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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: shreyj7
First and foremost yahh I am very emotional hehe. If you see me on Wattpad I go around crying everywhere😆

I am emotional too...and gets hurt very easily...and I am still trying to understand wattpad so I am sure once I will get hold of it.. I will cry as well😆
Second of all. Don't you ever call this Fanfiction a "isn't that good" I will kill you if you say that again, and I am serious. This fanfiction is amazing and it is very close to my heart dare you mess with me on this topic you are going to get it from me.😡

ok got it...angry shreya😆
Ahhh love love love the update. Thank you 🤗 you know sometime I regret not reading my own update after writing as I could see many errors but will try to avoid going forward.
It was nice how you switched back and forth between Latha and Krishnamurthy w/ Aryan , and Abhi and Riya and Myra. A sense of a metaphor kind of thing going on there.

Yes I did try it...relating the on stage play with real life of Abhi...glad you liked it😃
But indeed Aryan's feelings here I wanted to point of were tremendously portrayed and hats off to you for that.

Oh thank you...Aryan is a gem of a person but his destiny is not on his side.
And this Sunny you come to me BOi Imma kill you just the way you tried to mere beat Abhi I will murder you with my karate moves.

I have to see your karate moves shreya high time😆
Abhi man Ma BOI you should fight back at the moment I understand your promises but I cannot see you hurt you know, and here you are now lying in a pool of blood. grrr.
Filled with emotions.

Well yes but promises are promises neither Abhi nor Aryan could gauge that their promise will lead to this
Loved the update a lot.

Thank you...[>D:<]
Keep Writing
Update soon

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1
Thankuuu nisthuu for the update , busy thi yaar celebration m Aur hum logo n chain Ki saans nhi lney di.
Y lo Christmas gift : bhojpuri jingle song😆

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IW-3O0qizJ4

I heard this bhojpuri song and was singing this on christmas day 🤣 jingle belwa..belwaa.. paki dhadi budhwa..jhola laike bhage la..🤣

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Manansnf
Such a touching update. The way you portrayed Aryans feelings was just so moving!!!
That little Baahubali bit you added made my day😳
Can't wait for our hero to go back to his dishoom-dishoom mode😉
Keep updating

Thank you liking the update...and Aryan's part... coming to Bahubali who doesnt like it..we all do ..its one of the greatest movies from Indian film industry and this is what made me fall in love with Prabhas..❤️

Well the dhishoom dhishoom will be back but after sometime..😉

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1
Abhi is thorn in my heart
Hey sunny u r thorn in our heart , better u stay away 😡

I love my fierce friends..one does karate other gets angry...sunny beware..😡😆
Krishnamurthy replies she is my wife and we came here to see you for our personal reason as parents and not as a Police commissioner of Mumbai.

Finally Aryan ko Pata chl jayega , now what will happen next . . . .

Yes..well I am not sure if Aryan knows what to do next..lets see.🤔

He was standing at the corner dumbfounded not knowing what to say or do

Is scene me Aryan oh myyy God : tearooo in myy eyes.

Imagine...they both being together for 20 years and had each other only..suddenly someone comes and say sorry...he is ours...😭

Do you think I am so bad when knowing Abhi can live a normal life with his parents I am a bad man but not this bad ma'am
Awww , Aryan superb dialogue . Thank you 🤗
notices Abhi's call and pickup the phone Abhi say Hello Anna... are you... when someone hit him from the back on his head with a rod.
Oh my God , abhiii

Abhi holds hand of one goon when he remembers the promise he made to Aryna

Promise promise promise is promise k chakkar mein Baahubali nipat gya tha , Aur is promise k chakkar me bechara abhi Hospital naa Phuch jaaye

Sonu do you remember I told you you forgot one thing..this was it.. the promise which Abhi made to Aryan of not raising his hand on anyone...but they both didnot realise that it will lead to this..

Thank you for reading and commenting [>D:<]

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Chapter 33

Aryan did not know how to react..he has seen many people , his own men and himself in blood but not someone who he loves more than himself. He tries to shake Abhi. His heart thudded in his chest like someone choking him as he could barely breathe. He tries to wake up Abhi by slapping him on his face..Get up for heaven's sake Abhi GET UP! " Aryan's hands were trembling thinking what could happen, as blood was flowing from everywhere , from Abhi's head, hands and legs he tries to stop it but was not able to... He did not know what to do and was looking in every direction for some help by clutching Abhi tight to his chest. When he notices Abhi moving his leg a bit and coughs..Aryan gets happy he pats Abhi's cheek again.. Abhi Abhi are you alright..how did this happen who were those people? Abhi looks at his brother with his blurred vision and smile faintly.. don't wo..rr..y An.na..I.. am fine. Aryan hold him tighter and replies " Yes I can see that " Abhi says " An..nna.. I ..I did..no..t rai..se my..hand ev..en once..I ke..pt my pro..mise. Tears comes rolling down from Aryan's eyes he gets angry on Abhi " you duffer I said you will not raise your hands first, not that you can't defend yourself I will put this city on fire if anything happens to you . Aryan shouts, Abhi wanted to reply but his strength were diminishing with every passing minute. Aryan senses that and ask him to keep quiet , we will discuss all this later. He picks Abhi and put in his car and drives off from there to the nearest hospital.

Aryan was driving as fast as he could breaking red lights and going in wrong direction, causing traffic chaos and causing near accidents. Even in this he was constantly turning back to check on Abhi who was on his back seat lying almost lifeless. He stops near a hospital gate and ask for doctor. He did not wait for any stretcher and run inside with Abhi in his hand..when he spot a doctor and ask him to treat Abhi asap and begs " "Please treat him as he is bleeding profusely please do not worry about money or anything else. " Doctor consoles Aryan and ask him to calm down and shows a stretcher and ask him to make patient lie there. They run towards an OT , Aryan wanted to enter but they ask him to stay behind and trust them " don't worry he is in safe hands now "

In the college Myra and Riya both are still trying Abhi's number but not able to reach him make them worry. They both get suspicious and runs to a person who saw Abhi last in the college. They stop Rocky from behind and ask "hey did by any chance you noticed in which direction Abhi went and did you hear him saying anything? Rocky recollects the entire scene in his mind and say oh yes I heard Abhi saying over the phone " Ok Sunny I am coming " Riya and Myra both gets shocked Sunny? Now from where Sunny has come in the picture? Myra asks Riya "Do you have Sunny's number ? Riya replies " Yes I do so try him and see if he knows where Abhi is. Riya calls up Sunny who was celebrating the successful execution of his plans and was drinking heavily. Sunny saw flashing Riya's number on his mobile and inebriated condition picks up her phone and speak "Hey Riya so soon so you finally decided to come back to me as that scumbag Abhiraj is not there anymore. " Riya gets confused and ask "what , What do you mean? " where is Abhi she shouts? " before Sunny could say anything his uncles snatches the phone and cut the call. His uncles shouts " you dolt stay underground for sometime because Abhi's knows that it was you who planned all this? " Sunny still high on his success replies " who cares " he cant do anything to me and drink another shot.

Myra ask Riya What did Sunny says, Riya still confused with the conversation she just had and replies to Myra " there is something wrong for sure, I am worried for Abhi's whereabouts now Myra immediately picks up her phone and dials Aryan anna. Aryan picks up the phone and pleads to Myra " Please come to Fortis hospital now my brother needs you Myra did not believe her ears so she asks again "Where to come Anna and where is Abhi? Aryan says "Fortis hospital " when he hear doctor calling for him and he hang up the phone. Myra falls on the floor rattled Riya notices and ask Myra what happened don't tell me something untoward happened with Abhi. What did Anna say? Myra gathers herself up and replies we have to go to Fortis hospital now. Riya now stunned and without asking anything further runs towards her car and ask Myra to come.

Latha and Deva reaches home thinking such a big burden is off their chest as we can trust Aryan he seem to be a good man, Latha tells Deva. Deva nods in agreement when Latha notices time and thinks let me call Riya and will call Myra and Abhi for a dinner tonight as their performance must have got over by now. Deva ask her not to trouble kids let them enjoy we will meet Abhi and Myra...wait Myra? Who is she? Latha replies oh she is friend of Riya. Deva thinks to himself "what if she is the same Myra who was training under him but then left everything in the middle and ran away. " Latha ask Deva if she can only talk to Abhi over the phone as its difficult to resist not hearing his voice even for a day. Deva smiles at her and realises it's a mother heart and will not stop at anything. Ok dial his number and speak. Latha dials Abhi's number but getting any answer she gets worried and tells Deva that Abhi always pick up my phone instantly. Why he is not taking my call today? What you think have Aryan spoken to him about us and that is why he is ignoring us? Deva put his hand on her shoulder and reassure her " don't worry god cant be this cruel to a mother " there must be some other reason call Riya and enquire. She dials Riya's number when Myra picks up the phone and narrates the entire incident to her and where they are heading towards.
Latha falls on the floor and screeches in pain..Deva get worried and takes phone from Latha's hand and ask what happened? But by then Myra had already hung up the phone . Latha asks her to take to Fortis hospital as Abhi is there? Deva replies what.. Latha shouts please take me there now.

In the hospital Myra and Riya enquires about Abhi at the reception when receptionist guides them to an OT. They both run to find Aryan anna standing in the corner in his bloodied shirt. They both ask what happened to Abhi and how come your shirt is soaked in blood. Aryan look at them its Abhi's blood they hit him..they hit him.. its all my fault I shouldn't have taken that promise from Abhi. Myra couldn't understand anything what promise? Aryan replies its all my fault..its my fault.. Riya signals Myra not to ask anything to Aryan anna as he is not in any condition to speak. Just then doctors comes out from OT and inform Aryan that operation was successful but as there are multiple fracture and huge lose of blood so we have put Abhi in medically induced coma and going to shift him to ICU. Aryan gets worried what do you mean by coma? Doctor replies don't worry " Sometime we put patient in medially induced coma so that they recover fast especially after such a big accident. " Aryan asks he will fine right? Doctor say we are only doctors and not god, as injuries are quite deep and as mentioned there are multiple fracture so we are not sure until unless patient regains his consciousness and then we will be in better position to comment. Myra and Riya make Aryan sit on a chair and ask him to believe in god I am sure everything will be fine.

Latha and Deva reaches hospital and heads towards OT as well..

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shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Okay Nishu di now if you say anything bad about your story, writing, ready over it etc. etc. I will seriously run behind you with a knife until you don't understand that YOU STORY IS AMAZING, AND IT WILL ALWAYS REMAIN IN MY HEART😡

Now to the update,

I am dying crying right now. 😭 I have cried so much today ehh *screams*

But any ways the way you described the situations on here tremendous and spectacular work. hats off to you. I really don't know how to appreciate you for such amazing writing.. 👏

Alright now I am going to talk to ma BOI Abhi and give him a stay strong all day long speech.

Abhi ma BOi, I know that you are super duper uber strong. Aryan anna is there. Myra and Riya are there so there is nothing absolutely nothing to worry about! I am there too.

Okay Sunny get ready man because my anger is reaching peaks right now, and I am sorry if I karate you dead I mean you are dead. 😡 My karate moves are hecka cool, and Nishu Di I have showcased them on Wattpad!!

I will kill sunnyyy!!!😡

Anyways oh lord so Now Latha and Deva are in the hospital now what😲.

I am super excited for the next one.

Love love love it!!
you do a tremendous job when it comes to writing and portrayal of emotions.

Keep Writing

Update soon

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sonalisharma1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#237

you duffer I said you will not raise your hands first, not that you can't defend yourself

Well said big bro

Hey Riya so soon so you finally decided to come back to me as that scumbag Abhiraj is not there anymore. " Riya gets confused and ask "what , What do you mean

Hey u sunnyyy , just wait and watch , u will pay for this later

Waiting for next update nisthuu

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: shreyj7
Okay Nishu di now if you say anything bad about your story, writing, ready over it etc. etc. I will seriously run behind you with a knife until you don't understand that YOU STORY IS AMAZING, AND IT WILL ALWAYS REMAIN IN MY HEART😡

awww my baby okShreyu🤗

Now to the update,
I am dying crying right now. 😭 I have cried so much today ehh *screams*
But any ways the way you described the situations on here tremendous and spectacular work. hats off to you. I really don't know how to appreciate you for such amazing writing.. 👏

Amazing...well I beg to differ as I have seen many writers be it you or poetic far more superier than me..but I will still take your compliment with humilty😃

Alright now I am going to talk to ma BOI Abhi and give him a stay strong all day long speech.
Abhi ma BOi, I know that you are super duper uber strong. Aryan anna is there. Myra and Riya are there so there is nothing absolutely nothing to worry about! I am there too.
Okay Sunny get ready man because my anger is reaching peaks right now, and I am sorry if I karate you dead I mean you are dead. 😡 My karate moves are hecka cool, and Nishu Di I have showcased them on Wattpad!!
I will kill sunnyyy!!!😡

Dont worry thereare many who is after Sunny after what he did to Abhi..😉😆
Anyways oh lord so Now Latha and Deva are in the hospital now what😲.
I am super excited for the next one.
Love love love it!!
you do a tremendous job when it comes to writing and portrayal of emotions.
Keep Writing
Update soon

Apologies for my short replies as I ma going to post another update in 5 mins.

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1
No update 😒

Sorry Sonu🤗 ...maaf kar do.. " kaan pakaring" yaar busy inholidays but posting another chapter in 5 mins

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Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1
you duffer I said you will not raise your hands first, not that you can't defend yourself
Well said big bro

Hey Riya so soon so you finally decided to come back to me as that scumbag Abhiraj is not there anymore. " Riya gets confused and ask "what , What do you mean

Hey u sunnyyy , just wait and watch , u will pay for this later

Waiting for next update nisthuu