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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1


Nishthuuu missing ur update . Only one more day left for update . . . . Dhink chika Dhink chikaaa


posting another chapter a day earlier..😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyj7



Merry Christmas Nishu..
Hope you have a blessed Christmas!!
Love you.
Miss you...


Merry Christmas...yes I had an awesome christmas and hope you all had it too..😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 32


Abhi, Myra and Riya get on the stage in their costume.. While on the other side Sunny greets his uncle's henchman and ask them to be patient as Abhi is currently performing but he will call him outside college as soon as their performance is over. He thanks them to come as Abhi is thorn in my heart and I have been tolerating him for taking his position not even in the college but also in Riya's life.



On the other side Krishnamurthy and Latha decided to meet Aryan and try and explain him why he was behind him and Abhi in Mumbai and before he could tell them they disappeared into the thin air. They reach their flat Latha hesitates a little not knowing how Aryan would behave with them. Krishnamurthy holds Latha's hand and give her courage and ask her to think positive. They knock the door and Aryan open the door and shocked to see Krishnamurthy standing in front of him . He knows the time he was dreading about is standing infront of him , he surrenders himself to faith and decides to ask Krishnamurthy to come inside. He then notices a lady entering his house along with Krishnamurthy he ask who is she? Krishnamurthy replies she is my wife and we came here to see you for our personal reason as parents and not as a Police commissioner of Mumbai.



On the stage in college Abhi dressed in a commoner clothes performing a scene where he gets to know his real identity as he was living a life of tribal boy but actually a heir to a kingdom. While in his house Krishnamurthy explains Aryan how 20 years ago they were separated from Abhi and how he landed in that locality and met Aryan . Aryan did not know how to react what to say? His life came crashing down someone who he raised since childhood...who is his only family may be never will be the same going this day forward. He was standing at the corner dumbfounded not knowing what to say or do? He wishes hope this is just a nightmare..when he realizes someone at his feet, its Latha who ask him to give him their son back. She says " I know you love Abhi a lot and same for him as whenever he spoke to me he was always talk about you and how you both are close " OH so this is the lady about whom Abhi used to talk about ? she is the same lady whose lip smacking food won over Abhi. Aryan get hold of himself and ask Latha to get up. Latha further adds " I don't want you to go away from us just give us little space in Abhi's life that's it " Aryan did not know what to say " Abhi will never agree to this he love me more than his life, he will not agree to this. Latha and Krishnamurthy agree to this. Krishnamurthy still remember how Abhi put his life in danger just to save Aryan to get hit by a bullet.



Krishnamurthy ask Aryan to help them, just make a story that your father kidnapped Abhi from us 20 years ago and you knew about it but hid from him, as you wanted to use him as a pawn. Aryan gets angry and throws a vase on the ground. You want me to lie to my brother I mean your son? You think he will believe me? Even If I say I killed you both even then he will not leave me. Krishnamurthy asks for forgiveness he says sorry seeing our son in an arm distance and still not able to hug him makes him say all this. He asks Aryan don't you think Abhi living with you is like living a life full of danger, where there are so many enemies and they can harm Abhi any moment. Aren't you afraid about Abhi's future? Krishnamurthy words hit Aryan hard, he always worried about Abhi's safety his future in helplessness he sits on couch holding his head with his hand.




On stage Abhi and Riya enact a scene where they were abandoned by their own kingdom and leave it to live a life like a commoner. Aryan ask them for some time let him think how he will break this truth to Abhi and whatever will happen next will be Abhi's decision and his only. He asks them if they waited for 20 years then wait for some more time. Both Krishnamurthy and Latha agree to this and asks him to take his own time..while leaving Latha holds Aryan's hand and speak hope you will not disappear again? Aryan still broken assures her. " Do you think I am so bad when knowing Abhi can live a normal life with his parents I am a bad man but not this bad ma'am. "


They finally perform a scene where Abhi defeats his enemy and his coronation ceremony is being performed. Play ends and curtains are drawn Abhi, Riya and Myra hug each other and congratulate each other for performing well. Abhi excuses himself as he has to use the washroom while Riya and Myra decides to go to green room to change their clothes. Sunny was looking for this very moment he calls up Abhi's mobile and tells him " hi Abhi this is Sunny I saw your brother getting beaten up with by some goons? Abhi gets worried but how come you know my brother as you never met Anna? Sunny didn't know what to say? Actually I heard him shouting your name in pain... Abhi decided to check himself and ask Sunny where are they? Sunny tells him come near a ground near our college only. Abhi changes his clothes and leave from there on his bike.



In the college Riya and Myra look for Abhi when someone inform them he left from on his bike , he was looking in hurry as he left all his clothes behind. Myra gets suspicious and decides to call Aryan anna and check with him. Aryan already feeling defeated receive Myra call, Myra ask him if he is fine? Aryan replies yes but why are you asking me this question? Myra explains the entire incident and how Abhi left from college as soon as their performance got over without informing anyone anything. Aryan gets up and decide to check himself.



Abhi reaches the place as explained by Sunny but did not find anyone and thought maybe Sunny was joking and calls Aryan anna to check.. Aryan notices Abhi's call and pickup the phone Abhi say Hello Anna... are you... when someone hit him from the back on his head with a rod. Phone fell from his hand..Aryan gets worried he shouts Abhi Abhi...are you alright? Not receving any reply Aryan speed up knowing something is surely wrong.



Abhi touches his head and notices he is bleeding.. he smiles looking at the goons as they surround him. Abhi roars why you all want to invite trouble yourself..goons laugh at him and mock him you have gone mad look at yourself 10 men around you and you are warning us. Abhi holds hand of one goon when he remembers the promise he made to Aryna anna , that he would not raise his hand on anyone. Abhi pulls his hand when another goon hit him on his leg making Abhi fall on ground . Then another one hit him on his stomach...they all beat Abhi mercilessly but Abhi did not raise his hand once. When Sunny enters the ground and hold collar of Abhi and shouts Never mess with me again Abhiraj! What you think you are a hero I showed you today who is a real hero and throw him back on ground.





Aryan frantically trying Abhi's number but able to reach make him worried. When he notices a jeep full of people coming out from a gate.. Aryan decides to check that place and notices someone lying on ground in pool of blood. Aryan run towards that person and turns him around to find its none other Abhi,


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Posted: 7 years ago
First and foremost yahh I am very emotional hehe. If you see me on Wattpad I go around crying everywhere😆
Second of all. Don't you ever call this Fanfiction a "isn't that good" I will kill you if you say that again, and I am serious. This fanfiction is amazing and it is very close to my heart dare you mess with me on this topic you are going to get it from me.😡
Ahhh love love love the update.
It was nice how you switched back and forth between Latha and Krishnamurthy w/ Aryan , and Abhi and Riya and Myra. A sense of a metaphor kind of thing going on there.
But indeed Aryan's feelings here I wanted to point of were tremendously portrayed and hats off to you for that.
And this Sunny you come to me BOi Imma kill you just the way you tried to mere beat Abhi I will murder you with my karate moves.
Abhi man Ma BOI you should fight back at the moment I understand your promises but I cannot see you hurt you know, and here you are now lying in a pool of blood. grrr.
Filled with emotions.
Loved the update a lot.
Keep Writing
Update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thankuuu nisthuu for the update , busy thi yaar celebration m Aur hum logo n chain Ki saans nhi lney di.
Y lo Christmas gift : bhojpuri jingle song😆

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IW-3O0qizJ4


Edited by sonalisharma1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a touching update. The way you portrayed Aryans feelings was just so moving!!!
That little Baahubali bit you added made my day😳
Can't wait for our hero to go back to his dishoom-dishoom mode😉
Keep updating
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Posted: 7 years ago
Abhi is thorn in my heart
Hey sunny u r thorn in our heart , better u stay away 😡
Krishnamurthy replies she is my wife and we came here to see you for our personal reason as parents and not as a Police commissioner of Mumbai.

Finally Aryan ko Pata chl jayega , now what will happen next . . . .



He was standing at the corner dumbfounded not knowing what to say or do

Is scene me Aryan oh myyy God : tearooo in myy eyes.

Do you think I am so bad when knowing Abhi can live a normal life with his parents I am a bad man but not this bad ma'am
Awww , Aryan superb dialogue .
notices Abhi's call and pickup the phone Abhi say Hello Anna... are you... when someone hit him from the back on his head with a rod.
Oh my God , abhiii

Abhi holds hand of one goon when he remembers the promise he made to Aryna

Promise promise promise is promise k chakkar mein Baahubali nipat gya tha , Aur is promise k chakkar me bechara abhi Hospital naa Phuch jaaye

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

Thankuuu nisthuu for the update , busy thi yaar celebration m Aur hum logo n chain Ki saans nhi lney di.

Y lo Christmas gift : bhojpuri jingle song😆

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IW-3O0qizJ4



Too good sonali ji too good🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyj7


Too good sonali ji too good🤣


Oye Shreyuu sunaa tmney y jingle : 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1


Oye Shreyuu sunaa tmney y jingle : 😆



Haaa Sonaaa maine sunna ye jingle mazaaa aa gya jingle belvaaa🤣

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