floor.

Harman is constantly looking at her.

Harman friend is with him. His name is Sanghrav

Sanghrav: Are you okay? why are you looking at her?

Harman: Nothing I am just looking this world from a different perspective

Sanghrav: You and your perspectives.

Harman: I know. Why does this world plays so much importance on materialistic and temporary things?

Sanghrav: This is how the world is like.

Harman: Well whatever

Sanghrav: Do you like her?

Harman: No not at all

Sanghrav: Why are you lying to yourself. Its first sight love for you


Harman: I wish I could like her but thats not possible

Sanghrav: Why are you controlling your feelings. Why don't you tell her that you are seeing her from last two years in fashion shows? You love her since then!


Harman: Reality differs from virtual world. I cannot like her and I don't want to

Sanghrav: Harman Harman Harman...

Harman: Leave it! Whatever!


Precap: The party ended! Soumya is going to her car. Suddenly, someone approached her!

Who is it? Is it Harman or someone else? What will happen next?

Wait for the next chapter of THE DESPICABLE MIRROR!





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Posted: 8 years ago
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I feel this journey will be a roller coaster of clandestine plots along with emotional turmoil. It will be imbibed with thoughts too.. Well, eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters.

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