YE DIL KHONE LAGA HAI YAARA FF (part2 on pg4) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 1

roshni and piyush have completed their college studies .

roshni:aaj kitna boring day hai .
I think kuchh creative karna chahiye !!!
But kyaaa?
Idea!
I should start composing a song!
Mmm...soch...roshni...soch...!!

scene shifts to piyush house

Piyush: Pyaare chalo koi achchha sa gana gaake sunao!
Pyaare: ok bhai ...give me 5 mins pls ..let's think.

At roshni house,
looking at her cute doll, she is trying to compose a song for first time !
1 ..2...3 ...and ..go...
She starts singing ..
Tera hone laga hai ye yaara ...
ye dil khone laga hai yaara..
o yaara ..o yaara ...sun yaara aa! !!


(She remembers why she don't want to get married and starts putting her thoughts into words )
(WILL I EVER GET MARRIED ?
IF YES HOW WILL HE BE ?
LIKE OTHERS.. OR JUST LIKE ME????
WHY AM I EVEN THINKING ABOUT IT
I DNT THINK I WILL IDENTIFY HIM AT FIRST PLACE IF EVER I MET HIM )

She starts singing her next para...

Us rab ne diya tha taufa humko, naa jaan paye hum fir bhi tumko
Oo Yaara ...Oo Yaara ...
Sun Yaaraaa ❤️

hope u guys will like my story .
Pls comment ur views
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Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
roshni is composing song. it's about her anxiety on her future husband.liked the lyrics of the song a lot.especially where she says that she may not identify her future husband even if she meets him.who is pyare ?he is going to sing
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
This chapter describes Roshni's anxiety as to how her future husband will be. Loved Royush bonding
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Very nice update
Lovely it update
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Beautiful update ...thanks for pm
jaanulovejaanam thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Thank u frds for commenting...
hope u will enjoy alot !
Keep reading ! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Part 2

Piyush friend Pyaare starts singing a song
tujh ko jo paaya... (he continues singing)
While piyush plays guitar tune on it .
He thinks will I ever be able to sing a song in beautiful voice like Pyaare do !
He keeps playing guitar lost in his thoughts and music!
pyare finishes the song .
piyush:are ruk Kyun gaya .., aur gaa naa !
Pyaare:bhai gana khatam Ho gaya... ab apki baari. ..!
Piyush:nahin..rehne de, ab mood nahin hai!

Pyaare:bhai apko kabhi koi ladki dil se pasand aayi?
Piyush:nahin...Kyun?
Pyaare:kuchh nahin...!
Piyush: ok!
Pyaare:koi aisi cheez jisse aap dil se chahte ho ?


piyush:matlab?
Pyaare:mmm ...apka passion ! Quality jo aap apne andar laana chahte ho
(He knows piyush passion is music..that's why he ask him)

Piyush :mmm music!!! (He gets happy )
Pyaare:to bas ho gayi apki problem solve!
Piyush:kya? Kaise?
Pyaare:ankhe band kar ke us awaz ko mehsoos karo aur gane ki koshish karo...
Piyush:nahin ..mere se nahin hoga ye sab ...!
Pyaare :try to karo pls...
piyush:no
pyaare: plsss bhai...mere liye...
he makes puppy face requesting him
piyush smiles and agrees
Ok ..ok ..par sirf ek baar..!
Pyaare:done!
Piyush closes his eyes and listens beautiful music as if his soul mate singing a song...
he starts listening the song and sings...

mein tenu samjhawan ki ...
na tere bin lagda ji...


Scene shifts to roshni house,
she was singing...
tu ki jaa ne pyaar mera mein karun intezaar tera ..
tu dil to yu jaan meri..
jaan meri!!

Scene shifts to piyush room
he keep listening the song
and sing the same song ...
He finishes the song
and Pyaare clapped for him...
Pyaare:waah! Bhai kya gaate ho !
piyush:chal chal ...jhoot na bol jyada. .digest nahin hoga !

Scene shifts To roshni
After finishing her song
Her family clapped for him
her sis says::ammazing dii. ..Oncemore

roshni:nahin bas...
Now its dinner time...



Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
piyush playing guitar while pyare sings was nice.piyush wants to sing like pyare.loved pyare encouraging piyush to bring out his singing talent. piyush feeling his soulmate singing when he closed his eyes and singing the same song was lovely.nice song selection.waiting for royush meeting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Lovely character sketch
Interesting start dear
Liked it !!
Well written
Looking forward to the update.
@jasminerahul
Thanks for the pm dear
:))

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