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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Part 6

A lot of mysteries definitely. No I also want to know what happened to Christina. I have a bad feeling that she may not be alive, but well I may be wrong absolutely.

But whatever has happened to C, Diana has a very big role to play. And Joy knows it, that's why he stays away.

I can so understand his concern and anger when he learns about Diana escorting A to the church, in a wheelchair.

And A definitely needs to tell J that she remembers everything. Whatever the consequences.

BTW, those references to Othello, every now and then, is sheer poetry.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Part 7

A completely bewitching turn of events. A cannot tell J about her migraine, because that would reveal that she remembers; while J immediately knows which medicine to offer.

The development of this bond is so beautiful, and I believe at some level, even J feels that dependence with A.

Hence the dust hiding the fire in his eyes.

Finally, we see a small flashback of A's past. Wonder what is it that she signed?

Very intriguing.

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: fictitious
Finally here for the review. Brace yourself for a lot of blabbering. I'll try my best to make sense.

I understand how apprehensive you were of attempting something out of your league. And how you feel good endings seem forced. I understand that, especially because this story has a lot of characters. You had to show them all in perfect state in the end. And too much perfection seems unnatural, right?

But I would say you are underestimating yourself by saying that you're not good with happy endings. It's just that you got used to writing tragedies, that it inadvertently became your comfort zone.

Though I personally love Vivaan and Riha way more than Joy and Anushka, I would say the way you executed Jigsaw Puzzle was way better than you did Don't Love Me. It was not because of the tragedy element alone. It's because DLM was concluded at a point where we wanted to see more of them. The popularity of your Spin Off series proves that.

Jigsaw on the other hand, concluded in every sense. You left no questions unanswered, no emotions unaddressed. Do you think it's just the union of Joy and Anushka that mattered? No. Would it have been as good as this if they had run away from Rungpo and settled elsewhere? No. Atleast not to me. That's why I said I in the previous chapter that I did not want them leaving Rungpo.

Though the most beautiful part, their love was not the fulcrum of this story. Anushka's secret was.
Diana's secret was.
Christina's secret was.
And it all lead to one man, Mr. Joseph Oliver!

Chapter 10 was the chapter that decided the fate of your story. But the previous chapters showed your planning well. Narrating a lot of other elements, you made sure that Joseph visiting or not visiting Anu did not get much hype or attention.

And thats exactly where you scored big time. It was totally unexpected, and better than anything we all would have expected. It perfectly justified Christina's leaving, and Diana's condition.

And because of all these ,chapter 11 naturally happened to you. (though you might think it's forced)

I'd say in chapter 10 you found all the puzzle pieces and numbered them in order.
In the climax, you just had to check the number and fit the pieces into a frame.

And that is exactly how it was supposed to be.

So a big thumbs up from my side! It was stupendous, in every sense! I'm a completely satisfied reader this time !

I wouldn't want to hear you saying again that tragic ending is your thing.
Rather, a deserving ending is!

This comment has sent ripples of happiness down my heart. I know how ott that sounded but it's not at all less. Certain readers of mine who used to criticise every small detail of my updates are nowhere to be seen these days. And that makes me sad. And suddenly you come up...with a fresh new story and with this beeeautiful comment. I myself am unable to write long comments but like a selfish expect one always.

This is one close to my heart thing now. Because many of the regular readers of the story didn't comment making me afraid the end wasn't up to the mark. You have relieved me beyond words.

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Rachna ... I cannot tell you how beautiful you are.

Honestly I wouldn't spend time reading three updates at a go so minutely. You are not only a brilliant writer, a brilliant reader as well. I am so glad to have you reading.

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JeeneKeIshare

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Kaushi ji ,... How could you ...why ..why why ??????😭

coming to the chapters ... Take a Bow girl 👏 that was the Most Unexpected twist ever 👏

I imagined all the weird theories on earth and again proved I watched too many Ekta Serials 😆

Jokes apart ..I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Brilliant piece of writing 👏 you have an Amazing talent of creating a connection between the characters and the Readers 👏

Will miss Joy Anushka ..will miss Rangpo .. Man gaa raha he 'Abhi naa jaao chod ke ki dil abhi bhara nahi'

Waiting to Meet Anushka and Prabhas with other names Somewhere in the World Soon ...

Never stop writing ..it's a request 😃

lots of Love.

Edit : Sorry for the late reply..blame the real world and Thanks for The PMs😊

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Penfolk
Rachna ... I cannot tell you how beautiful you are.
Honestly I wouldn't spend time reading three updates at a go so minutely. You are not only a brilliant writer, a brilliant reader as well. I am so glad to have you reading.

He he Kaushi 😆 You know what kind of temptation I am resisting. 😊

Jokes apart, the story is so beautiful that I am just taking time to savour it.

Hopefully, I should end reading by tonight.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Part 8

The confrontation between the Olivers and Joy takes place, post Shelley's residence in Joy's place in Rungpo.

Joy feels that it's Diana who has caused Christina to leave, while Joseph rebuts, being a Father,

Diana is pretty obsessed with Joy, till this point of time.

Off to Part 9

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shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

Sorry for the late reply.

But the poster looks awesome..😃

Are u going to make a trailer on this one???

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#269

Lakshaki you don't need to be sorry.

That you visited is enough for me. Lots of love.

Thank you so much on a daily basis Rachna! :p

Shreyj7. ..I cannot make trailers. Moreover it's really difficult making one for this.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#270

Part 9

Kaushi, that was one awesome update. It had so much that commenting and doing justice to it is going to be difficult.

However, me being me, I will not give up. 😆

Joy's concern and fear for Anushka is so real that it's palpable. And he knows that Diana is not somebody to trust with, esp. about A's secret identity. The incident at the Church has of course rattled him, and it is due to this that he wants A to be healed and to find her way.

Though it is breaking his heart as much as hers, given that these two lonely souls have found a purpose together.

A's past is dreadful, growing up without one's own, without love and affection is pretty harmful. Hate Shreya for manipulating A to sign those papers.

And that breakdown of A in J's arms is magical, and much needed. Now there are no secrets between them, not anymore.

Ch 10

What a nice but emotional turn of events. And these two had the much needed discussion.

Diana of course had a crush on J, and it was her obsession that drove C away, from Rungpo, from Joy. And joy had stayed back as a favour to the Olivers, for all the help that they had extended to his Mother and him.

But he's right, he cannot keep on paying for that favour through his life.

And now that he A with him, he is tentative yet ready.

Of course A is flabbergasted to see her sling bag and the diary and that he realises that C was at least better off than A because everybody in the mansion loved her.

Love the way how their relationship has blossomed so nicely.

Ch 11

Such a revelation. We have mostly been thinking in a different way.

So Diana is obsessive of both her Father and J, and of course didn't want to share either with C. Makes sense but it drove C away from Rungpo, without informing anybody.

And now final, twist in the tale. A is actually Joseph Oliver's daughter, his love child - and both the Olivers are aware of her existence.

My God! What a brilliant twist!

Prologue

What a beautiful end to this beautiful story! Each and every chapter is like part of a jigsaw puzzle and at the end, this puzzle is just so beautiful. A is right, the baby would complete the remaining small gaps in the puzzle.

Love how A, D and C are close to each other sharing every moment. And then there is Ron and Rohit.

Loved how Margaret Oliver accepts A as her daughter and showers her with all the love.

I am a sucker for happy endings and this just made sigh with happiness.

Thanks Kaushi for writing this beautiful jigsaw puzzle.

And finally, I have read the entire story. 😊

Edited by poetic - 8 years ago