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Posted: 9 years ago
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HaYa OS: Fallen Too Far
HARMAN'S POV

I drove my bike towards the market.i couldn't believe my eyes.i actually spotted her.i was hallucinating or she was really there.i had to confirm my intution.i stopped my bike and threw my helmet away towards my gang who were following me.i walked towards her.she was talking to a girl.she took some flowers in her hands and walked caressing it.i walked forward towards her.but she didnt spare a look at me.i continued to walk.we collided n she was about to fall.

i grabbed her by her waist n held her from falling.i had to say her what i was about to say her before.i just said"you're more beautiful than any flowers".she looked at me shocked.this was not the look i expected it was completely different.she looked like a whole new person.the girl near her said"di,r u okay?" n took her from my arms.she scrambled behind the girl.the girl asked"what did u say before?".i snapped back"it was not meant for you to hear anyways".i looked for the girl to say something but she didnt.i thought where the hell did the girl before i met went?who was she?she looked different.she was not the smart ass mouth from before!

ONE DAY BEFORE

i said"i m not interested in going to pub.i dont wanna involve in any police related matters".but my gang insisted that it was safe.i grumbled n moved to the pub.i just grumbled n sat at the corner.while my gang took in some drinks.i just ordered for a cocktail.i didnt wanna get crazy drunk.if i get so my mom wud give me a long lecture .i was sipping my cocktail.all my gang boy took some bar girls n started moving their way.i didnt do the girl stuff.i m modern not modern enough to have stuff with any girl without feelings.

i looked at the stage.the DJ has just now popped on a crazy number.all were waving their body to the music like lunatics.but something else caught my attention.i concentrated on the girl.noone was coming near her.she was whipping her hair in all directions.i couldnt see her face.i didnt knew whether the curiosity to look at her face or something else pulled me to her.i walked towards her.i stood at close proximity to her.i looked at her she was wearing a denim with black lace top.sensing our closeness,she stopped whipping her hair n looked at me.i noticed her eyes were smoky.my inspection was interruped whenshe asked "wanna dance?".

before my reply come.she took my hands n placed on her shoulders n she put her hands on my waist n started moving her body.i slowly asked her"whats ur name?r u alone?r u drunk?.."she shut my mouth with her palms n said"slow down man...one by one..first we r not gonna meet again so no need of intros..plus u have no rights ask me question..just shut up n dance..".i couldnt understand why i was looking at the way her lips moved while talking n why my throat suddenly parched dry.she asked"wanna kiss?".i looked at her eyes n realisation dawned i wanted to kiss her.she said"ops sorry!! my time is up..i gotta go..lets not meet each other again..well u look handsome".before i could say something how her eyes were bright or her hair tresses were like sea or more...she just left off...

today i saw her finally.i complimented but no reply ..no smart ass mouthing...no boldness..instead what he saw was a innocence...a smell of mystery around the girl.both the sensations overwhelmed n confused me.i drove to home n went towards my room..when i heard puja song.i looked n saw the girl doing puja in my house.the innocence n purity of her was alluring.my mom asked"what r u seeing ?".then i snapped out n saw it was chachi doing the puja not the girl.i blinked n went off to my room

in my room,i switched on the tv.i saw the girl again doing rock performance.she was bold..sexy...i was snapped out n saw it was brittney spears..i was hallucinating the girl whom i didnt even know..i finally had the thought...I HAVE FALLEN TOO FAR...

p.s. my writing sucks.as i have stopped writing a period ago.i know it.plz spare me.no tamatars plz
this story was originally for Rishbala.when i saw the promo it exactly collided with my story.so i thought to convert it for HaYa.
plus i wanted to see rubina in a wild look too..which is not possible in RS show i could atleast implement it for my story😉
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harianjana thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its just superb dear.
Rubina in disco, its my dream to see that.
It actually sets original Rubina, but some how she always ends up doing sanskaari shows
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A different take to HaYa 's story n would love to see something in this sense enacted by Vivian n Rubina.
Really nice OS... Waiting to read more from ur writings on Haya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harianjana

its just superb dear.

Rubina in disco, its my dream to see that.
It actually sets original Rubina, but some how she always ends up doing sanskaari shows

thanx dear
it can in our dreams only not in the show😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

A different take to HaYa 's story n would love to see something in this sense enacted by Vivian n Rubina.

Really nice OS... Waiting to read more from ur writings on Haya

thanx
hope to write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow such a lovely OS dear👏👏
I liked it a lot 😳😳

Keep writing more dear😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing one dear! 👏
Loved your take.
Keep writing more! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's just amazing
Please write more

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its beautiful... the confusion in Harman is way too awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i was a big fan of your stories in MB forum
i had other username over there ..it is good to see your OS here.
i was very happy to read it...it was fanatastic...loved the way he was thinking abt her after coming home..👏.
Please continue writing your stories on haya and rishbala


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