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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 28

This is Wow ! Devsena's conflicts have been so perfectly etched out. I can so feel for her - her turmoil, her need for regaining control over everything happening in her life.

I hope she will move towards closure very soon.

I am so loving these interactions b/w Adway and her.

The next part - tomorrow. I am relishing and cherishing every part, a day

Part 29

Finally. The beginning is here.

Devsena remembers everything. She has regressed into her past alright.

Avanthika is also here. Everybody and everything is primed up for the finality.

This is totally amazing.

👏

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#462

I won't post here any longer due to lack of readership. If you wish, pm me, I'll give you the wattpad link.

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 8 years ago

#463

aiyoo

nevermind, will read it on wattpad😊

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

Oh this is sad, Kaushi.

I thought WP was even sadder

BTW, I get you. I thought of writing another story, but I don't think I will.

I would however love to continue with this story on Wp, SO I will be there.

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: poetic
Oh this is sad, Kaushi.
I thought WP was even sadder

BTW, I get you. I thought of writing another story, but I don't think I will.

I would however love to continue with this story on Wp, SO I will be there.

WP has never disappointed me. I rather enjoy writing for the readers der. Fingers crossed I hope they keep encouraging me till the end.

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 8 years ago

#466

OK will read it on wattpad

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sonalisharma1

@sonalisharma1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#467

Wattpad p peecha Nhii chodengey 👍🏼

Unfinished poetry is one of my most favorite . One

U know what Aaj wali update n heart beat badha di thi hme lga don't love me wale ff k jsey ending hui kya but dil thaam k poora padha fir maan gaye kaushi jii

Writing skill me aapka jawab nhiii hindi m word h " kalam ke jaadugar" vo such m ho

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978187

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Posted: 8 years ago

#468

hello Kaushi

Shreya here

Well guess I am having a bad timing here . Thought to say something about the story here but you are keeping it in wattapad only. it's okay I understand.

BTW I have to tell you that I am a big fan of your work . I was following this story religiously but was a silent reader. I am Pretty fascinated with these reincarnation stories especially of a character like Amarsena.

Really great job you are doing. If you don't mind can you please PM me the link to wattapad too. Big fan of this story.