VENAI FF:YOU'RE ALL THAT MATTERS TO ME(Chapter:3 UPDATED!!)22/06/17 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda

woh sab baad mein.. now jaldi update karo

wohi toh soch rahi hoon😆...give me some hours time
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wohi toh soch rahi hoon😆...give me some hours time

Soonish
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NEW CHARACTERS:

--Sivanand Akula(CAMEO):Venny's father
--Radhika Akula(CAMEO):Venny's mother
--Renuka Akula(CAMEO):Venny's cousin sister.Aged 7.
--Manasa Akula:Venny's cousin sister and Best friend.Can do anything and everything for the person she loves.Studied in Mumbai.Came for Vacation...but I think it will be long😉
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Chapter:2

''maybe you would never become a father..''

WHY??WHY??WHY LORDDD WHY??What did I do soo wrong that you cursed me soo mercilessly??Whom have I ever hurt, that this pain has befallen upon me??His heart cried..He broke down,choking upon his own words,salty waters washing over his stubbly cheeks,eyes once filled with happiness now glinted red with pain and unacceptance,his shoulders and head hung low defeated against the play of fate...

He could see those playful eyes of the Lord staring at his agony.He seated himself infront of the idol,like he used to do everytime his mother scolded him...he believed his father could also listen those little complains about his mother along with the lord..only they both listened to him.

''You know...you know everything...you know that I love her,you know that I want her...live with her...Then why??...All these years I never wanted to get married...I wanted to live my single life to the fullest..But you brought me to her..made me fall in love with her...so deep that every note of my heartbeats sings her name...You made me believe that we would be together forever and no one would come between us...then why are you trying to take her away from me??...I cant live without her..I CAN'T...he closed his eyes,his back leaned against the headboard.A small smile covered his lips...recalling their little moment.

3 days before---Akula Residence

Everyone was in a jovial mood in the Akula's.Afterall their lovely princess was getting married.What could bring more happiness than this??

"So everything is decided then...these two will get married next month!!!Latha happily gleamed.

"Yes..as you say...we are very happy to oblige'' Sivanand happily joined.

"Jai...if you wish Vennela can show you around"Radhika quipped looking at her daughter.

Latha understood that witty question...a sly smile spread over her face.
Vennela's eyes went wide listening it.Here she was trying hard not to look at him and now her very own mother is playing with her...

"Nooo...''she pitched.''I mean I was about to take Renu for...uhhmm..uhmm..riding the bike..nah..nahnaa...BICYCLE!!...she asked me to teach her''she uncoherently rambled out and took a deep breath.She don't want anyone to know how shy and tensed she was...but NO!!

"When??"Renu asked by pouting at her "15 years elder to her", cousin sister.

Vennela shot an funny apologetic look at her cute little sister."Renuuu,dont you remember yesterday night you asked me"Vennela said signaling Renu to say in her favour.But which little kid understands all this??

"Noo..I didn't''Renu said ever soo cutely.

''Renuuu...''Vennela tried saying only to be interrupted by Radhika.

''Vennela...you are showing Jai around.Is it clear??"

"Ohhkaay..''she agreed wondering what would be the result of taking him along.

"Come...''she said trying to hide her nervousness.

"Hmm...''he happily agreed.

Jai's Pov

I love this way of yours too..I never knew someone would look this beautiful even when they are nervous.I wish this side of her never fades...And I feel I am falling for you even deeper..You have captured my heart Vennela...

He smiled to himself.

Vennela's Pov

Ohh god..why is he smiling like this??What must be going on in his mind??Is he thinking about me??urgghh...Vennela whats this yaar??why are u getting this nervous??Look you are a doctor...atleast show some maturity...Venny you cant be a shy creature like this...Comm'on now concentrate...

Jai was staring at her face...her eyes were crunched up in nervousness...It seemed as if she was talking with herself...and she looked cute!!

"Soo...Can we walk??''

''Hmm..??''she came out of the other world.

"Can we walk??"

"oohh yeah...come''she waved path for him.

''Lovely...''Jai mumbled looking at her

''what??''

''uhmmm...the...the painting"he managed to point at a large canvas.

"ohh...that one...it is more than a century old,mughal painting..."and she went on talking about it.

The painting nor the history about it interested him...it was this girl with brown eyes that interested him,it was her expressions,her sweet voice,her curly licorice locks,her pink petal like lips which interested him.

She caught him glancing at her,butterflies erupted in her insides...the feeling was unexplainable and yet soo deep and eloquent.She didn't know how to respond soo preferred to just walk away...that would bring him from the trance..

"This is the lotus pond...we often spend our time here at the night...and the cool breeze just makes everything more pleasant''she said facing the waters.

He smiled at her.She sat down on the stone seating and gestured him to sit,through her eyes.He loved how they started conveying each other through the eyes...

*splash*...''RENUUU''Vennela screamed,her little sister didn't find some other time to play with her??she cant even run around her because that would look stupid..soo she let go..Her front hairs were dripping wet...she shot an apologetic look to Jai who was smiling at her...she was making making such cute faces while drying her hair..that Jai couldn't help but go ''aww''...he wanted to captured the moment.

*snap*...he clicked her picture...
''Jai..''she shot a look at him.

''Jai..delete it..''

''Why should I ??''

''Jai...this is not fair...comm'on delete it now''...

''NOO..I wont''

She moved towards him,trying to take the phone out of his hold,he moved the phone from left to right hand..she tried jumping..but he wouldn't let her grab it...he ran with it...

''Jai stop...''she followed him as well..

Jai slipped over the marbled floor..Vennela dashed into him..which resulted in her getting enclosed between him and wall which he held for support.

The phone was long forgotten...

"Jai..''she whispered.
"sshhh..."he quitened her...

His grip on her waist grew firm...her fists curled further on his chest...their breath mingling with each others...she closed her eyes letting herself indulge in this moment...his free hand ever soo slightly held her face...his thumb caressing her cheeks...her lips quivered..he closed his eyes and joined his forehead with hers...the tips of their nose touching...their hearts beating in the same rhythm...the warmth of love blanketed them...this closeness felt right to both of them...''together''felt right...

''Akkayyaaa...''

Their eyes shot open...realization hit them..but they weren't apologetic...they were in this together..nothing forced...the heart just followed its desires..his grip on her waist loosened...she didn't like his touch lessening on her...she removed her hands from him...

"Akkayyyaaa..''...

''I am cominggg...''before walking away she looked upto his eyes once again..

No he couldn't let her go..before knowing whether she felt apologetic for her behavior...or whether she felt the same what he did.

He took a stride and held her hand,pulling her to him...his arms caging her from behind..his breath fanning near her cheeks..

''I cannot let you go...before knowing what you felt about what happened...between us''he whispered

His husky voice was again capturing her in its depth.

"It felt right...'together' felt right''she said softly.

His happiness knew no bounds...he smiled and whispered..''Even I did..''she smiled and slipped away from his hold.

He stood there smiling at her retreating figure...''together''felt right...he repeated

Present- Vennela's room

She was blushing remembering their little moment...she could not stop thinking about him..

''ooohhh...''Vennela glanced up and threw a pillow at the voice.

''Venny...I cant believe...you were blushing...ohh goddd''

"I was not blushing...''she tried covering up

''As If I am going to buy your explanation...well tell me this, is he good looking??or does he look like those monkeys we shooed together??''

''Noo...he is very handsome..''she shot back

''Hawww Venny...tu ladkon ko compliments kabse dene lagi??(when did you start giving compliments to boys??)

''Maanasaa...keep your hindi to yourself..and don't speak a word here...and I am not giving a compliment simply,he is...handsome"she said irritatedly

"ohhkaaayy...soo he is good looking,what else??his job,family and all...detail mai batao naa"Manasa said as she comfortably placed herself on the bed.

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Edited by --Nazakaat-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Author's note:

Guys I don't know how many of you like such romantic descriptions...I know it was a bit too cheesy..but I like to keep it this way..if u have any issues with such scenes..do let me know..i will try to reduce it in upcoming updates.And my story is a bit melodramatic...apologies if someone didn't like it.

Regards,
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Chapter:2

''maybe you would never become a father..''

WHY??WHY??WHY LORDDD WHY??What did I do soo wrong that you cursed me soo mercilessly??Whom have I ever hurt, that this pain has befallen upon me??His heart cried..He broke down,choking upon his own words,salty waters washing over his stubbly cheeks,eyes once filled with happiness now glinted red with pain and unacceptance,his shoulders and head hung low defeated against the play of
I am still expecting a big twist !!!
He could see those playful eyes of the Lord staring at his agony.He seated himself infront of the idol,like he used to do everytime his mother scolded him...he believed his father could also listen those little complains about his mother along with the lord..only they both listened to him.

''You know...you know everything...you know that I love her,you know that I want her...live with her...Then why??...All these years I never wanted to get married...I wanted to live my single life to the fullest..But you brought me to her..made me fall in love with her...so deep that every note of my heartbeats sings her name...You made me believe that we would be together forever and no one would come between us...then why are you trying to take her away from me??...I cant live without her..I CAN'T...he closed his eyes,his backleaned against the headboard.A small smile covered his lips...recalling their little moment.

3 days before---Akula Residence

Everyone was in a jovial mood in the Akula's.Afterall their lovely princess was getting married.What could bring more happiness than this??

"So everything is decided then...these two will get married next month!!!Latha happily gleamed.

"Yes..as you say...we are very happy to oblige'' Sivanand happily joined. We are also very happy !

"Jai...ifyou wish Vennela can show you around"Radhika quipped looking at her daughter.

Latha understood that witty question...a sly smile spread over her face.
Vennela's eyes went wide listening it.Here she was trying hard not to look at him and nowher very own mother is playing with her...

"Nooo...''she pitched.''I mean I was about to take Renu for...uhhmm..uhmm..riding the bike..nah..nahnaa...BICYCLE!!...she asked me to teach her''she uncoherently rambledout and took a deep breath.She don't want anyone to know how shy and tensed she was...but NO!!

"When??"Renu asked by pouting at her "15 years elder to her", cousinsister.

Vennela shot an funny apologetic look at her cute little sister."Renuuu,dont you remember yesterday night you asked me"Vennela said signalingRenu to say in her favour.But which little kid understands all this??

"Noo..I didn't''Renu said ever soo cutely.

''Renuuu...''Vennela tried saying only to be interrupted by Radhika.

''Vennela...you are showing Jai around.Is it clear??"

"Ohhkaay..''she agreed wondering what would be the result of taking him along.

"Come...''she said trying to hide her nervousness.

"Hmm...''he happily agreed.

Jai's Pov

I love this way of yours too..I never knew someone would look this beautiful even when they are nervous.I wish thisside of hernever fades...And I feel I am falling for you even deeper..You have captured my heart Vennela...

He smiled to himself. Awww!!!!!

Vennela's Pov

Ohh god..why is he smiling like this??What must be going on in his mind??Is he thinking about me??urgghh...Vennela whats this yaar??why are u getting this nervous??Look you are a doctor...atleast show some maturity...Venny you cant be a shy creature like this...Comm'on now concentrate... Oh that's a different take from a belle to a doctor. Reminds me of her role in Tamil movie Thandavam where she plays an eye doctor. Such a matured role but poor thing they kill her !

Jai was staring at her face...her eyes were crunched up in nervousness...It seemed as if she was talking with herself...and she looked cute!!

"Soo...Can we walk??''
Erm... Do you want him to carry you Ms.Vennu ?? Lol
''Hmm..??''she came out of the other world.

"Can we walk??"

"oohh yeah...come''she waved path for him.

''Lovely...''Jai mumbled looking at her

''what??''

''uhmmm...the...the painting"he managed to point at a large canvas.

"ohh...that one...it is more than a century old,mughal painting..."and she went on talking about it.

The painting nor the history about it interested him...it was this girl with brown eyes thatinterested him,it was her expressions,her sweet voice,her curly licorice locks,her pink petal like lips which interested him. Oh yeah anyone would fall for her

She caught him glancing at her,butterflies erupted in her insides...the feeling was unexplainable and yet soo deep and eloquent.She didn't know how to respond soo preferred to just walk away...that would bring him from the trance.. Hee Hee Hee

"This is the lotus pond...we often spend our time here at the night...and the cool breeze just makes everything more pleasant''she said facing the waters.

He smiled at her.She sat down on the stone seating and gestured him to sit,through her eyes.He loved how they started conveying each other through the eyes...

*splash*...''RENUUU''Vennela screamed,her little sister didn't find some other time to play with her??she cant even run around her because that would look stupid..soo she let go..Her front hairs were dripping wet...she shot an apologetic look to Jai who was smiling ather...she was making making such cute faces while drying her hair..that Jai couldn't help but go ''aww''...he wanted to captured the moment.

*snap*...he clicked her picture...
''Jai..''she shot a look at him.

''Jai..delete it..''

''Why should I ??''

''Jai...this is not fair...comm'on delete it now''...

''NOO..I wont''

She moved towards him,trying to take the phone out of his hold,he moved the phone from left to right hand..she tried jumping..but he wouldn't let her grab it...he ran with it... Naughty guy and he never feels any shame when it comes to Vennu

''Jai stop...''she followed him as well..

Jai slipped over the marbled floor..Vennela dashed into him..which resulted in her getting enclosed between him and wall which he held for support.

The phone was long forgotten...

"Jai..''she whispered.
"sshhh..."he quitened her...

His grip on her waist grew firm...her fists curled further on his chest...their breath mingling with each others...she closed her eyes letting herself indulge in this moment...his free hand ever soo slightly held her face...his thumb caressing her cheeks...her lips quivered..he closed his eyes and joined his forehead with hers...the tips of their nose touching...their hearts beating in the same rhythm...the warmth of love blanketed them...this closeness felt right to both of them...''together''felt right...
No no no only after marriage !... lol
''Akkayyaaa...''

Their eyes shot open...realization hit them..but they weren't apologetic...they were in this together..nothing forced...the heart just followed its desires..his grip on her waist loosened...she didn't like his touch lessening on her...she removed her hands from him...

"Akkayyyaaa..''...

''I am cominggg...''before walking away she looked upto his eyes once again..

No he couldn't let her go..before knowing whether she felt apologetic for her behavior...or whether she felt the same what he did.

He took a stride and held her hand,pulling her to him...his arms caging her from behind..his breath fanning near her cheeks.. So romantic...

''I cannot let you go...before knowing what you felt about what happened...between us''he whispered

His husky voice was again capturing her in its depth.

"It felt right...'together' felt right''she said softly.

His happiness knew no bounds...he smiled and whispered..''Even I did..''she smiled and slipped away from his hold.

He stood there smiling at her retreating figure...''together''felt right...he repeated We also feel it right !!

Present- Vennela's room

She was blushing remembering their little moment...she could not stop thinking about him..

''ooohhh...''Vennela glanced up and threw a pillow at the voice.

''Venny...I cant believe...you were blushing...ohh goddd''

"I was not blushing...''she tried covering up

''As If I am going to buy your explanation...well tell me this, is he good looking??or does he look like those monkeys we shooed together??''

''Noo...he is very handsome..''she shot back
No doubt about that !
''Hawww Venny...tu ladkon ko compliments kabse dene lagi??(when did you start giving compliments to boys??)

''Maanasaa...keep your hindi to yourself..and don't speak a word here...and I am not giving a compliment simply,he is...handsome"she said irritatedly

"ohhkaaayy...soo he is good looking,what else??his job,family and all...detail mai batao naa"Manasa said as she comfortably placed herself on the bed. Manasaa hmmm better stay away from Jai ! He's only for Vennela

Where did this Manasa arrive from 😡 anyway she's needed to add more thrill to the story hmmm let me see her role in Jai-Vennu's life. Hope Jai tells his problem to Vennu soon. She'll be more devastated than him but surely they'll get through this.

Very emotional Keerthana. Forgot to mention the edit, it's beautiful. I liked this one better than the one you made earlier because in that her face was at his back but in this it's at front. It's lovely. In case you are releasing their story as a book, you can use this one for the cover page ! 😉 😆
Edited by bahubalifan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Jai and Vennela Pov was so Nice.😊
The Feelings of Jai and Vennela was so Interesting.😊
Jai and Vennela Moments were so Cute.😳
The way Jai asked Vennela what she felt,it was so Cute.😊
Vennela blushing was so Cute.😳
The Banner was so Awesome.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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and thank u soo much for commenting...it just makes me soo happy to see ur reaction😳

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Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊Ohh its my pleasure sis😳

It was Amazing Part.😊thank u soo much😃
Jai and Vennela Pov was so Nice😃. I am planning to include more in coming updates😳
The Feelings of Jai and Vennela was so Interesting.😊their feelings are the usp of this story..soo more to come
Jai and Vennela Moments were so Cute.😳they themselves are soo cute...soo when they are together..cuteness quotient just increases😳
The way Jai asked Vennela what she felt,it was so Cute😊.i know...that is my fav part from the update
Vennela blushing was so Cute.😳let her...soon things are going to change🥱
The Banner was so Awesome.😊thank u ...glad u liked it😃
Please Update Next Part soon.😊yup I will try...😊😊
And thank u soo much sis for such a cute comment😃😳

PriyaSweety-Anu

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awesome.. so Story flashback me hai😆
and 😳 super touch😛

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