PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shabeena25

awesome update waiting for long time...

ple yr update daily...

Thank you dear...😊
Will try to update daily...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: justchillalways

Awesome Part Asha. Very nice. Premar enjoying their company and simar trying to be normal is nice.

Thank you dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE: Here is the next part... Pls provide feedback. Hope i met your expectations.. Ignore if any mistakes.

PART 20:

Simar is sitting in her room doing almost nothing as she was lost in her day dreams, thinking about her handsome husband and how sweet he was when he lied about her pasta being delicious so he wouldn't hurt her feeling.

The way he gazed into her eyes, there was so much passion in his eyes she couldn't understand fully but it made her heart go wild, then his touch... her face flushed as she remembered how she shivered to that simple touch. What is happening to me? This was a strange experience for her.

All today after coming from office she could only think of him why is she missing him so much? She was lost in her thoughts when Prem entered the room by carrying some box with him.

He calls Simar, She turned to him and instantly her face brightened with a big smile that made Prem feel relieved, this is the first time he came home early and brought something for her and he was very hesitant to do so afraid of her reaction, what if she thought i am being too forward?

But that smile told she is happy to see him. Prem ji what happened you came quickly, don't u have any work? She teased him a little.

"No no i have work but i thought to show you how good pasta tastes like, i will help you learn" He said holding away the bag he is carrying

Is it only for me aren't you going to have with me?

That's the plan i wanted to have with you. So, let's have it he said with a smile as she wanted to have it with him

They are talking happily and having Pasta but Prem gets a call from his office and he need to leave

A man cannot have food with his wife peacefully he murmured. Sorry Simar i need to leave its urgent.

Its ok Prem ji i can understand work is important. We can have food together later also now you go.

Ok simar bye. Take care don't wait for me have food take tablets and sleep

She smiles and says Ok Prem ji

After Prem leaves Simar gets a call and she says to the person on other side that she will come and meet in half an hour

UNKNOWN PLACE:

Simar: Who are you? Why did you call me here?

Hi I am Surbhi. You don't know me but I know you. I called you to tell very important matter regarding Prem

What you want to tell me about Prem ji?

I know you don't remember anything but you need to know this so only I called you. I and Prem love each other. Simar is shocked. We thought to marry also but because of Mataji without any choice Prem married you, he don't love you. You also know this, when Prem proposed me in hotel you listened to it and left from that place at that time only you met with an accident and forgot everything.

Simar is having tears in her eyes.😭

He thought to give divorce but it didn't happen and now since it's not good for your health prem is not saying anything for you. So, only I thought to say. I hope you understand our love. Please leave Prem and go I cannot live without him he also cannot leave without me.

Without saying anything simar left from that place💔

Surbhi (St): I did my work now Simar will never come close to you Prem. You rejected me I will make sure you will come back to me Prem.

PREMAR ROOM:

Simar will be sitting on bed thinking about Surbhi's words and tears will be flowing from her eyes without her knowledge itself.😭

Simar (St): Prem ji didn't tell me anything about Surbhi. Do I need to believe Surbhi or Prem ji? How can I believe some stranger words? I have full faith on Prem ji if anything like that is there he will definitely tell me. He also said he will tell tomorrow everything whatever happened. So I will wait till tomorrow. Then also if he didn't say then I will ask by myself.

Prem enters the room and sees simar is thinking something very deeply

He snaps simar from her thoughts and asks what happened what are you thinking?

Simar says nothing Prem ji.

Prem: Simar why are your eyes red? Did you cry? What happened tell me?

Simar: No prem ji I didn't cry something went in my eyes so only they are red

Prem: Are you saying truth? Seriously you didn't cry right?

Simar: No Prem ji I am fine

Prem: Thank god. I can't see tears in your eyes Simar. I should always see only smile on your face. If you are happy I will be happy.😊

Simar smiles😊 and says I am fine Prem ji you don't need to worry. You go and fresh up I will bring food for you.

Prem: You sit. I will go and bring food for both of us. Since everyone slept no problem will be to get and come.

Simar smiles😊 and says Ok. Prem goes to bring food.

Simar (St): I don't know whatever you are showing on me is concern or love but it's not fake it's true. I believe you with whole heart Prem ji. Hope tomorrow will clear all my doubts and it will be new beginning in our lives.

So, what happens next day will it be a new beginning in PREMAR life let's wait and see

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Posted: 10 years ago
Romance and Suspense. You are a brilliant writer Asha. Cannot wait for the next part. Thanks for making this happen this way.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice asha we want more romance scene..
i really fall onthis script and forget about ssk.../..

one more req asha ...please try to update bw 9 to 11 pm ...its too late i cant read at night mrng only i can read...

so ple try to update bw this time...

if its not convnt u dont bother update whenever u get time...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update :)
Plz update next part 21 soon dear plz.
Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its sooo nice asha...
next part soon plzzz
want 2 see twists nd turns😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys Thank you very much for ur feedback.
I am very sorry i won't be able to update for today as i m having heavy work in my office.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122

Hey guys Thank you very much for ur feedback.

I am very sorry i won't be able to update for today as i m having heavy work in my office.


No Worries Asha, Please take your time. But we got addicted to your FF that we are very eager for the next part. Thank you for doing this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
ur an awesome writer asha
its awesome updates
update next part soon
love premar in ur FF than the premar in ssk
such beautifully ur portraying them😛

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