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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates Banu 👏
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Awesome update Banu 👏


Thanks ani dear.
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Chapter 22

Roli was on SIddhant chest with deep thinking. He was wondering what is bothering Roli that much. He lift her face to look at her eyes and with a puzzle..

Siddhant asked 'Roli, what are you thinking deeply?'

Roli replied 'Siddhantji, I am thinking something for which i want your opinion too."

Siddhant said 'Of course, tell me. I will give my opinion for sure'

Roli said 'Siddhantji, why cant we ask Simar didi for Premji?'

Siddhant eyes widened 'Roli, really a good idea. You know I even seen some sort of spart in both their eyes when they face each other. Even i tried to ask Prem once at the time of our marriage.'

Roli expressed 'Is it! Then what he said'




Siddhant was asking Prem when he noticed Prem eyes were gazing at Simar at the time of ROSID marriage 'Prem, What is the matter? It seems you like Simar didi it seems. Shall i start calling her bhabhi instead of didi?'

Prem blushed & replied 'Siddhant, I cant deny that i dont have interest on her. But you remember what she said when we went to their room for asking Roli's hands for you. She wish to finish her PG and then only she will think of her marriage. Let see to this later'




Roli was excited to know this. 'Siddhantji, you never told this told me. Anyway this month didi's exams getting completed, let us initiate the talk with our family'

Siddhant replied 'Yes ROli. Lets go to Delhi this weekend together. ANyway Simar didi sorry bhabhi as well as prem was worried about us. So they will be happy to see us together again. Also we will first talk to both families'

Roli said 'Good idea. Lets go to Delhi this weekend. I too feel bad that i went 1st time to my house after marriage but without you. My parents too were very upset. They too will feel nice.'

ROSID decided to go to Delhi that weekend. They were eagerly waiting for the day to come. But they did not inform their families about their coming. In the meantime, the car too delivered to Siddhant well service after the accident which was the one got damaged badly on that day.

ROSID started their journey together with excitement towards Delhi. They played the same CD and started singing together with it for hours together sharing fun, teasing each other, all the way.

But when the treee where the car hit the tree was crossed Roli face expression was changed remembering that day which was noticed by Siddhant.

Siddhant asked 'Roli what happend? Are you ok? Oh! did you remembered that day accident. Dont ever think about it as you said we need to forget those days'

Roli replied 'Yes I do. But you know the pain i was feeling on that day seeing you hit badly in the tree and you were unconscious inside the car. You know all the passengers in the bus were floating different opinion on what might have happend to you. I was not alive in real till doctor confirmed you are normal.' Though tried to control, tears were rolling from her eyes to cheeks.

Siddhant stopped the car in a side and pulled her towards him and consol her for sometime. She lean on his shoulders and shed some tears till she come out of that bitter thoughts for a while. Then she turned normal. Siddhant gave her some water to drink. Roli gave a smile assuring she is ok. Then they continued their journey...
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Chapter 23

ROSID reached BW house. Being weekend all the family members including Prem were in the hall talking with each other with a cup of tea on their hands. They were excited on seeing ROSID together and infact for the 1st time after their marriage.

Mataji instructed Sujatha to take aarti to ROSID as they are coming as couple for 1st time and they were given warm welcome inside the house. ROSID took blessings of the elders touching their feet. Prem hug Siddhant.

Mataji asked 'Siddhant, finally you remembered all of us after at least these many days'

Siddhant replied 'Mataji, we never forget to remember now. We are away which does not mean we forget everyone.'

Mataji said 'Well. I wonder how our Siddhant learned talking so matured'

Siddhant expressed 'Mataji, We have come here mainly to talk some thing more matured which i feel you all will be happy knowing that'

mataji puzzled 'Siddhant what it is? ANy good news' she asked looking at ROSID.

Roli blushed hearing that while Siddhant replied 'Mataji, that good news you will hear soon. but now we have come to talk about our Prem bhaiya marriage'

Prem asked 'Siddhant, about my marriage!!! What are you going to talk about it?

Siddhant replied 'Prem, We feel Roli's sister Simar will be suiting you more as a life partner. We have come to talk about that only' he said searching for his expression.

Prem blushed while Mataji said 'Siddhant, good idea infact. I too like Simar a lot. Also i am still holding guilt feeling for asking Roli's hands while Simar being elder was their in the house unmarried. I will feel better if this is done. By the way, Prem are you interested?'

Siddhant said 'Mataji! what are you asking him? just look at his glowing face hearing this which reveal the answer to us. Am i right Prem?'

Prem blushed again and smiled which confirmed his wish to other elders.

Siddhant said 'Mataji, we dont have much time as I need to join office on Monday. So lets go to Roli's house now itself and talk about this.'

All agreed and decided to have breakfast and start from there to Roli's house.

Siddhant took ROli to his room to take bath and get ready.

ROli took the changing dress from the bag and tried to move towards bathroom for a shower while Siddhant locked their room and moved towards her.

Roli entered the bathroom and tried to lock while Siddhant pushed the door and entered inside. He pulled her towards him and opened the shower which started wetting them.

ROli expressed 'Siddhant, what are you doing?'

Siddhant replied 'ROli what is this question? I am taking shower with my beautiful wife.'

Roli said 'Siddhant that is known to me. But you know we are getting late. We have come all the way here for some purpose. We need to go...'

Siddhant did not let her finish her words and hold her lips with his. THey wrap their hands around each other and continued for sometime while they remembered their first shower together...





ROSID in their bed after sharing their bed for the first time. Siddhant wake up and look at ROli with a smile. Roli was on his shoulders hugging him. He admired his sleeping wife for a while and kissed on her forehead.

Roli slowly opened her eyes and lift her face to look at him. Her face turned pink on his gaze. She moved towards his face to kiss on his cheeks and tighten her hug around him. They exchanged few more hugs & kisses for a while.

Roli said 'Siddhant shall we have shower. It is already 9 o clock now. Lets take bath and eat some breakfast.'

Siddhant replied 'Well ROli. Lets go.'

Roli tried to move from there towards bathroom while Siddhant hold her hands and said 'Roli, do remember your words. You said we have shower and i agreed for that only'

Roli blushed while he took her in his arms to have shower together..




ROSID returned back from their memories and they realised getting late. They came out finishing the bath and changed their dress.

All the BW family members including Roli landed in Diwedi house leaving them shocked. Roli's parents & Simar were happy to see ROSID together. Jamanlal & Gauri were thinking they all have come as ROSID has come to Delhi. But.. Mataji opened the topic.

Mataji said 'We all are coming here for 2nd time. 1st time we came to ask Roli's hands for Siddhant & Now we have come to ask Simar's hand for our Prem'

Simar was pleasantly shocked and went inside in shyness. ROli went behind her as a sister to share her happiness.

Jamanlal & Gauri were sitting speechless.

mataji conttinued 'I felt guilty when we asked Roli when Simar was unmarried. I would wish to correct that mistake by getting our Prem married to Simar. We all wish your consent on this'

All were happy. Jamanlal & Gauri agreed for the alliance.

Roli bring Simar to the hall again. Prem & Simar shared eyelock for a while.

Mataji again continued 'We rushed here as Siddhant & Roli need to return today to join his office tomorrow. In the meantime, i will check with pandit for auspicious day and we will arrange for their marriage by next coming auspicious day.'

Prem & SImar shared a smile while ROSID looked at each other with happiness on getting this relationship confirmed between families...
Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot ani dear.
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Chapter 24


Premar marriage date fixed. Siddhant took leave and reached Delhi with ROli 2 days before so that they can attend Mehendi and Marriage.

ROSID were in Roli's house for attending Mehandi. Mehendi designer started putting design on Simar hands.

ROSID looked at each other and smiled thinking about their Mehandi. Most funniest mehendi ever which also made Simar & Roli's parents to remember and smile.




ROSID Mehendi...

All were waiting for the designer to come and at last she came with another in gungat covering the face. Both sat beside Roli while the person with the gungat was sitting very close to Roli. When designer was putting design the other person was looking at it without talking any word or doing anything. When the deisign was almost complete including his name in the design, the person with the gungat moved towards her face and whisper on Roli's ears 'Roli, the deisgn is very nice'

That is when Roli realised the person with the gungat was none other than Siddhant. She was shocked.

He continued 'You take me to your room. I want to talk to you'

Roli was thinking what to do and got up from there and moved towards her room while Siddhant went behind her. Siddhant locked the room as soon as they went inside and removed the gungat which was covering his face.


Roli burst out laughing & said 'Siddhant, how come you and in this dress. You look very funny.'

Siddhant replied 'What to do? I wish to see your mehendi. So i contacted your designer and entered into the house with help of her'

ROli said 'Thats ok. Now just go before anyone else look at you.' She showed her tensed face.

Siddhant replied 'I will go, but only after getting something from you after taking this much risk and came all the way in this dress for you'

Roli knows Siddhant will not leave her without getting what he wants. She kept her hands with Mehendi sidewise so that the design will not get spoiled and went near to him.

Siddhant pulled her more closer holding her hips and they share eyelock for a while. Then they moved towards each other lips while Simar opened the door which was not locked properly by Siddhant.

ROSID moved apart looking at SImar and Simar burst out to laugh seeing SIddhant there in that lady dress. Not only Simar, but also Jamanlal & Gauri who were coming to that room for telling something to Roli too noticed it and chuckled.

ROSID blushed and they was feeling more embarassed.

Gauri said 'Simar give that pant shirt which we purchased for him.' and went down with Jamanlal.

Simar gave the pant shirt to him and left from there with a smile.

Siddhant went to washroom and changed the pant shirt and came out.

Roli said 'Siddhant see now everyone seen us like this. What they might have thought'

Siddhant 'Roli darling. Everything is fine in love & war. Dont worry for that & just complete which was left incomplete.' telling that he pulled her again and moved towards her lips...


After a while they came down together. Other relatives wonder who he is as none of them seen him other than Divedi family.

Jamanlal introduced him as the would be son in law to all and made him sit in the sofa. Gauri served snack to him with sweet. Siddhant was there with them till the function complete looking at Roli with love...


Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Chapter 25

Premar Marriage. All gathered in the marriage hall.

Premar entered into the mandap and performed pooja. They exchanged garlands and took 7 pheres. Then Prem filled Simar's forehead with Sindoor and put mangal sutra on her neck. All were excited on the marriage and Premar started getting blessings of the elders.


ROSID who were sitting relaxed in the chair in a side after completion of marriage remembered about their funniest happening of their marriage and smiled looking at each other.





ROSID marriage...

All were busy in the BW Family for the marriage preparation running here and there. Mataji was tensed that everything should happen smoothly. She was ordering Rajender & Sujatha to check whether all purchases, all arrangements everything is ok. Prem was checking with catering people, flower decoration people whethr everything is ready to avoid 11th hour tension.

The lunch was ready and they need to start getting ready after having lunch towards Mandir where they have arranged for the marriage. No one saw Siddhant since morning.

Mataji asked 'Prem, where is Siddhant? I have not seen him since long.'

Prem replied 'May be he is in his room busy in the phone' he said with a smile.

Mataji said 'Thats ok. But call him for having lunch. In sometime we need to start towards mandir for marriage'

Prem nod his head and headed towards Siddhant room to bring him. But he was shocked to see Siddhant missing in his room. He tried to call him, but his mobile was left in the room itself. Prem wonder where he might have gone now. He rushed down to inform others that Siddhant is missing...

All were shocked. But Prem got doubt that may be he might have gone to Roli's house to see Roli...

Mataji with hesitation called Jamanlal asking 'Hello, How everything going there?' She thought if Siddhant is there, they may tell while replying.

Jamanlal replied 'We are just getting ready. We will reach the mandir on time. Are you all ready there?'

By his reply Mataji understood Siddhant is not there and disconnected the line after few general words with Jamanlal.

All were worried and started searching every corner of house. Prem called Siddhant's friends whether he might have gone to meet some of them. But no positive replies...



At Divedi house, Simar went to see Roli in her room & found her missing.. She was shocked and informed Jamanlal & Gauri. They were wondering where she might have gone that too on her marriage day. They started searching for her here & there.




At BW house they decided to atleast inform Divedi family that SIddhant is missing otherwise they all will reach mandir. Mataji called Jamanlal again..

Mataji said 'We wish to tell you something'

Jamanlal too replied 'We too wish to tell you something'

Mataji asked 'Siddhant is missing'

Jamanlal replied 'What? ROli is also missing'

Everyone were shocked now knowing both are missing.

BW Family members rushed to Divedi house. They all were wondering where both might have gone when their marriage is in few hours. Also why when they are joining hands with the one they love...

After few minutes of tension Prem asked 'Did you searched the house well? I am getting feeling that when both are missing they should be together. Roli may not come to our house all the way. Siddhant might have come here.'

Simar replied 'But we searched each & every room other than...'

Prem & Simar 'Terrace!!!' They got spark in their mind and rushed towards the terrace.

Yes. Finally the love birds were below the water tank in the terrace sleeping in sitting posture. Siddhant was leaning on the wall while Roli was leaning on his shoulders.

IN the meantime, Mataji, Rajender, Sujatha, Jamanlal & Gauri too reached terrace & looked at sleeping ROSID. All smiled looking at each other. They wonder how to make them wake up. But without any other option Prem took that responsibility on him.

Prem called 'Siddhant, my dear brother' little loudly.

ROSID wake up suddenly on the voice and opened their eyes. They were shocked to see all family members looking at them and blushed. They came out of the water tank and looking at each other embarassed.

Prem said 'Siddhant, Tell us from when you are here while we are searching you both all over the city'

Siddhant replied 'I came yesterday night and we were talking the whole night and slept nearing dawn.'

Mataji said 'Siddhant, you both got any idea to get ready & move towards mandir for your marriage or still sleep below the water tank.'

ROSID with a smile went down with other family members to get ready and all went to mandir.

ROSID performed pooja, exchanged garlands, took 7 pheres, Siddhant filled sindoor on her forehead and put mangal sutra on her neck. ROSID took blessings of the elders.

All were excited on the marriage of this cutest couple in the world.

Prem present them the brand new car and handover the key to Siddhant as marriage gift.

ROSID get into the car and started their journey of married life which long last with its love forever...
Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Hi Friends,
Thanks for all your support given for completing my 10th FF successfully which might have been not possible without all your support and encouragement.

I tried with differnet style of depicting or narrating the story in the FF and still got equal responses from all my friends.

In this FF unlike other FFs i tried to put all the incidents of ROSID like first meet, love confession, informing their love to both families, marriage, romances everything in the form of memories or flashback connecting to current situation of the story.

This story turned to be small again with only 25 parts as the concept taken was like that...

Hope you all liked it though small.

I wish you all give your valuable comments, suggessions though it is positive or negative in nature everything is welcome so that i can implement the same in further writings.

And yes one more thing, tomorrow being Ganapathy function and further the weekends will get back to you all with my next FF by Monday (1st Sep). But still not sure whether i can hold to atleast give my concept or updates for 3 more days. Lets see 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic updates and ending didi...👍🏼
congratulation on the completion of 10th FF,,,,,,,,,,👏
waiting for the 11th FF...😛
You Rock😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sara1990

fantastic updates and ending didi...👍🏼

congratulation on the completion of 10th FF,,,,,,,,,,👏
waiting for the 11th FF...😛
You Rock😉


Thanks a lot Sara Dear. Thanks for all your support all the way for all my FFs.

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