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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Amazing update...Sid feels guilty about hurting Roli...conversation between Rosid was nice..but Khushi is soo cheap...I hate her...pic's was nice...now eagerly waiting for next update.
Edited by ayeshakapoor - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Awesome one...beautiful images...so khushi is obsessed with Sid...and she died in the accident ..so bad. .but waiting for further ones to know how will they deal with this problem
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update loved Rosid scene cute & emotional so finally the truth is revealed let's see how Rosidi fights with khushi's ghost waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
kushi is such pyscho
poor rosid hope they came out soon from situation.
i think because of ring only happeining hope they solve it
Rosid scene was sweet update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Interesting update dear. Kushi is really disgusting. So because of that ring only these many happened. Great work dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

what a crazy person after sid...
no self respect..
love is heart
not obsession..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is the ending part of this horror fan fiction. Please do comment & mention your favorite scene.


Part 7

Prem calls up Sunny. He said, "We need your help. Can you come home?"

Sunny: Of course, I will. I want to see Sidhant.

Prem: It is regarding Sidhant, we need your help.

Sunny: May I know what is the matter?

Prem: I cannot tell you over the phone but I can only tell you that his life is in danger & his image is at stake.

Sunny: Don't worry, I will come.

Sunny comes home.

Roli, Simar, & Prem tell Sunny, "Khushi has become a ghost & is troubling us."

Roli shows him the ring & asked, "This is the ring which Khushi gave my husband & asked him to keep it as her last wish right?"

Sunny: Yes. How do you know?

Roli: Sidhant told me everything about Khushi. We have been experiencing the ghostly incidents ever since we got married. She had also entered his body & made him behave violently. We called the tantrik & could somehow free him from that spirit. But she can come yet again. She told us that Sidhant played with her life. He spent a night with her & misbehaved with her but we didn't believe.

Simar: But our dad got carried away.

Sunny: Sidhant didn't do any such thing with her. When I came, Sidhant pushed her out. Rajendra uncle there? I want to talk to him.

Prem: Yes, he is inside.

Sunny meets Rajendra.

He said, "I have come here to tell you about Sidhant."

Rajendra: Yes, tell me.

Sunny: Sidhant is innocent. He never misbehaved with Khushi. He has never loved her in his life. She was trying to seduce him but he didn't give in. He ousted her out of the house. Then Khushi met with an accident. We admitted her to the hospital but could not save her. She had given this ring to Sidhant and accept it as her last wish. Sidhant did not want to keep that ring. I had told him to keep that thinking that Khushi's soul will rest in peace. But I was wrong. Khushi's soul is lying. Please don't believe it.

Rajendra: Thank God, you told me the truth. You have freed me from this burden, my boy.

Premar

Prem: It's been a long time. We never had time for ourselves.

Simar: What about Sidhant?

Prem: Roli will take care of him. Shall we go now?

Simar: Fine.

Both of them go for the candlelight dinner.

Rosid

Sidhant lies on Roli's abdomen. Roli caresses his head and hair.

Sidhant: I had never believed in ghosts and evil spirits but now I believe in that.

Roli: When you believe in ghosts, why not believe in God who can redeem you from all the sorrows? If you remember him with all your heart, then He will definitely listen to you. Come, let's go home.

Sidhant & Roli are on the way. Both see the ghostly incident and run. Khushi's spirit chases them. Sidhant and Roli reach home and go to the puja room. Khushi gets irked. She starts destroying things at home thinking Roli will come out and she can attack Sidhant yet again.

Roli: Khushi, you can do whatever you want. I am not scared of you. Even if you break everything here, I don't care. If you are so proud of your powers, come inside the Shiva temple and test it.

Khushi breaks the photo-frame of Sidhant and Roli and puts the fire.

Roli: You burn the entire house and also my body but I will never leave my husband.

Khushi breaks the window panes but was unable to do anything more.

Roli is happy. She said, "Look Khushi could not do anything to us in Shiva temple."

She searches for the thread that tantrik had put on his wrist.

Roli: Never remove this thread even by mistake, else you will be inviting trouble.

Sidhant: I will never remove it for the sake of our love.

Roli: God is so kind that he has protected us. Pray to God with all your heart, even 1000 Khushi's won't be able to touch you. I will give you the puja books, you be praying, I will bring Bhagwad Geeta Book & come.

Roli goes to bring the book. Sidhant folds his hand & is about to pray.

He then hears a voice screaming Sidhant shouts "Roli" & comes out of the temple and runs to see what happened. The thread which Tantrik gave gets struck in the broken door & gets cut. Roli goes to the puja room & gets shocked on not finding Sidhant there. She goes to the room & sees him possessed yet again.

Khushi: Have you seen my power? I mimicked your voice & made your husband come out of the temple. I also ensured that his thread is cut so I can get inside his body.

Roli: Deceiving others does not make you powerful. It is cheating.

Khushi: I am not a cheat. Your husband is a cheat. He has played with my life.

Roli: Don't to dare to accuse my husband falsely. I will not spare you.

Khushi laughs evilly. She said, "What can you do to me? You have got limited powers. You are made up of mud."

Roli: God has made everyone out from the dust but your body has got mixed with the dust. You don't have the body or the brain. You only depend on others body. But I have got the body, shape & brain. Most importantly, God is on my side.

Khushi: Whatever it is, but you are a weak woman but I am a spirit. I am beyond man & woman.

Roli: You are not a spirit. You are an evil spirit. Don't underestimate the power of a woman. If the so-called weak woman calls God, the entire earth will start trembling. It is the woman who gives birth to man as well as a woman. One of the ladies' names is the Narmada. She had made the sun stop. Savitri had fought with Yamraj & brought her husband to life. I can go to any extent to save my husband.

Khushi: You can fight with Yamraj & save your husband but not Khushi. By today's sunset, your husband will not be able to speak. He will get paralyzed tomorrow. Then he will never be able to move. On the third day, he will become blind & won't be able to see you. On the 4th day, he will be fighting for his survival. He will suffer so much that you won't be able to do anything. Then slowly & gradually, I will snatch your husband right under your nose & you won't be able to do anything.

Roli starts praying to God. Khushi laughs evilly. She said, "If you claim that God is with you then save your husband from my clutches. Save your sindoor & mangalsutra. That is my challenge."

Roli: No matter how much ever powerful evil spirit you are, you cannot do anything to us.

She takes the car & goes to the temple. Rajendra, & Sujata also go to the temple at their house & pray for Sidhant's well-being. Prem & Simar go to the temple after having their romantic moments.

Roli car meets with a small accident but she escapes from the accident & goes to the temple.
Roli: Oh Lord, I have been worshipping you since childhood. I have not asked anything from you till now but today, I am asking you. The spirit has made fun of your powers & have threatened that she will make me a widow. Please save my husband, not as per my wish but as per your will.
She goes to the river & prays for Sidhant.

At home. Munshi goes to Rajendra. He said, "Sidhant is on a critical condition. He is unable to speak & see, He is struggling to breathe."

Rajendra goes to Sidhant's room & tries to revive him.

Roli, Simar & Prem are praying for Sidhant's recovery.

Meanwhile, Sidhant tries to get up though he is unable to see. He goes out pushing Rajendra but suddenly he finds himself paralyzed. He falls down from the staircases. Rajendra, Sujata, Janmalal, & Meena come there. They carry him to the room.

Roli: Lord, don't you have compassion towards me even now? If there is something lacking in my prayers, I will make it stronger.

She rolls on the ground with folded hands chanting Om Namo Shiva.

Roli again goes to Shiva idol & said, "Please save my husband, else I will bang my head before you & kill myself."

She starts banging her head before the idol. A small boy in the temple goes to Roli & gives her prasad, vibhuti & the sindoor. He said, "Give this to the person who is suffering, That person will recover soon."

Sidhant is not able to speak, see or express. Rajendra, Janmalal, Sujata, & Meena are sitting beside him.

Roli, Simar & Prem get into the car & rush towards home. Roli is in search of prasad but does not find it. She asks Simar, "I had given you the Prasad as I wanted to buy something else."

Simar searches for it but does not find. She then recollects what had happened.

Khushi laughs. She said, "I will tell you what I did. When your driver was driving fast, I had caused a car accident and made the prasad, the Sindoor, & vibhuti vanish. I am very smart."

Flashback

Roli, Simar & Prem were rushing together to their house after the car accident. Khushi had killed the car driver. They had seen the sun setting but they didn't give up. Though Roli, Simar & Prem were badly bruised because of the thorns, they still kept on to the fight. All 3 of them reach home.

Roli's one part of the saree was torn. It had the Prasad, Sindoor & Vibhuti.

Flashback ends

Khushi: You guys are so stupid that none of you understood my game. Now the day is not very far. I will be fulfilling my revenge & will be resting in peace hereafter. This will break your arrogance.

Sidhant's mouth starts bleeding. Roli goes near him.

Roli: That is not the end. Just one strong prayer is more than enough.

Roli starts praying. All the family members support Roli in her prayers.

The background song is

he prlayankar Bhim bhyankar

he shiv Shankar data

aag lagi mere jivan me

rakhna laaj vidhata

Roli pleads before the Lord. All members are joining their hands. Tears are flowing from Prem & Simar's eyes. Sidhant is struggling. Khushi is laughing evilly.

jago mahadev jago tripurari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

raksha karo he trishuldhari

tumko pukare ek dukhiyari nari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

raksha karo he trishuldhari

tumko pukare ek dukhiyari nari

jago jago jago

Sidhant's mouth continues to bleed. Sun is setting. Khushi is still laughing. But family does not give up

mere sindur ki shan nibhana

mangalsutr ki laaj bachana

mere sindur ki shan nibhana

mangalsutr ki laaj bachana

tum pe hain bhari aaj jimmedari

aan meri rakhna bhole bhandari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

raksha karo he trishuldhari

tumko pukare ek dukhiyari nari

jago ho jago jago

Sidhant is in the same condition. Khushi makes the top ceiling rotate. It seemed that it is going to fall on Sidhant. Khushi laughs evilly.

vikat ghadi mere pati par padi hain

char kadam par maut khadi hain

vikat ghadi mere pati par padi hain

char kadam par maut khadi hain

daya karo swami antaryami

aaj jarurat padi hain tumhari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

raksha karo he trishuldhari

tumko pukare ek dukhiyari nari

jago ho jago jago

The ceilings, stones, & the dry leaves fall on everyone. Khushi laughs evilly. Roli & Co still refuse to give up.

mujhko satati hain ek pretaatma

chup kyun baitho ho he parmatma

mujhko satati hain ek pretaatma

chup kyun baitho ho he parmatma

fenko chingari bhage atyachari

kato mere jivan ki kaari andhiyari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

jago mahadev jago tripurari

raksha karo he trishuldhari

tumko pukare ek dukhiyari nari

jago jago jago

The sun is close to setting now. Khushi is happy. Roli crawls inside the puja room.

om namh shivay, om namh shivay

om namh shivay, om namh shivay

namh shivay, namh shivay

namh shivay, namh shivay

namh shivay, namh shivay

Roli falls before God. Shiva & Hanuman go near Khushi who sees them & runs away. Shiva's Trishul chases Khushi at her secret places. Khushi's soul goes to the graveyard. The Trishul pierces the soul & it goes with the dust. Sidhant finally recovers.

Suddenly, Roli hears Sidhant's voice. The family is happy that Sidhant has recovered & has become fine like before.

Roli goes to Sidhant & hugs him emotionally.

Roli: You are perfectly alright now. Lord Shiva has cured you.

Sidhant: Yes, you are right. I was not believing in God. I was thinking he does not exist but I was wrong. Nothing is impossible for the Lord. He is the most powerful spirit.

Both go to the temple & pray to God. The pujari & tantrik bless the couple.

Simar: Roli has got strong faith. I had got baffled when we lost the Prasad, Sindoor, & the vibhuti.

Prem: That is why Sidhant considers her as everything to him.

Sidhant and Roli come home.

Rajendra: Roli, your prayers have saved us from this possible disaster. Your faith has also proved me wrong when I believed the ghost.

Janmalal: Now that evil spirit won't trouble us further. So no one will talk about that witch again.

Everyone agrees. They live happily ever after.

THE END

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Superb lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
in the first pic shoab is prem while dheeraj is prem in this ff. roli sunny edit was superb.roli advising Sid to pray was nice .Puja room scene was nice.perfect pic.premar candle light dinner was nice .perfect pic.Rosid khushi scene was emotional. nice edit .roli Lord shiv edit was beautiful. happy that Rosid have escaped from khushi. premar talking about Rosid was nice.nice ending
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Awesome update...favourite scene is where roli knows about khushi and decided to support Sid

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