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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 22

ROSID returned from the memories of the contest and smiled.

Sid: Roli exam preparation.

ROSID laughed.

ROli: Yes Siddhantji, we thought to initiate exam preparating but in actual our love...

SId: Our love.. WHy you stopped? Still feeling shy or what. Yes. Our love got its shape...




Roli was sitting worried when SId returned from office with set of books in front of her in the table.

Sid: Roli...

No Reply.

SId: ROli.. What happend?

Roli: Siddhantji, i am worried.

Sid: That i can see on seeing your face. But for what.

Roli: For these books. Mataji told me to write the exams this year which i discontinued because of our marriage. But i did not attend the classes also, so i am wondering how to understand all these..

Roli said widening her eyes.

Sid laughed.

Roli: Why are you laughing at me now?

Sid: Then what. I thought you are afraid in the night alone. But now understood you are afraid with books too.

Roli: Very funny! Only you know its difficulty if you read all these.

Sid with a smile moved from there and went to washroom.

Then returned chaning to casual dress and opened his wardrobe. He bring some file.

Sid showed it to Roli where she was shocked knowing he is from same branch of studies with top marks.

Roli; You belongs to same group. You never told me.

She asked with surprise.

Sid: ROli, I too was not knowing you are in the same group. Infact we never talk about this earlier.

Roli: Well. THen can you help me.

SId: Sure tell me what help you need.

ROli: Can you teach me. Please.

Sid: Sure. But will you honor the words of teacher. Remember we will be guru & sishya once studies started and you need to listen whatever i tell you.

Roli: Siddhantji, you always tries to take advantage of my fear. Ok. I agree.

Sid: Ok. First go down and bring hot cup of coffee to me.

Roli: Ok.

Roli went down with irritation that he is taking advantage of her necessity to learn.

Roli was preparing coffee while she remembered what he said. Hot cup of coffee.

Roli to herself: So you want Hot cup right Siddhantji. Let me give you.

Roli heat the cup slightly and kept it in the tray. Then filled the coffee in the cup.

ROli took the tray to Sid.

Roli: Siddhantji, Hot cup Coffee is ready.

Sid did not turn towards the tray and touched the cup and lift it.

He jolt his hands due to hot cup and all the hot coffee drop on his hands.

Sid: Ooch..

Roli was only thinking slightly heated cup with be touched by him and never expecting that more hotter coffee will drop in his hands.

Roli: Siddhantji. I am sorry. I did not expect this.

Tears filled in ROli's eyes.

Sid hold his hands & went to wash his hands.

When he returned ROli hold his hands and look into it. It was completely turned pink.

Tears were rolling down her cheeks and dropped on his hands.

Sid: ROli why are you crying now. Its ok.

ROli: Sorry Siddhantji. As you said Hot cup, i slightly heat the cup to tease you and bring the coffee. I never expected you

Sid: Its ok. Dont cry for this. I can handle

Roli: How can you handle?

Roli rushed to take the medicine box and took out the ointment for burn.

ROli hold his hands and started applying it.



SId: Ooch!

Roli: Siddhantji! Is it burning. I am very sorry. it is purely my mistake. I was not suppose to do that.

Roli started crying badly.

Sid: ROli!! Look at me. It is nothing. It will be cured. Dont cry. Look at me.

Roli was unable to hold her and lean on him and started crying on his shoulders.

ROli hands wrapped around his waist.

Siddhant was pleasantly surprised.

He was feeling more happy about her joining his shoulders instead of feeling the burning he got in his hands.

Sid too wrapped his hands around her and hug tightly.

Sid: ROli, stop crying like this. See nothing happend to me..

Roli got consol by him in a while.

Then ROli realised she is hugging him and also his hands around her.

Roli lift her face and looked at him.

They had eyelock for a while.

Sid pulled her more closer and hug tightly.

ROli too lean on his shoulder and tighten her grip around him.

They shared their first hug..




Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i really missed badly all ur updates from morning...& now after reading them, i'm jumping with joy...everything is new...that contest is awesome...loved it banu👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow banu u r fab writer u know that what ur reader want in ur ff and every time u give 100% satisfaction to them great work dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mvlakshmiprasan

i really missed badly all ur updates from morning...& now after reading them, i'm jumping with joy...everything is new...that contest is awesome...loved it banu👏


Thanks a lot dear. I too was missing you the whole day.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetal1979

wow banu u r fab writer u know that what ur reader want in ur ff and every time u give 100% satisfaction to them great work dear


Thanks a lot dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi sis...read all ur updates...They r fab n awesome...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi friends
Today after giving almost 10 updates I am here not going to give update as usual.

Instead I am going to tell some fact which myself just realised and thought of sharing with you friends.

May be childish thing to share. But still I thought of doing it.

I normally go with different concepts, different storyline to the extent possible.

In that as you all know Love forever the 10th ff was one among which was covering the story in memories & flashback. This story love is not a game is also doing the same. I got confused. Why I took same pattern in both. While thinking I got this spark.

Differences between two though same pattern:

love forever denoted as LF & love is not a game denoted as LNG

1) LF start with separation & LNG start with consummation

2) LF gets its memories with missing feelings & LNG gets its memories with enjoyment feelings

3) LF premar started their love after Rosid initiated their marriage & LNG premar already love & rosid united for premar

4) LF nok jhok then love in college(though not explained in detail) & LNG marriage then nok jhok

5) LF started with missing day memories & go backwards their married life, then SR & last the marriage & LNG started with consummation but memories where not backward instead forward from marriage to consummation day.

Am I boring too much friends or telling something which was already noticed & understood by you all. I don't know.

But myself on real using these points was really surprised as 100% was not preplanned to show some difference like this.😉
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Contest updates ws superb 👍🏼
Hayee their first hug and roli cares for sid ws well written didi 🤗

Abt fun facts nicely explaind didi 😉
Edited by -Sakthi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sakthi-

Contest updates ws superb 👍🏼

Hayee their first hug and roli cares for sid ws well written didi 🤗


Thanks sakthi dear. No words about the facts!!! Did you noticed already?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa


Thanks sakthi dear. No words about the facts!!! Did you noticed already?

I didnt noticd it didi but now i realised it aftr readng ur fun facts 😉

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