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fictitious

@fictitious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: poetic
Subha,
🤗

Now Kaushi is like a Sister, so I have to let Sid go - she wants him, you see!🤣

THis is again such a heart warming read. And Laddoo has been forever baptised in this group of friends.

Very happy at the last part. Yeah !

I got this name from our Laddoo only! I was actually in search of a cute nickname.

And I've promised to get Sid married to Kaushi after the story ! 😆

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Thank you Hasi Di, Aaradhya and Pooja!
I myself got reminded of my college trips and travelled back in time :)

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shreya

@shreyj7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: fictitious

Haha absolutely Shreya! I'm excited too. Probably that's why I'm able to update regularly.
I hope that energy remains till end though. I get very lazy at times.

And the story will progress slowly only.
I'm very bad at moving story at a fast pace! 😆

Oh I am 100% sure. You will not get lazy this times the storyline is just so interesting and attracting that you will be writing all day and will not even realize that you wrote that much.😆

It is slow paced that is why I am able to soak in every chapter as I read it.😊😊

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sandhiya_1195

@sandhiya_1195

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

A pleasant and lovely update Subha 😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: fictitious

I got this name from our Laddoo only! I was actually in search of a cute nickname.

And I've promised to get Sid married to Kaushi after the story ! 😆

yeah yeah, you absolutely rock! 😆😉

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rajkamal02

@rajkamal02

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

So happy to have you reading the story and a thanks a lot for your lovely feedback.

And you know what? I'm surprised that nobody noticed/mentioned the similarity with Yeh Jawani before, as it is a very popular movie.😆 It was surprisingly coincidental though. Guess its because of the camp, friendship and disturbed girl lead.

This story was actually penned for my best friend few months back. We'd visited a fort in Rajasthan together last December, made up our mind to explore it fully again and started researching on google about places and camps. But we got stuck in our lives without time for leisure,so I decided to vent the frustration out by writing this with my best friend as the lead.(in place of Madhu)

An article about Sariska was my primary trigger.

Later when this PrAnushka craze started, I modified it for them.But as the story shaped up I felt that it bears lot of resemblances to Yeh Jawani. Last week I watched the movie again, to avoid similarities as far as possible ! :D In fact I'd to cut few sequence that I'd planned.

Thanks again for your support! Looking forward to it in future too :) Next chapter will be up tomorrow.😊

No thanks needed..you write so well..happy to see such good stories here..Pranushka has grasped everyone's imagination...

About the update..super 👍🏼...Siddhant is a darling...caring for everyone...Laddoo so cute...interesting in the end..now Madhu will regret her lie...u did not reveal about the mail she recvd...waiting for next...

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Chapter 8

He wants her to stop crying, he doesn't want her to go infront of others with a weeping face, he has promised to fix everything for her, he doesn't want this secret to be passed around, worried about what is bothering her...Sid, the perfect bf/husband material !! 😳

Oh we too have a Laddoo in our thread... ❤️

Loved how Sid is so caring and protective of his friends. Erm... just hope Laddoo doesn't develop feelings for him 😕

Ohoo what did I just read ???? 😲 Let me pinch myself... ouch !! It is real!!! Sid and Merlyn are not a couple ??? Yaaayyy!!!!!!!!! 👏👏 Happaa iyer amma un route clear ippo...😉

Gggrrr!!! Subha!!! You stopped at the crucial moment !!! I want to know Madhu's reaction !!! How she feels when she finally knows Sid is single...poor girl went through a lot of torture. Oh just hug him and cry your lungs out Madhu !!

Love your writing !! Take a bow !! 👏👏👍🏼

But still the mail issue hasn't been resolved yet. Waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm. 😉😆

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Bangaram35

@Bangaram35

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Awesome Awesome Awesome Subha👏👏👏

I just now finished reading all the 8 chapters together. It was so great.

With the new revelation please don't leave us hanging for long..

Eagerly waiting to see how Madhu is gonna react and how their relationship is gonna develop 😉

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Bangaram35
Awesome Awesome Awesome Subha👏👏👏
I just now finished reading all the 8 chapters together. It was so great.
With the new revelation please don't leave us hanging for long..
Eagerly waiting to see how Madhu is gonna react and how their relationship is gonna develop 😉

So happy to have you here!❤️ Thanks for gobbling up all the chapters in one go and tgis wonderful comment!

And I'm updating Chapter 9 soon! 😃