PraNushka LS : Don't Love Me!/ Scene edits on PAGE 39/4th Sep - Page 5

Awesome update

Wah! What a superb chapter! This guy Vivaan is so interesting. And the way you have described their meeting at the cafe... I could see everything! Right from where Riha froze with that muffin in her mouth... to her confused frown like "what is this guy up to?" and to Vivaan's straight to the point "I don't give a shit" discussion. All the while, I was grinning like a fool. LOL! Oh! How I wish I could see this on screen. This story's getting really intense! You've just made me really impatient for the next. Do continue soon!

Amazing! !

Fantastic!! Vivaan is intriguing...Waiting for more of their interaction 😃

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊

The New Banner was so Nice.😊

Vivaan Character was so Interesting.😊

Vivaan directly said to Riha that Rajeev loves her not wasting any time,it was so Interesting.😊

Vivaan didn't gave time to heard her reply he just said and went away,Typical Character.😊

Riha thinking about Vivaan was so Interesting.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu

thank you so much for reading re. Your comments give me energy to write and post soon.

Originally posted by: poetic

This part is such a delight. Finally, Vivaan and Riha meets and boy oh boy! What a collision.

I will have to read the update and comment properly though 😆

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Awesome update

Loved it

So our bechaari doctor was having some me tym and this heartless fellow had to come and interrupt her

The way he straight confessed his frnds love for her was so funny u need to built it up a little man

What what happened to him that has destroyed him so badly

Ps:thanks tonn for the pm dear

Originally posted by: RyReyFics

Wah! What a superb chapter! This guy Vivaan is so interesting. And the way you have described their meeting at the cafe... I could see everything! Right from where Riha froze with that muffin in her mouth... to her confused frown like "what is this guy up to?" and to Vivaan's straight to the point "I don't give a shit" discussion. All the while, I was grinning like a fool. LOL! Oh! How I wish I could see this on screen. This story's getting really intense! You've just made me really impatient for the next. Do continue soon!

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Amazing! !

I just loved the encounter. .wow!

You know I'm a fan of this type of deep detailed writing style and you're awesome, beautifully doing it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

P.S pls don't get them married to other people.I know it's too early to say that.but many interesting ffs have disappointed me bringing such clich twists.

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Fantastic!! Vivaan is intriguing...Waiting for more of their interaction 😃