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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Push-pull
I read it immediately. 👏 Good going dear.. Keep it flowing🥳

Means a lot dear! Will try to keep you returning! 😊

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MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Aah! I am so delighted with this story re!

Painful but really cool..

how many chaps are you planning kaushi ji?

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda
Aah! I am so delighted with this story re!
Painful but really cool..

how many chaps are you planning kaushi ji?

Not decided meenu. Won't be much long.

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MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Penfolk

Not decided meenu. Won't be much long.

update soonish

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda
update soonish

Yeah very soon. In process.😃

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: emerald39
Gahh, I cannot tell you how much I absolutely love Vivaan's flippant attitude. He clearly doesn't give a shit and I really love such characters 😆 And the meeting between Vivaan and Riha was spectacular! I could visualise every little detail. Can't wait for more, Kaushi! Keep 'em coming!

P.S. Totally zoomed in on the part where Riha notices Vivaan's fingers 😆 ❤️

Hahahah finger obsession 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Now, I am liking this oxymoron Vivaan more and more with every update. So caring and compassionate towards others, but just wants to be away from every emotion around him. Emotions - whether he himself has to express them. Or emotions - whether they are bestowed on him.

The heart of a mush inside, but the exterior is hard to crack. Haunted by his past, his present has taken an unbearable shape.

Very interesting.

Riha has work cut out for her. It's not going to be easy to get him back on the emotional path again.

Thanks for the update.

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emerald39

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Yaar, Kaushi, you make me want to reach forth and give Vivaan one giant hug. Poor baby. And how poetically you summed up the character. He's an oxymoron, hard to love yet the easiest. Love!

And I found the conversation between Riha and Raajiv about Vivaan quite adorable and amusing 😆 Loved the update! And as always, looking forward to the next one already!

Edited by emerald39 - 8 years ago

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Gems.musingsRN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Great update! Though short...waiting for next

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: poetic
Now, I am liking this oxymoron Vivaan more and more with every update. So caring and compassionate towards others, but just wants to be away from every emotion around him. Emotions - whether he himself has to express them. Or emotions - whether they are bestowed on him.
The heart of a mush inside, but the exterior is hard to crack. Haunted by his past, his present has taken an unbearable shape.

Very interesting.

Riha has work cut out for her. It's not going to be easy to get him back on the emotional path again.

Thanks for the update.

ohh this comment made my day! 😳

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