FORTUITOUS LOVE Completed pg29 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Guys please help me out .
Im not able to give title for this ss.
Can you suggest me please.
PM me your opinion
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Eagerly waiting fr update dear...title??? Ha ha im very poor in giving titles...nw u r also in confusion like me😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeyrosid-6

Eagerly waiting fr update dear...title??? Ha ha im very poor in giving titles...nw u r also in confusion like me😉


Yes dear im too confused to give title.
But prasanna di gave a title"FORTUTIOUS LOVE".
And I think this will be perfect for my ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya2397


Yes dear im too confused to give title.
But prasanna di gave a title"FORTUTIOUS LOVE".
And I think this will be perfect for my ss

Wow superb title👏👏 i lyk it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well with all your support I am starting this SS. please bear me😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATE:1


Beautiful multi storied bulding with all facilities. It has got 2 blocks.
Now we will go to meet a family in 1st block 3rd floor triple bedroom flat.


One woman looking traditional serving coffee to her husband.
Man smiled at his wife.Taking coffee from her hands enquired about her daughter.
Woman: oh no why do you ask about her. she will near the computer till late night. Go to bed at mid night and will get up around 10 in the morning. I cant bear this girl. she will never listen to me.
Man: He smiled wide enough to irritate his wife more.
Ok what about goutham.
Woman: he is quite opposite to her. though he is younger than her he is disciplined. he got up early morning itself and went to play.
Someone came in with sweat all over his body.
Boy: hello pappa. good morning.
Man: hai goutham. good morning.
Just then land line ringed.
Man picked the call and greeted the other on line.
Other person: namaste jamanlalji. how are you? I dailed up to you to talk about today's meeting. Today I will not be able to attend the meeting. so can you please post pone the meeting.
Jamanlal: ok sure as per your convinence.
Jamanlal cut the call.
Jamanlal: Meenaji today you asked to take me to temple right. get ready we will go.
Meena: oh sir seems to be free today.
Jamanlal: ha meenaji. I had meeting today but it got cancelled.
Meena: ok then we will go for temple and then I prepare breakfast.
Goutham: maa then pleasedont call di. she will get ready till afternoon.
Meena and jamanlal laughed.
Meena: ok goutham you go and get ready.
Saying this Sujatha went to her daughter's room.
Room is not well arranged but not shabby too.
Sujatha: oh god when will this girl learn to get up.
saying this she pulled the blanket from her face.
Girl mubling lazily pulled back the blanket again.
Maa please let me sleep for some more time.
Sujatha: Ok fine today your pappa is taking us to movie. then if you dont get up we will leave you and go your wish.
Girl got up immediately and asked really.
Sujatha laughed.
Sujatha: no Roli we are going for temple get redy soon.
she forced Roli into bathroom.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
wow...this Roli is looking just like me..haha, loved it...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
UPDATE:2


Roli lazily walked inside the wash room.
Sujatha left from her room with a smile.


Down Jamanlal and Meena are waiting for their children.
Goutham came and he too waited for her di. In the mean time goutham started talking about morning exercise.
Goutham: pappa you know today I found some interesting guy. May be he is 3 or 4 yrs elder to me. but he is so friendly.
Jamanlal: oh then you found some company to play. good
Goutham: ha pappa he is too good.
Sujatha: who is he goutham. i have never seen you praising about a person like that.
Goutham: ha maa. His name is...
Roli came down saying: His name is monster's friend.
Goutham: di I will not leave you now.
He tried to catch roli but she escaped and ran the whole house.
Jamanlal: Beta dont run you will get hurt.
Meena: ok both of you stop fighting. Remember till we go to mandir no breakfast. If you both want to starve you can fight.
By now roli went behind jamanlal to hide herself from her brother.
She cornered her tounge out slightly.
Goutham: now you are saved but remember no one can save you from me after we return.
Roli: oh is it let's see who will not spare whom.

All left to temple.
Meena and jamanlal are doing pooja and went to do rounds around the temple.
Roli and goutham denied to do that and sat on the steps.
Roli is playing with mobile while Goutham is seeing here and there to kill time.
Goutham found someone he know.
Goutham: di be here only I saw one of my school friend and will come back in few mins.
Roli nodded not even looking at him busy playing.
Goutham went from there to meet his friend.
After few min roli game was over and it will take time to gain lives.
she pouted and was waiting for her parents are brother to come.
She waited for few mins. after sometime when she lost her patience she walked searching for his brother.
She was seeing here and there while walking and bumped to someone and fell down.
Roli(holding her hip):ouch...
Someone forwarded hands to help her.
Roli without even seeing the person gave her hands and got up.
She got up and was cleaning her hands.
Some one from far beta what are you doing there. come on lets leave.
Person said sorry for roli and before she respond to him he left the place.
Roli saw only his back half concentrating on her pain.
Goutham came from behind and hit on her shoulder slightly.
With this roli turned back.
Goutham: di what are you doing here. come lets go.
Roli and goutham left the place.




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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Superb start dear waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
UPDATE:3


Now lets meet the other family in another block in 4th floor.
A man in middle 50s entered the house.
Some elderly person is sitting in the hall reading some spiritual book.
Person: namaste mataji. how are you?
Mataji: ravikanth ji app. come inside. Im fine how are you?
Ravikanth: Im fine mataji. I have come here to speak withsir about the new deal.
Mataji: ok just a second. I call him.
rajender beta... rajender beta... Ravikanthji has come to meet you.
Rajender walked past with mataji's call.
Rajender: namaste. what's the matter. you have come here.
Ravikanth: sir I want to discuss about the new deal with you.
Rajender: But I asked the other company CEO to post pone the meeting for tomorrow.
Ravikanth: Yes sir but I want your signon these papers regarding that deal details.
Rajender: oh ok
he was going through those papers.
Boy came sat next to mataji wishing everyone.
Boy: Namste uncle.
Ravikanth: hai sid.
Sid: you came aloneuncle where is Rohan.
Ravikanth: no beta he did not come.I came on business purpose.
Sid: oh ok uncle see you later. bye.
Ravikanth: bye beta.
Sid walked towards his room.
Ravikanth; these type of kids are really rare.
You have brought him up well desciplined.
Mataji and Rajender gave a proud smile.
Rajender signed those papers and Ravikant left their hose with those papers.


In sid's room
Sid is listening to some music.
His mother came in juice glass.
Sujatha: sid.
Sid looked at her and gave a warm smile.
Sujatha: gave juice glass to him and was waiting for him to drink.
Sujatha: sid are you tensed about your results.
Sid: nodded in acceptance.
Sujatha: dont worry sid you will definitely score good ranking.
Sid patted his cheeks with a smile and left taking glass from him.


In jamanlal's house
Both roli and goutham are teasing each other and fighting.
Meena: Roli what is this like a kid.
And remember today evening is your result.
Roli:hmm Let it be.why to get tensed when I have done well.
Meena: no one can change you.
Jamanlal Roli and Goutham shared a playful smile at each other


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