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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap: Rajbeer knows about Sunny and Preeto's fake marriage, but doesnt say anything. NA shows Ishmeet the pictures of her and Suraj. NA will make sure that these pics are everywhere in Amritsar.

Imaginary: Ishmeet went to her bedroom.
NA- ab iss sab ke consqueneces Preeto ko dekhne padegi.
She pulls out her phone and dials Preeto's number. Preeto picks it up. Preeto- hello
NA- agar apne behen ko bachane ke akhere umid hai toh phir mere ghar ao.
Then she disconnects. Preeto quickly goes to Ahluwalia house.
As she enters she sees NA sitting on the sofa. Preeto- kyu bolaya hai mujhe .
NA gets up- itna attitude.
Preeto- kam ki baat
NA- thats what i like about u. kam ki baat. hmm tum chahati kya ho. Rajbeer ki dolat.
NA gets a envelope from the table and throw money at Preeto. NA- kitne dolat, 10 thousand, 50 thousands. Chalo 1 lakh, 4 lakh. Yeh lo aur Amritsar ko choudo.
Preeto- apne samhaj kya rakha hai mujhe.
NA- ek ladki jo mere beti ka pyaar use chin na chahate hai.
Preeto- ek baat apko patta nahi. Simran toh India mein bhi nahi thi jab meine aur Rajbeer ek doosre se kaha ke hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hai.
NA- kya hua i dont care.
Preeto- aur yeh paise kyu
NA- Aram ki zindagi jio. Ishmeet ki shaadi most importantly. Rajbeer se door jane ka ek hi rasta hai. Tum humsha ki liye Amritsar choud do.
Preeto- mein apke baat kaise mano
NA shows her the pics- yeh pictures kal poore amritsar mein hongay agar tumne Amritsar nahi choud toh.
Preeto tears up- thek hai. Mein Amritsar choud dongi lekin Meeta di ko ek baar dulhan baane dekh na chaheti hon.
NA- okay fine sirf Meeta ki shaadi tak. Lekin jab hum Meeta ki shaadi karane ke baad ghar ae aur tumhe dekha toh phir uss raat Meeta ki reception hogi. Aur uski doosre raat pe Ishmeet ke divorce papers tumhe dekh ne milaengay.
Preeto- nahi meine kaha na sirf di ki shaadi tak phir mein chali gaongi. Phir khabi Amritsar nahi aongi.
NA- now thats like it. Paise lo aur gao.
Preeto- yeh se rishte sirf ap samhaj sakti hai. agar mere di ki shaadi todne ki baat ae toh phir mere zindagi bhi mein moft mein dedongi.
NA- oh yeah sisterhood and all. Paise lo ya na lo tumhare marze lekin mere Simran ke Rajbeer se door raho.
Preeto leaves and NA smiles evily.
AT NIGHT...
Sunny and Preeto are in their room and Sunny notices Preeto is sad. Sunny- Preeto ji kya hua.
Preeto- Sunny ji woh mein aaj Neelam aunty ke ghar gae thi.
Sunny- kya hua
Preeto- unhoone kaha ke agar mein Amritsar nahi chouda toh phir woh Ishu di ki pictures poore Amritsar mein laj waengi. Lekin ab ek aur problem ae hai.
Sunny- kya i hope ke Rajbeer ko humare chouti shaadi ke baare mein patta nahi chala. (then smiles)
Preeto- bilkul yahe hua hai.
Sunny is shocked- ab kya kare.
Preeto- mujhe nahi patta ke agay kya hona hai. Sirf itna jaanti hon ke Meeta di ko ek baar dulhan bante dekhlo phir mein Amritsar choud dongi.
Sunny- lekin yeh toh saara sar galat hai.
Preeto- yeh galat hai ya sahi, mujhe nahi patta lekin sirf ek baat patta hai. Mere amritsar mein rehne se bhaut zindagiya barbad hongi.
Sunny- nahi agar ap raho gi toh bhi kuch nahi badle ga. Apko kya lajta ke Rajbeer aur Simran ki shaadi se Rajbeer aur Simran khush rahengay. Nahi Preeto ji. Yeh shaadi sirf Simran aur Neelam Aunty ki zid hai aur kuch nahi. Yeh shaadi hui toh fir simran, neelam aunty, rajbeer aur especially apko bhaut dard hoga.
Preeto- mujhe jana hi padenga.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its superbb...👍🏼 next part plz...😃
and sunny at the end kuch sahi bola atleast in ur writing...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice continue the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice story. You are very creative Sana. You should be a writer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha great story ... preeto is very samajdar in ur story 😊 great & teach that sunny a lesson ... he deserves it 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Imaginary Episode 2

It is Pankeeta sangeet, Rajpreet and Sunny simran dance on Suno ek thi kach ki gudiya.
After the sangeet ends Preeto starts crying in her room. Preeto to herself- di im sorry mein tere shaadi mein nahi aongi. im so sorry. mujhe jaana padega. im sorry humesha ke liye
She didnt know that Sonu was outside the room listening to her. Sonu heard her and had tears in her eyes. She rushed to Sunny who was helping with some decorations. Rajbeer and bj papaji and everyone was there. Sonu- Sunny jiju mujhe apse baat karne hai.
Sunny- nahi Sonu abhi thoda busy hon
Sonu gets mad- MEINE KAHA NA ABHI BAAT KARNE HAI.
Sunny and everyone is shocked - Sonu kya hua
Sonu- AP ATE HAI YA MEIN RAJBEER BHAIYA SE POCHU
Sunny- chalo baat karte hai.
They go in a room Sunny- kya tha yeh
Sonu-mere di Amritsar choud rahe hai aur ap mujse poch rahe hai
Sunny- tumhe kaise patta chala
Sonu- meine suna lekin ab agar Meeta di ki shaadi ke baad sab ke samhe sach nahi kaha toh phir Bani di sab baata dongi. Aur agar Bani di ko patta chala toh woh Ishu di toh kya Dhruv jiju ko bhi apne samhe nahi shalhamat nahi khade rahene degi.
Sunny- nahi tum Bani ko kuch nahi bolo gi
Sonu- toh phir mere behen ko roko
Sunny- woh bhaut zidi hai
Sonu- apse nahi hota toh phir Rajbeer bhaiya se hoga. Rajbeer bhaiya agar di ko rokenga toh phir isska matlab sach bar ajae ga.
Sunny- dekho mein Preeto ji ko maana ne ki koish karonga.
Sonu- koish nahi roko unhe.
Then she leaves leaving Sunny more tensed then ever.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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main chahti hoon ke sach samne aiye ... you update fast ... great 🤗

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