HaYa FF: The Despicable Mirror (CHAP 3, PG 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
omg superb update saraa
harman not accepting he loves soumya though he fallen for her 2 years back
this soumya is so different to our soumya nice to see the change
update the next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Kashish_shine

I feel this journey will be a roller coaster of clandestine plots along with emotional turmoil. It will be imbibed with thoughts too.. Well, eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters.

Thank you so so so much Kashish. Yes you got it right. This will be a roaster coaster ride with lots of twists and turns. I will update the next chapter soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ushasri

omg superb update saraa
harman not accepting he loves soumya though he fallen for her 2 years back
this soumya is so different to our soumya nice to see the change
update the next part soon


Thank you so much Usha.
Yes I promise you that I will try my best to take you guys in a different land. It will be emotional and beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Prologue looks good please comtinue :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15


Nice start and I'm left confused 🤣🤣🤣 and now I'm pondering if I should ask you my doubts or wait for further chapters to clear my doubts ??


So Harman secretly likes Saumya but doesn't love her and I'm sure you will provide for those reasons in the future chappys ... OK so it seems that RS's soul has travelled into your body bcz you're bringing a leopard for HaYa's love story 🤣🤣🤣🤣

I liked the 1st chappy and HaYa's unusual meeting 😆😆😆 BUT still I'll wait for the next chapter to get my answers . Just clear one thing for me that is Saumya a kind of proudy and boastful about her beauty bcz with Harman's dialog of simplicity I felt that Saumya doesn't believe in simplicity or something like that and she is very proud of her beauty 🤔🤔


Waiting for the next chappy and hope to see a FAST update asap 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Wow...HaYa r totally different here
Nice chapter
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
interesting start
Harman nd Soumya are totally different 😊
Harman love soumya for two years
Edited by Supervampire - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
I think we r gonna have some tashan vaala Pyaar b/w HaYa
Waiting to read further
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Soumya is in the dance floor. She looks at harman who is sitting by himself. She walks up to him
Soumya: Hi are you okay?

Harman: Yes I am okay. I actually don't like drinking and partying.

Soumya: Really! What do you like then?

Harman: There is a beautiful life beyond partying. I seek happiness in life. I believe in enjoying life.

Soumya: OMG we are so alike

Harman: Not really! Partying does not mean happiness

Soumya: Ohh well. well would you like to dance with me!

Harman looks at her lovingly and smile

Harman: Sure

Soumya: but I would like to dance on my fav song

Harman: Ummm Saathiya tune kya kiya or Woh Pehli Baar Jab Hum Mile or Chand Chupa Badal Mein

Soumya: OMG how do you know my fav songs?

Harman: I mean you're such a big model. Who would not know about you?

Soumya: You're right!

Harman: So may I do the honors please?

Soumya held his hands and they both walked up to the dance floor. Harman keeps his hands on soumya waist. Soumya keeps her hands on Harman's shoulder. They both feel something for each other.

The song plays: Woh Pehli Baar Jab Hum Mile haaton mein haat banke chalo hogaya yeh dil deewana hota hai pyaar kya kisne jaana.

Soumya feels something. Something that she has never felt with any man in before except her dad. She feels comfort, safety, and acknowledgement. She says to Harman

Soumya: I never felt like this before. You're unique

Harman smiles

Harman: Really? after all i am heart beat of every girl

Soumya hits him in his shoulder and smile

Harman: Well thank you so much. It was pleasure dancing with someone like you

Soumya: Yes after all you got chance to dance with such a beautiful woman I know that

Harman: No actually I want to make a confession

Soumya: Tell me

Harman: I have seen girls who are prettier than you but you know why I had so much pleasure in dancing with you. Because you are not just a pretty face. You are beyond that!

Soumya stares at him angrily

Harman: Bye Cupcake jee

Harman walks away from there

Soumya: Who is this guy? How dare he call me not most beautiful? But why am I smiling now? Urgh what is wrong with me? What did he mean by you are beyond that! Urgh seriously this Chipmunk has confuse me.

Party ends and Soumya heads back to her car. She reaches her car and is opening the door. But she sense a shadow. Someone is following her. She looks back but sees no one.

Soumya sits on her car and start driving

Soumya: The party was so strange man. Urgh it was so boring! I hate it. I was better off going to my friend house and watching Sallu movies.

Suddenly Soumya car stops

Soumya: Urgh now whats wrong with this car. She steps out of the car

There is a jungle there. No one is there. Its an isolated place. No one is around. Suddenly she sees shadow. Someone touched her shoulder. Soumya is scared and she looked back

It is Ritik

Soumya: Ritik, you. What are you doing here?

Ritik: I was passing by and saw your car

Soumya: Really? Well where is your car then?

Ritik had no answer

Ritik: Soumu forget it na do you need help

Soumya: First my name is Soumya please call me Soumya. Only my love ones can call me Soumu. Second I don't need your help so kindly leave!

Ritik held Soumya's hand!

Ritik: Really Soumya then make me your love one please I would love to become your LOVE

Soumya: LEAVE RIGHT NOW OR I will call POLICE

Ritik: Ooohhh I don't see police here!

Soumya: Leave me

Soumya screams for help but no one is there to hear her shrieks

Ritik drags her from her hair to her car. He pushes Soumya in the car seat and locks the car.

He is being forceful to her.

Soumya: I will KILL YOU LEAVE ME NOW

Ritik: No baby this is going to be my night!

Ritik started to take off her clothes. Soumya is screaming but she sees no one around her!. Soumya sees a hammer by the dashboard of the car. She takes that hammer and hit that hammer on his head

Her hands are shriving and she has blood all over hands. She pushes ritik off the car and gets out

Soumya couldn't believe what she just did. She is shivering and crying.

Soumya: No this is impossible. I just... I would have to run

Ritik friend Varun comes in. He sees Ritik lifeless lying on the road.

Varun sees Soumya with a hammer

Varun: What did you do? OMG you killed him

Soumya: No no I didnt...no no

Varun: You did

Soumya: I was just trying to save myself. I don't know what happened please let me go I don't know please

Ritik gained conscious. He did not die. He gets up and look angrily at Soumya. Soumya looks back. She is shocked

Soumya: He is alive. I didnt do anything. Now let me go!

Ritik hold her hand!

Ritik: How can I let you BABY? You tried to kill me. I wont leave you so easily.

Varun: Let her go we don't want to get involved in these problems

Ritik: YOU CAN LEAVE. I WONT LEAVE HER.

Soumya: please let me go please please

Ritik: You are really proud of your beauty na. What will happen if I snatch this beauty from you?

Soumya is shocked. She looks at him

Ritik carries her forcefully and takes her on the side of the jungle. Varun tries to stop him.

Soumya screams

Varun: What are you going to do with her? Leave her

Ritik: I wont leave her! She tried to kill me. I will give her the worst punishment. You know there is a leopard in this area. Guess what I will throw her in front of that leopard. She will die painfully

Varun: NO NO what the hell is wrong with you?

Soumya is screaming and crying

Soumya: LEAVE ME! PLEASE LEAVE ME PLEASE LEAVE ME

Ritik: Shut up!

Varun: I don't want to be involved in this.

Ritik: You can leave!

They see a shadow of a black animal approaching. They turn back and see the leopard who is far but is running toward them

Varun: ARE YOU Mad? He is coming here he will kill us both.

Ritik throws Soumya in front of Leopard and they both run!

Soumya is screaming, asking for help!!! No one is there

PRECAP: It has been five years. Harman is with his mom, dad, and his fiancee. He is very happy.

Harman: Life couldn't get any better. I have everyone with me who I love

Sanghrav: When are you going to tell them the truth?

Harman looks at Sanghrav and a tear rolls down from his eyes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the concept and the fact that an animal is involved. Poor leopard. So Soumya's dreams are shattered now huh! Did the leopard maul her pretty face and leave her scarred for life. Looks like it. Harman has a fiance, please not Surbhi. Is he crying for Soumya or because he doesn't love his fiance. Lovely update do continue soon.

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