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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
And this is my question too:Was the man who brought her here, REAL??

The tragedy that was amarsena's life,they definitely need a second chance together. ..to rediscover everything and lead a happy life.fate owes them that.I'm so glad you're writing this one kaushiji.

That is my question even. 😆😆😆

Well... I don't know what I'm writing on serious note. I don't really have a plot in mind because when the background is Baahubali, you can blindly scribble anything. 😆😆

And a big thanks to you for provoking me. I enjoyed writing more than you enjoyed reading, I bet.

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Thanks Pooja and Sonali.

Sonali... ye idea toh copied idea hai. Rebirth and all are cliche already as plots. You liked maybe just because it's AmarSena.

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Oh this is so different Kaushi. And so beguiling. The entire atmosphere in this story is one of mystery and past regression.

Reminds me of the movie Mehbooba

This is fantastic stuff. Thanks for writing this.

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

When I read the first part, I was okay with this staying an OS and was waiting for Boyfriends best friend.
But this part made glad that you continued!

Waiting for next now! 😆

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Wow wow wow...this was so intriguing...AmarSena should lead a happy life...even if its in another lifetime..I'm so glad ur writing this 😳 waiting for the next part Kaushi...and also for the next part of ur other FF

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Now this is intriguing and captivating

Loving it

Thanks for the pm

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shreya

@shreyj7

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

wowww!! this was captivating and really beautiful ⭐️

You should continue writing this...

but I do have a question Who is taking her from place to place like this?

and

Did the man with the smile give her the chit in her purse??

Thanks for the PM..

But why didn't you PM me for the first part😡

chal it's ok but still love the story

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sandhiya_1195

@sandhiya_1195

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Very unique and interesting !!

Wow...Amarendra and Devasena reborn 😳

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: poetic
Oh this is so different Kaushi. And so beguiling. The entire atmosphere in this story is one of mystery and past regression.
Reminds me of the movie Mehbooba

This is fantastic stuff. Thanks for writing this.

Believe me there's nothing in this story. I am just kidding around with two legendary characters. 😆

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: fictitious
When I read the first part, I was okay with this staying an OS and was waiting for Boyfriends best friend.
But this part made glad that you continued!

Waiting for next now! 😆

My continuing or not continuing this though has got nothing to do with MBBF, but I seriously am reconsidering continuing MBBF any further. 😕