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Originally posted by: nishha

Namma natpai thappa pesurvan
Poramayil pesura vilangathavan
idula padhi rating naan inda line kaga vae koduthen...😃😃😃
aparam kadarkariline kaga..

Originally posted by: krithikas

WOW FANTASTIC POEM RAVI.👏👏👏

This is your best poem till date.👍🏼

Enaku ovoru line um romba pudichithu.👍🏼

I just thought about all my friends in the forum while reading it.😃

Especially these lines too GOOD.👏👏👏

.Uravugal kai vitalum

Unamaiyana friend ah nee kai vida matta
Santhoshathil onna irunthom
Sogathil onna irunthom
Ethayum ethirpakama seikiravan thaan unmaiyana nanban
Athan nee en nanba
Nee sirithal un santhosham ai ellarukkum solluva
Nee sogam ah iruntha athai yaar idamum solla matta

Evalo sontham irunthalum
Oru Nalla nanban iruntha avan thaan athirstasali

Intha jenmathil nee yen nanban ah vanthathu
Ennaku kidaicha santhosham

Really I am so fortunate to have so many loving friends in the forum.😃

Great Job Ravi,👏 I just love the poem a lot.👍🏼

Originally posted by: krithikas

WOW FANTASTIC POEM RAVI.👏👏👏

This is your best poem till date.👍🏼

Enaku ovoru line um romba pudichithu.👍🏼

I just thought about all my friends in the forum while reading it.😃

Especially these lines too GOOD.👏👏👏

.Uravugal kai vitalum

Unamaiyana friend ah nee kai vida matta
Santhoshathil onna irunthom
Sogathil onna irunthom
Ethayum ethirpakama seikiravan thaan unmaiyana nanban
Athan nee en nanba
Nee sirithal un santhosham ai ellarukkum solluva
Nee sogam ah iruntha athai yaar idamum solla matta

Evalo sontham irunthalum
Oru Nalla nanban iruntha avan thaan athirstasali

Intha jenmathil nee yen nanban ah vanthathu
Ennaku kidaicha santhosham

Really I am so fortunate to have so many loving friends in the forum.😃

Great Job Ravi,👏 I just love the poem a lot.👍🏼

Originally posted by: nishha

krithi me too remember all my forum friends while reading that poem..
its awesome la adhaalae enaku oru doubt...
idu unmaiyavai ravi oda sonda kavidhai ya illa suttadha nu...🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Neenga enimel poem reviewer ah agidalam 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: hopper_ocean

awww so sweet podalanga ... 🤣🤣 1 lakshs mattuma 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Unga kelvi romba vai super 🤣 Ithu ennoda sontha own kavithai naan lam kavithai vishayathula copy adikavai mattan because orginal kavithai ku thaan worth athigam 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: nishha

already promotion line la iruken naan ini idu vera new posting ah enaku..????
enaku oru small doubt inda line laKadarkari ah vida uyarnthathu nam natpu..
kadarikari epa uyaramachu????🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ravi.

rhyming ah solla vidunga amma 🤣🤣🤣